| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 14, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was a little short and... well lets say not suprising. So i gave it a 9 for enjoyment this time. about your daghter in the authers notes, thats has got to be the cutest thing ive ever heard! she'd made a wounderfull magna author one day. give your family my gratitued for keeping you on your writing. The story, 'i thought hell was suposed to burn.' yes, ive read it many times myself and have been trying to get the author to update. but for what ever reasen, i think its been abandoned. its the best hiei/kagome pairing ive come across. on another note, Yay! finally some hiei kag in the next chappie! please update really soon! Ja Ne!
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Sly_Hanyou On: September 14, 2004 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics kick soo much ass!!! You've gotta keep writing!!! Tese get more and more amusing each time I read them! Keeo going and I can't wait for the lemon!! I won't let my 14-year old little sis watch the venture brothers either, hell, I'm 16 and I don't watch that lame crap. But, we do watch Futurama and Aqua Teen. not to mention the anime.... Hmm... *gives a choco statue of Youko to the authoress* Here ya go.
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan On: September 14, 2004 12:00 EDT
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Very nice again!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 10:27 EDT
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I Love ur fic!!!! PLEASE update soon. Another fic that's kinda good is: Those We Leave Behind by Minerva519. It's funny! ^-^ Please update soon, i like the hiei/kagome pairing! so kawaii! ^-^
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: September 13, 2004 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, for a while I was wondering what the pairing would be, but the last two chapters gave me enough info to find out. I'll get to the point; I like your story. It seemed kind of silly at first (high school girls, high school girls), but later it got cool. Have that update out soon.
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 21:34 EDT
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Thanks for the character brief in the beginning of the chapter. I had been looking at different websites, gathering information and deducing information on each YuYu character. It was nice to see that your offered character info matched what I had found out; so thanks. :) Great update(s), I'm truly enjoying this story. I was surprised (call me blind) that Fluffy-sama showed up: can't have an IY fiction without his dazzling personality. I think I'm going to check out the "By Any Other Name" story by Deviation. Alright, anyway. Great update, I look forward to the next one. ^^'
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: September 13, 2004 17:50 EDT
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I read all the chapters last night in one go! Looking forward to your update, and I'm impressed you've kept Hiei and InuYasha so well in character :)
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 13, 2004 17:45 EDT
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lolm you certainly have an interesting way with the plot... I like how you have Youko being more than, well... you know what I mean right? Most people have Youko thinking about... mostly vivid images.... So I like how you're taking time with this too and not moving the plot too fast.
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 13, 2004 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the great update a good yyh/iy story i know of is called 'Brothers!' and theres a siquil too. i just can remember that name of it. its on fan fiction . net. please update soon. and don't forget to e-mail me when you do! winter_solstce@sbcglobal.net
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Reviewed By: Acheron Slvr Fyre On: September 13, 2004 16:44 EDT
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There's http://shichan.envy.nu/ It's a broad archive for Kag/Alternate pairings. I'm not sure how much there is of the other pairings (my fav is Sess/Kag), but I do recall Kagome/Hiten, Kagome/Kouga, Kagome/Naraku.
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Reviewed By: moongoddess86 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 16:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Wonderful! You got this out soo quickly too! Keep up the good work;)
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Title: lehcar132
Reviewed By: lehcar132 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 00:42 EDT
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Another great chapter. I also constantly look for yyh/iy crossovers. I'm glad this is a Kagome/Hiei fic. If you have a heads up on any others... Well thanks again for the update and I look foward to the next one : )
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I normally don't read Inuyasha/YYH crossover fics, but I have to say that this is one of the best I've read (Probably up as number2). I'm not sure who I'm rooting for as the pairings. I can't wait to read more chapters to come. ^__^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 12, 2004 20:44 EDT
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*claps* well, I'm not sure what Paradox means but I was able to absorb the entire chapter. I can't help but wonder what'll happen next....
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan On: September 12, 2004 20:03 EDT
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great chappy! writers do that?? never noticed... i wrote some stuff myself (on ff.net) and i love getting reviews like that. it just makes your day!! i love inu/yyh xovers!! i've read almost all on ff.net, their great!! what site is Imaginative Love? i've never heard of it. could you give me the siteadres? my email is roos_peters@hotmail.com your site idea is really good by the way! i dont know a site like that. if someone tells you, please tell me as well yyh and inu rule! i love it that you update almost every day!! keep it up!! ill just review every day hahaha. you probably dont need help whatsoever with the plot so i wont bore you with my idea's but im a muse so if you want some help or a new idea.... (and i have a lot).... say hi to your kids :D talk to you tomorrow hahaha ja ne grz xxx Aria-Chan
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