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Reviewed By: Fub On: July 16, 2006 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so unbelievably awesome!!! I've never been interested in Hiei/Kag pairings but you have got me totally hooked.
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Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess On: July 07, 2006 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. i just read your fic, and it's awsome. though the revision date confuses me. 2005? it's 2006 now, and u haven't posted another chapter yet. o, it says 2 tell you y i rated it the way i did, SO... 1. I think this is a wierd question, but i guess i like the writing style. (i sound stupid) 2. i didn't c any spelling or grammer mistakes, probably i read it after u revised it. 3. i think this is the best story i've ever read, and i luv kagomehiei pairings, but u take it to a whole new level of awsomeness! 4.if it was a boring fic, i wouldn't of read it, and it's REALLY funny. 5. if i gave everything else a ten, i'm obviously goin to do the same here. pleaz, can u get the next chapter up soon?
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Title: HURRY UP!
Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikonNoTama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 03:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please, you have to update! pretty please? I looovvee this story!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KekeChan On: May 16, 2006 13:22 EDT
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Aww! This is a really good fic- I'd never heard of Yu Yu before, but you've portrayed the characters well so i can relate to them! Though ithink Inu's a bit ooc, but it's prob just to fit with your plot! Well done and plz keep it up!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 15, 2006 18:49 EDT
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wow, i really cant wait to see what happens here. its getting really interesting, especially with kagomes promise to sesshoumaru! i wonder how hiei will react. i hope she finds a way out of it.
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Reviewed By: WhiteWolf931 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good...T_T ...now finish it...please...:D
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Reviewed By: Anon367 On: January 27, 2006 18:08 EST
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Update soon!
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 17:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: badkitty0404 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLESE finish this story, I've just got to know what happens. Kagome isn't goning to be Sesshoumarus pet is she? It's got to have a happy ending, right? This story is so well written it would be such ashame if it were unfinished.
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Title: Paradox!
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv hiei/kagome pairing, so this better be it! please post your next chapters as soon as possible! or else! lolz! I want Hiei.kagome lemons ... i noe ... i'm a major hentai of hiei/kagome, lolz!
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Reviewed By: Tilin On: October 02, 2005 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! You are far by one of the greatest fanfic writers there is...a goddess I tell you! I am a slave to your greatness. ..and I'm also your 200th reviewer. :)
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Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 01:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled upon this story and absolutly LOVE it! Im a fan of Kagome and Kurama as well as InuYasha but this is a new twist that I absloutly adore! The story is very well written and I find that I loose myself in the sceens; they come alive like a movie in my head. Thats what I look for in a perfect story. You have that. Im looking forward to seeing how this will end.
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Reviewed By: Coffee Gyrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 05:52 EDT
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THIS IS THE FREAKING GREATEST KAG/HIEI CROSSOVER OF ALL FEAKING TIME!!!! I love this to a million freaking pieces and reread this all the time (takes me about 3 days because I keep drifting off imanging the scene in my head). I wonder now that Kagome had sex with Hiei does this mean they are mated or is more needed to do that. In the begining he says he'll never mate a human but what does he need in order for that to happen. I also noticed that neither he or anyone else has told her that he has another form. I don't know what you call his green-eyed form but she doesn't know he can transform yet. I love this please update soon!!!!! *leaves offering of Bailey's Irish Cream at the altar of updated fanfics*
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Title: Paradox
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 20:57 EDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 17:32 EDT
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I'm glad to see you going back and revising this. It reads a lot better than the first time I read it for the BAFC. It feels a lot smoother now and more fleshed out, even if you did some scene editing. The action is very well done and the blending of the two worlds is going very well, In fact I think the tension is what you do best. While you have me getting attached to what happens between Kagome and Hiei, it is the pacing and the other plots that have me clicking the next chapter button. I look forward to your putting out the next part. Good luck!
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