| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: KMAM On: March 31, 2012 20:28 EDT
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UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!... please? |
Reviewed By: LunaSlashSea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2010 11:48 EDT
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Great story. Please write more
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Reviewed By: DancingAngels On: August 03, 2010 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the fourth time I've read this story, and I absolutely love it. It is by far my favorite fan fiction I have ever read and quite possibly one of the best works of literature that I have come across. There are a few typos I noticed throughout the piece, but in-spite of that I still come back. I really want to know how it ends, and I'm obviously not the only one. I want to know how Hiei will react to Kagome's deal with Seshomaru, what the Jagan wants from her, and if Souta will be corrupted by Naraku. Please continue writing this story; we all want to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2010 00:09 EDT
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Oh, goodness! I have been searching high and low for a good yyh/iy crossover! Some have great ideas for plot, others have good descriptions...but I think, I think in this story I may have found the whole package. Plot, description, character development (without going ooc), interesting interactions, and humor! Yay! I can't wait to read more, but I just had to tell you..."Woman. You have some explaining to do." is what I read, but all I heard was, "Luuuuucy! You got some 'splainin to doooo!" *dies* I'm sure someone else thought as much, but God, that was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 02:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i simply LOVE this story!! i'm really hoping you continue this and update soon it's really good i wonder how hiei will react to kagome becoming sesshou's *shudders* pet it would be really sad if that does happen i mean they finally found happiness within each other even if hiei will never admit it... out loud or to any one else... yet at least well once the entire naraku stuff is over
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Title: what the hell?
Reviewed By: Extremelymadreader On: July 22, 2009 23:51 EDT
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That's it? You just left it there? REALLY? But....it was such a good story....
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Reviewed By: Kula [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story, I'd love to see you continue it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 14:04 EST
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Congratulations! This fic is being featured as the March Fanfic of the Month at The Deadliest Sin, a Hiei/Kagome board. http://thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com/index.cgi
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 10:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you gave a summary of the yyh characters and the definitions of some of the yyh specific tearms. Your doing great. Two thumbs up. smiles
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 04:52 EDT
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this is such a good story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: condorfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far. I've read it before. Is it posted on Fanfic.net? Wendy
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Reviewed By: hiei_is_gorgeous On: April 08, 2008 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is such an amazing story!! :D I've read so many InuYasha fanfictions and apart from one called "the lucky ones" this is one of the very best that I have ever read!! ...but I'm a little down as its been well over 2 years since this story was updated :( ...could you please update it soon? I'm quite addicted to this story :) and I absolutly love the style that you right in-you are a brilliant writer!!
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Reviewed By: kendra On: March 16, 2008 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story and am sad to find the story abandoned i hope you finish the story. it was exciting and romantic and funny.
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Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh......you can't leave it there!! omg. thats just so mean... but i really love this story! great work!
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Reviewed By: d_g On: July 27, 2007 12:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I really hope to see more of it some day. With most crossovers at least one character becomes glaringly OOC to make things work, yet you've got an excellent and entertaining storyline without loosing anyone's true identities. This is, without a doubt, a story that deserves to be finished.
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