| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: lehcar132 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding. It is so hard to find good Hiei / Kagome stories. You are keeping them pretty much in character too which is good because that is what I like about them : ) Thanks for the frequent updates. I look foward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 10, 2004 23:56 EDT
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*drools* I LOVE pecans . . . =D
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 10, 2004 19:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is interestion. your grammer is done neatly but i've seen a spelling mistake here and there. no ones perficet. (as you can see from my spelling) The creativity is wounderfull i have never read a story with such detail. (well a yyh/inu crossover fan fic anyway) I enjoy this story vary much! i give an overall rating of 10! pleaese update soon! i want to know what happens. if we can vote please make this a hiei kagome pairing! thanks for not bashing kuwabara. hes not as stupid as alot of people amke him look. at least he has some amount of dignity in this story! again please update soon! update update update update! ooo! make sesshie show up too! that would be awsome and hiei being all full of himself might try to attack him cuz sesshy tryed to hurt kags. and good job with not making kag look like a whinney helpless high school girl like she normally is! JA NE! i'll leave you alone now and shut up for my own good befor i end up geting punched.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 10, 2004 13:15 EDT
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Lol. Hiei and his sweet tooth. =D
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Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 10, 2004 10:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This latest chapter was amazing dear. Keep up the good work! I hope you have more!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in On: September 09, 2004 20:16 EDT
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characters are good, Hiei's more Hiei than in my story *grimaces* but I like how everything's unraveling! One more word, well three: Update soon please.
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Arella Hallo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good. I really do like this story. I hope you update again soon. It makes me smile.
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Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 09, 2004 10:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just great dear! You have to keep going! This is just getting good! Or was that excellent?
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Reviewed By: Mistic UV On: September 09, 2004 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic so far but what a mondoly nasty cliff hanger! Anyways is Sesshoumaru gonna be in this one? Oh well update soon.Bye!
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Reviewed By: Outlawsiren On: September 07, 2004 12:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so far. But you need to fet a few more up before I can say it is just a good story, or an excellent fanfiction. Please up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Mistic Uv On: September 07, 2004 07:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far however a question is the past Youjo gonna be in this one? Anyways update soon.Bye!
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Reviewed By: BloodRoses and Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 00:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! i hope you make it a hiei/kagome parring!!! update soon
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am know officially in love with this story! I hope you do Kurama/Kagome, but Hiei/Kagome is fine to... IF that's your favorite pairing... Hmm... Well, please update this soon! It's a great fic!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 15:31 EDT
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ok what is wrong w/ people this story so kicked ass and yet they don't have the descensy to write a review those jerks. In my opinion your story so totally kicked ass and u have got to update as soon as u can. Loved it. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its very interesting can't wait to the next chap and I hope you have 'Enemies With Privileges' next chap out soon too. Update soon!
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