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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 20:33 EDT
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Are you going to update this b/c I would love to know how their relationship turns out. Are you going to abandon this story?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 18:59 EDT
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Please please please update and conitnue this story... I have read hundreds of stories looking for one like this, were no matter what the fearless heros can not win completely. I don't want to wait any longer to see how Hiei takes to Kagome offering herself to Sesshomaru as a pet in order to save his life. Perhaps there's something that he can do.. maybe a special mating ritual that will bind her completely to him? I don't know but I can't wait to find out! If you ever need anything then don't be a stranger.. Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: In2thedarkness On: January 22, 2007 03:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update asap! I generally like kurkag more than Hiei/Kagome, but this is an exception. I really want to see what happens when Hiei finds out about Kagome's deal with Sesshoumaru, not only that but I want to see if Kurama gets into the story more, seeing as Hiei has a "bad feeling" about this whole Kurama teach Kagome thing. Please update asap! ^_~
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Title: wow...just wow
Reviewed By: Lil red On: December 30, 2006 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is proberly one of the most detailed and amazing fanfic's i have ever read, and trust me...ive read alot. i loved it so much, and i like it even more because its a hiei/kagome fic. Please do more, i cant wait to find out if Kagome goes with Sesshomaru as his...'pet' *shudders*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 06:46 EST
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I've been re-reading this again. I just can't tell you how amazing this story is. Please come back and finish it!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 06:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my ALL-TIME FAVORITE stories! In your A?N from last year, you mentioned you pretty much had the next chapter done. I am begging you to continue the story!!! It's so incredibly well-written -- such a great plot-- so much Hiei/Kagome goodness!! This story deserves an ending! I just HAVE to know what happens after Naraku is defeated -- how will Kagome get away from Sesshoumaru? How will she and Hiei be able to be together if she doesn't? She HAS to tell him what she promised soon! How angry will he be? (How humbled will he be that she would do that for HIM? --Seems like it should really make him realize how much she loves him, right?) Will Kurama be able to help her with her powers? What will the outcome of THAT be? Will the Jagan do something BAD? Hiei's worried about it, but Kagome's not. What are Naraku's final plans for Souta? There's SO MUCH great story left to cover!! PLEASE pick this back up and finish it!!!
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Title: Good Work Going to Waste
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is truly sad that such a well presented and plotted story has been abandoned. Please consider continuing this story. It is extremely good, and would be a total shame to not continue this fic.
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: August 02, 2006 22:33 EDT
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Man... you realize you're letting us hanging here?... We've been waiting for over a year =( Please, update! Doesn't matter if your chapter is short, just as long as you update! Please?... I really love this story, I want it to continue! I beg you to update!
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Reviewed By: ShikonNoKouken [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 06:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm still waiting for you to update! I love this story, but i've beeen waiting for over a year for you to update. I think this story is great, but i wont wait forever.
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Reviewed By: Fub On: July 16, 2006 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so unbelievably awesome!!! I've never been interested in Hiei/Kag pairings but you have got me totally hooked.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess On: July 07, 2006 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. i just read your fic, and it's awsome. though the revision date confuses me. 2005? it's 2006 now, and u haven't posted another chapter yet. o, it says 2 tell you y i rated it the way i did, SO... 1. I think this is a wierd question, but i guess i like the writing style. (i sound stupid) 2. i didn't c any spelling or grammer mistakes, probably i read it after u revised it. 3. i think this is the best story i've ever read, and i luv kagomehiei pairings, but u take it to a whole new level of awsomeness! 4.if it was a boring fic, i wouldn't of read it, and it's REALLY funny. 5. if i gave everything else a ten, i'm obviously goin to do the same here. pleaz, can u get the next chapter up soon?
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Title: HURRY UP!
Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikonNoTama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please, you have to update! pretty please? I looovvee this story!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KekeChan On: May 16, 2006 13:22 EDT
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Aww! This is a really good fic- I'd never heard of Yu Yu before, but you've portrayed the characters well so i can relate to them! Though ithink Inu's a bit ooc, but it's prob just to fit with your plot! Well done and plz keep it up!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 15, 2006 18:49 EDT
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wow, i really cant wait to see what happens here. its getting really interesting, especially with kagomes promise to sesshoumaru! i wonder how hiei will react. i hope she finds a way out of it.
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Reviewed By: WhiteWolf931 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good...T_T ...now finish it...please...:D
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