| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 03:34 EDT
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*snicker-snorts* Ah, Kouga. Lovable, funny and _dense_. Heh. The Hiei/Kouga standoff sequence cracked me up. Great update!
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Reviewed By: lehcar132 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 01:41 EDT
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Ooo Ooo I have a 4 year old, I want to join the hentai, anime-lovin mamas group too lol. I was watching YYH tonight and my daughter asked if it was Inu yasha, see, even she knows they should be in the same series. I really enjoy this fic. I love how Hiei gets suprised every time she indicates her feelings in some way. How much longer till the lemon is not just a dream??? well goodnight and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: madame shannon On: September 15, 2004 19:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAHHHH!! you stopped there on purpose didn't you?? DIDN'T YOU?!?!?! well aside from the extreamly painful fall at the end of the cliffie you fanfic is indeed supurb (i don't think i spelled that right) and i enjoyed myself throughly. update soon plz. oh, here, roses for you on a well made fic @-----^--
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan On: September 15, 2004 01:39 EDT
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^_^
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 14, 2004 20:09 EDT
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lol! II like your story about your daughter! wow.... anyhow onto fanfic subjects. It's an intersting plot weave (I think I said that before though) and update soon so I can find out how they react to Hiei!!!!!
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 19:20 EDT
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Great update! By the time Kagome's done explaining what's happened to her and her group, she'll be a master storyteller. Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 14, 2004 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was a little short and... well lets say not suprising. So i gave it a 9 for enjoyment this time. about your daghter in the authers notes, thats has got to be the cutest thing ive ever heard! she'd made a wounderfull magna author one day. give your family my gratitued for keeping you on your writing. The story, 'i thought hell was suposed to burn.' yes, ive read it many times myself and have been trying to get the author to update. but for what ever reasen, i think its been abandoned. its the best hiei/kagome pairing ive come across. on another note, Yay! finally some hiei kag in the next chappie! please update really soon! Ja Ne!
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: Yoake_The_Sly_Hanyou On: September 14, 2004 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fics kick soo much ass!!! You've gotta keep writing!!! Tese get more and more amusing each time I read them! Keeo going and I can't wait for the lemon!! I won't let my 14-year old little sis watch the venture brothers either, hell, I'm 16 and I don't watch that lame crap. But, we do watch Futurama and Aqua Teen. not to mention the anime.... Hmm... *gives a choco statue of Youko to the authoress* Here ya go.
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Reviewed By: Aria-Chan On: September 14, 2004 12:00 EDT
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Very nice again!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mefdet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 10:27 EDT
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I Love ur fic!!!! PLEASE update soon. Another fic that's kinda good is: Those We Leave Behind by Minerva519. It's funny! ^-^ Please update soon, i like the hiei/kagome pairing! so kawaii! ^-^
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Reviewed By: unimportant On: September 13, 2004 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, for a while I was wondering what the pairing would be, but the last two chapters gave me enough info to find out. I'll get to the point; I like your story. It seemed kind of silly at first (high school girls, high school girls), but later it got cool. Have that update out soon.
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 21:34 EDT
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Thanks for the character brief in the beginning of the chapter. I had been looking at different websites, gathering information and deducing information on each YuYu character. It was nice to see that your offered character info matched what I had found out; so thanks. :) Great update(s), I'm truly enjoying this story. I was surprised (call me blind) that Fluffy-sama showed up: can't have an IY fiction without his dazzling personality. I think I'm going to check out the "By Any Other Name" story by Deviation. Alright, anyway. Great update, I look forward to the next one. ^^'
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: September 13, 2004 17:50 EDT
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I read all the chapters last night in one go! Looking forward to your update, and I'm impressed you've kept Hiei and InuYasha so well in character :)
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 13, 2004 17:45 EDT
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lolm you certainly have an interesting way with the plot... I like how you have Youko being more than, well... you know what I mean right? Most people have Youko thinking about... mostly vivid images.... So I like how you're taking time with this too and not moving the plot too fast.
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Reviewed By: Kanna_Fan On: September 13, 2004 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the great update a good yyh/iy story i know of is called 'Brothers!' and theres a siquil too. i just can remember that name of it. its on fan fiction . net. please update soon. and don't forget to e-mail me when you do! winter_solstce@sbcglobal.net
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