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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:36 EDT
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i don't have much to say... I really still love your fic, that's so great... i wonder if you thought about having a career in writing... i would read your book for sure!! ^^ anyway, i hope you'll update soon!!
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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the time I've ever given a review. Your story is extremely good and interesting. There were only a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and your writing style is different tha what I'm used to reading. I'm not saying that it's bad or anything of the sort, it just took me a while to ge used to it. All in all, it's a very creative story. I am a bit about the plot, but that's to be expected with me. If you were a little more descriptive, it might be even better than it already is. This is also the best crossover I've read so far. Everyone seems to be in character. I'll keep reviewing if you'll keep updating. Cheryl
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Reviewed By: rain-chan(logged out) On: October 09, 2004 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! another update...poor hiei! I was wondering why you had added that part in about the shard of glass, but that was an awesome turn. Hopefully next chapter Kagome and Hiei will work out these feelings. And when are we going to find out why the jagan has such an interest in Kagome! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 07:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it took a while to come out but it was worth it. Have you watched the new inyashha movie yet? we just got it inn at our block buster, its a total buy. please update soon! a little sooner than a week this time maybe, ne?
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: October 09, 2004 02:12 EDT
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damn, I love Darshan--what a great party song! You're doing so well with this fic! And I also enjoy your comments a lot-- I'm always looking forward to a new chapter!
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 23:12 EDT
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* on knees in a praying postion * "all hail the Great Somnambulicious-sama, All hail the Great Somnambulicious-sama. Oh Great 1 plaese update AFAP (as fast as posible) Your generosaty(sp) will be greatly apreshated(sp) & luved by all you read your fic. * glares at any1 who dares defy the Great Somnambulicious-sama with my Just-as-good-as-Hiei-if-not-better-glare * Review o great 1
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:50 EDT
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HIEI! I lUV HIEI! U doing great wit the fic so far. Keeping Hiei n charature and not making Kurama seem like a goody-to-shoes like most people do. I also liked that Yukina knows that Hiei is her brother (which much people do) but doesnt tell any1. I thought (scary Im thinking) that Botan's little 'dress-up of Kagome & Sango waz a nice touch. I still want 2 find out wat the Jagan wants wit Kagome. BTW it would be killer if you put in were Kagome sees Hiei's demon form. He looks cool both ways 2 me!^__^ Im surpised u didnt make K's hair pink r purple once I read that part. Well I got 2 rap tis up running out of charaters to use. L8a *in the background here some1 counting 821...816...810...804..????...lost count. Darnit Ill just start over... 1500.1499.. ^_^ This is going 2 take a while so bye.*
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: October 03, 2004 15:30 EDT
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Hey i love this story you have got to update it really really really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 07:15 EDT
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Great update. When I first read this chapter, I forgot to review. My conscience got the best of me later, though, so here I am reviewing. (Call me a shmuck, I know; lol) I'm quite taken with this story, and I thoroughly enjoy reading it. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Fyrefaera On: October 01, 2004 03:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am obsessed with your fic! I love it so much, and it is sparking all sorts of ideas in my head to write about, yay! Anyway, I love the tension you are developing b/n all the males, and the scenes it leads to. Plus, you are covering all the important aspects, not glossing over some of the details. Okay, so I would add more but it's about 2:45 a.m. here and sleep sounds nice. Thanks for writing such an entertaining and endearing/obsession inspiring fic! Fyrefaera: Zrofyre ( I'm visiting from outside the site ( fav's link ) )
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: September 30, 2004 21:03 EDT
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ha ha! Poor Kagome and Hiei ^^ even if there weren't much action, I really like that chapter!! But I wonder what will happen to Kurama? Will he try to separate Kagome from Hiei? or he'll just do anything? finding another girl? or raping Kagome?? (I hope that's not the last option) anyway, update soon again!! ^^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 30, 2004 16:46 EDT
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LMAO that's what you get when you don't pay attention!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: September 30, 2004 03:33 EDT
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This is great, I've seen very few Inu/YYH crossovers that DIDN'T have Kagome with Kurama and Inuyasha being a total bastard that was screwing Kikyo and promising to kill Kagome. My only question is what happened to Rin and Jaken? Sess has to come clean about them sometime, please? Hope nothing too horrible happened to them. Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Kanna_Fan
Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... i revewed but it didn't show up, so i'm doing it again! if i just missed it, My bad! So now you get 2 of them from me! please update soon, i think this chappie is my fav one so far, i got a lot of questions but i wont ask them cuz i know your really evil with leaveing people hangging! ^_^ again please update soon. The story is turning our really nicely and well writen! i give this chappie my best reviw yet, cuz i thought about it for a while and could find no reasone to give it a lower grading. please update soon. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 18:06 EDT
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I like that Kagome and Inuyasha are finally talking about their relationship (AKA fighting). If Kagome had spoken up before instead of sitting Inuyasha in a passive/agressive way she might not have fallen for Hiei's wiles, tasty as they are. I'm a big believer in asking instead of worrying about where you stand in a relationship; worst comes to worst, your suspicions are confirmed but at least you know for sure. So, anyway, kudos.
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