| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 12, 2004 17:43 EDT
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^_^
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Reviewed By: solquaunlogged On: September 12, 2004 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love your story, keep up the great work.
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Title: *claps*
Reviewed By: ame-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for making another Hiei/Kagome story, there really aren't that many good ones out there! Your writing really does keep a person on the edge of their seat!! oh, and thanks for doing such an awesome job about updating! such a little wait for such a well written chapter is a great bonus to your story!
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm enjoying reading this fic, I've just recently got into IY-YYH crossovers even though I'm not completely familiar with YYH (having only seen the Toguro dark tournament arc). I like the Kur/Kag pairing, but I can see Hiei, having the same Inuyasha outcast/loner vibe being attractive to Kagome (she looks beneath the exterior, and I think his gruffness would be a challenge for her to find out why). I am actually liking this story more than "Enemies" so please update soon! (In "Enemies" Kagome and Sess seem too out of character to me... just my opinion, the story is well written and all, or I wouldn't have bothered to read another of your fics.)
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 12, 2004 15:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please e-mail me as well once you update. if you know of any good hiei/kagome fanfics please add that in as well. winter_solstce@sbcglobal.net please update soon this story is geting beter and beter every chapter you update!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 12, 2004 09:13 EDT
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hehehe.... she's gonna get a lot of questions from Kur...
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 11, 2004 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! hiei kagome! hiei Kagome! thanks for this good update and for the pie! please update soon! i can wait to see what youko dose! poor kagome haveing hentai monk and hanyou seeing her naked like that! sigh** again please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan On: September 11, 2004 08:51 EDT
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i love it! enemies with privileges as well! but you are soooo evil having a cliffy like that!! please update soon!! ja ne Aria-Chan
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 08:13 EDT
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I was reading through _Enemies with Privledges_ when I saw mention of this story in one of the A/N's. I've never read a Yu Yu/Inu fic; for that matter anything related to Yu Yu (tv, literature, etc). However, I really like this. It's made me look up the characters that are foreign to me and, as I write this, I think I'm going to have to find other Yu Yu fan fiction. You write very well: despite me not being familiar with the non-IY characters I'm still able to follow along and chuckle as I read and appreciate the fic. Many authors make it a glaring necessity to know every character inside and out; all past developements and current plot lines. This fiction is fun and captivating, yet easy going so that anime-"newbies" can still follow along and enjoy themselves. By the by, I was thinking along the same lines as Hiei; Kagome, Goddess Warrior Miko. Wears the skins of her fallen enemies and bathes in their blood! That cracked me up. I absolutely love Kag's sword. It completely suits her, as well as being Sango's taijiya flunky. Very good. Original too. Anyway. I look forward to your updates. ^^;
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Reviewed By: lehcar132 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding. It is so hard to find good Hiei / Kagome stories. You are keeping them pretty much in character too which is good because that is what I like about them : ) Thanks for the frequent updates. I look foward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 10, 2004 23:56 EDT
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*drools* I LOVE pecans . . . =D
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 10, 2004 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is interestion. your grammer is done neatly but i've seen a spelling mistake here and there. no ones perficet. (as you can see from my spelling) The creativity is wounderfull i have never read a story with such detail. (well a yyh/inu crossover fan fic anyway) I enjoy this story vary much! i give an overall rating of 10! pleaese update soon! i want to know what happens. if we can vote please make this a hiei kagome pairing! thanks for not bashing kuwabara. hes not as stupid as alot of people amke him look. at least he has some amount of dignity in this story! again please update soon! update update update update! ooo! make sesshie show up too! that would be awsome and hiei being all full of himself might try to attack him cuz sesshy tryed to hurt kags. and good job with not making kag look like a whinney helpless high school girl like she normally is! JA NE! i'll leave you alone now and shut up for my own good befor i end up geting punched.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 10, 2004 13:15 EDT
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Lol. Hiei and his sweet tooth. =D
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Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 10, 2004 10:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This latest chapter was amazing dear. Keep up the good work! I hope you have more!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in On: September 09, 2004 20:16 EDT
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characters are good, Hiei's more Hiei than in my story *grimaces* but I like how everything's unraveling! One more word, well three: Update soon please.
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