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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg again...) On: September 22, 2004 21:12 EDT
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Sigh... It really is good... and it saddened me to know that they will eventually be an end to that story *cry* poor Souta!!! I'm so sad for him! (like everyone else) and I was so worry about Kouga, I thought he would die in feudal era, but now I'm relieved to know he survived for at least 500 years! ^^ Anyway, I hope you'll update soon again!!!!
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: jessie42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best I've read in a while. In fact, it even inspired me to review, which almost never happens. Anyway, keep up the great work and update, update, update! :)
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Reviewed By: river (not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 18:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last two chapters have been so harsh and at the same time so sweet!! I have to tell you that I have had a rough time in the past 24 hours, and reading this installment took me out of myself for a short while, so thank you so much for updating, it really did give me a breath of air today.
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Title: thanx
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 22, 2004 17:44 EDT
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wow i love sesshomaru so much and thus luv you by proxy for bringing him into the story! poor koga * sniff sniff * keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please oh please oh please update soon! this chappi came out good, but the hole cuting off of the charicter's limbs' was kinda mean...poor souta... good hiei kagome fluff in this one too. i love your pace with the fic your not rushing it and your not going unbarably slow. pluse no one is ooc. that an added bounis. keep hiei the way he is please. and kurama need to get a clue... i thought he was the inteligent one! i wounder what your going to write for what hapens when shippo meets kurama, then theres sanogo and kurama that might be a good pairing but i'm not sure i see her with him like that ... then again he was once a ruthless killer too.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 22, 2004 16:11 EDT
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shit.. he's gonna torture Souta?! I like how Kouga's still alive and I have a feeling that Hiei'll start threatening him again if he claims Kag as his mate again....
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 21, 2004 18:25 EDT
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O.O Update soon!!!! Please! Oh my gosh... I HATE cliffies!! GRRRR but hey Kagome's two timing ^^ Hiei... Kurama... I wonder who'll win her (I don't know why but something in my head says it'll be Hiei) But maybe it's either of them, but it's Kuwabara? (ewwww!! NO!) I was just joking! And I hope it won't be that for real (I just CAN'T see them together!!) Anyway. I hope you'll update really soon! See ya!
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Title: NANNNNNNNIIIIIIIIII?!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Shocked_Hanyou On: September 21, 2004 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it, Naraku is getting the ass kicking of a lifetime!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Souta *sniffles* *growls dangerously* Alright, Naraku's hunting party is startinf now, get in line if you want a piece of him. Great fic, you're keeping me in suspense, not that I like that or anything. *scowls* Please update soon and I'll give ya a choco Kurama... *wonders if bribery works*
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Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 21, 2004 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is not right leaving us hanging like that!Not right at all!
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Reviewed By: Celestial Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 01:00 EDT
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I love your story!! The whole thing with Yoko Kurama after kagomes affections when (i believe) her affections concern a certain koorime...
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Reviewed By: kp On: September 20, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally love ur story!! when i told my friend about hiei's sweet tooth she just laughed and said it reminded her of me. r u ever gonna have hiei on a sugar high?? if u do make sure he goes just a bit crazy. i bounce off the walls. i woder what a sugar high hiei would do. the same goes for kurama/yoko. now that would be funny. later.
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Reviewed By: ame-hime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*mouth hanging open* but but but... Hiei and Kagome kissed, and then you had to go and do that!! aw!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 17:52 EDT
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took a bit to update but the wait was worth it for this chapter! please update soon tell you sister i said congrats! please update soon ...poor souta please don't kill him off...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 20, 2004 16:43 EDT
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no.... my god...
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