| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
| Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] |
Title: Haircolour
Reviewed By: Okibi On: May 23, 2005 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Er... just thought you might like to know... >>"That," she said, pointing at the redhead just now getting up from the floor, "is my instructor! Sit!" Inuyasha had been trying to stand when she activated the spell again, reacquainting him with the hardwood floor.
|
Reviewed By: xSilverShadowsx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I have a question. When you first wrote the story, Kagome was 'dressed-up' with lavender eyes and blue hair, right? And now that you've re-wrote it she just had her eyes (red) and nails done. I can't remember exactly where, but you mentioned a couple of times about Kagome having blue hair. Just thought I'd tell you, incase that wasn't how it was supposed to be.
|
Reviewed By: solqua [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yeah, you haven't forgotten us, so very happy, keep up the great work
|
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 08:56 EDT
Comment/Review:
You wouldn't believe how happy I was to get the emails indicating that the revision was up. Great changes, love you you've changed Youko. Can't wait to read chapter 18, Please update soon.
|
Reviewed By: silver1992 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories i have ever read. you should hurry up and update it.
|
Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:47 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Reviewed By: PPLLEEAASSEE On: May 09, 2005 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lady you have got one hell of a talent!!! This is one of, no the greatest Hiei/Kaggs fics I have ever read. Most authors put Hiei or Kaggs completely out of character but not you oh no.:bows low while people mummer in the background "All hail the greatest author in the world": You have so got to update your story as soon as humanly possible. PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!! P.S. I love your website. ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 20:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
PPPPPPPPPLLLLLTHHHTHTHHTHTHTHHTHTHT!!!!!!! I WANT AN UDATE!!!!!!!!!! DON"T MAKE ME RELEASE HIS SEXI ... errr ... SESSHYNESS ON YOUR A**!!
|
Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 15:06 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Reviewed By: Hillary ( Biganimefan1) On: March 22, 2005 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooooooooooooooooo this is sooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 16:35 EST
Comment/Review:
THE DATE: MARCH 15, 2005. It has been nearly four months since you've updated! Where did you go? I would very much like to see some more to this fic, I love it. It's great, the way you brought Hiei and Kagome together! Come on, please update soon?! *gets down on knees and begs* See? I'm begging! That's really bad ... um ... humiliating ... yeah that's it. So PLEASE???? With a cherry on top?
|
Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 23:33 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
|
Reviewed By: particleboard On: March 04, 2005 17:11 EST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!! You TOTALLY r0x0rz!!! UPDATE!UPDATE!!UPDAAAATE!!!
|
Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 21:23 EST
Comment/Review:
Hey........ you didn't update since dec. 11... we're now on feb. 22........ I understand you may be busy... but are you THAT busy??? I want to read the rest of the story!!! I love your story!!!!!! Please, update soon, I beg you!!!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:51 EST
Comment/Review:
on ch 13, your responses.....Mommy powers????????
|
| Pages (16): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 › » ] |
