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| "Freeport" Reviews/Comments [ 194 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 ] | Title: Pixie Smith (nsi)
Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow another exciting chapter. Really, I shouldn't be reading this since I'm smack bang in the middle of my exams but what can I say? You're MALDOROR for Christ's sakes! Personally I'm beginning to doubt Wufei's ability to be a 'blade' if his slamming Duo against the wall is any indication of how he's going to react every time something unexpected happens, ha, ha. Still, slamming Duo against the wall and pinning him there brings to mind lots of lovely naughty images, tee, hee, hee - I wish! I loved it how Duo deliberately didn't warn Wufei of how bad the air was going to smell; it's a quintessential Duo thing to do. I wonder what that whole silent conversation between Karl and Duo was. My guess is that Karl thought Heero was Duo's blade and bed partner? And Duo didn't disabuse him of that notion? Hmm… Probably thinks Wufei's here to replace Heero, tee, hee, hee. Weeelllll, Wufei's finally made it onto Freeport, let the fun begin! PS - I've been wondering since I began reading this fic, and I'm just going to mention it here for, I don't know, I'm just going to mention it. Anyway, in this story, are you going to have it so that Duo already loved Wufei from their G-days, or will it be that their relationships slowly develops as they spend time together, and they'll begin to feel something? I'm guessing you'll make it so that they'll begin to feel something as the story progresses if Wufei's analysis of how little they knew each other before is any indication. No characte | Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is certainly different, I can't wait to find out how things turn out.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith (nsi) On: November 09, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so very, very, very, very, veeeerrrryyyyy happy to see that you've started another fic! I haven't read a good 2x5 fic for a long, long time so I'm ecstatic to see that you're writing one because your fics are always fabulous. You've only written two chapters but already they show signs of being as good as, and possibly even better than 'the Arrangement!' What a feat! In fact, I think every fic you write just gets better and better. This whole idea you've come up with is quite refreshing and some of Wufei's snarky comments when Duo produced the collar induced a fit of hysterical laughter on my behalf. Whoever knew that Wufei had such a dirty mind underneath the clean, and pure demure image he presents to the rest of the world. I can easily see Heero following Duo's instructions because he's just so totally emotionless, but to see Wufei follow Duo's every word to a T, this is going to be something that'll go down in history. I mean, come on, Wufei's just so passionate. I can't wait to see how you write it. Anyway, great two first chapters!
| Reviewed By: ^_^melanie On: November 07, 2004 08:13 CST
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Just wanted to let you know that I'm very happy you're writing a 2x5 now (or is it 5x2 or both?). I loved The Arrangement and I'm still loving The Source of All Things, thanks so much for sharing your talent with us and for all the work you put into your fics!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: November 05, 2004 22:37 CST
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You know I will review but first I must ask, why Bjork? Seriously, she can't sing and whats worse is when she was with Sugarcubes they sounded worse. Scary to imagine, very scary. Though this isn't a 50 Awesomely Bad episode, its a review for the new chapter. I laughed at the the sarcasm Wufei showed when he had to wear the collar. It is a sexy thought though. Really? Everyone talked Wufei out of shaving his head? Thats an argument I want to see, especially the thought of Heero persuading him. It really is infuriating with Duo secretiveness about Freeports living conditions. Poor Wufei, 30 chapters of no one to talk too except Duo, how will he manage?
| Reviewed By: Stardancer On: November 05, 2004 17:54 CST
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I shall try to be patient...but after reading your work its very hard to find something good to read. I can tell we're all going to love this one too.
| Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man I love this. You are such a great author. Cant wait for the next chappy, keep up the good work. TaTa
| Reviewed By: Ibuki On: October 31, 2004 23:11 CST
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This is one of the best Duo/Wufei interaction I've ever read. I'm usually not a reader of Duo/Wufei pairing because the characters were usually very ooc, and Heero is usually somewhat bastardized. But ever since I've read some of your other fics, I've become curious of this pairing. I love all your stories and from what there is of this fic so far, I'm quite sure that I'll enjoy this too!
| Title: Good start!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the start of another wonderful adventure! Intiguing character setting, and a pairing I don't normally picture. Can't wait to see more!
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: October 30, 2004 22:38 CDT
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You gain a following since The Arrangement haven't you? Still I think the best part, or at least one of them, about your writing is how you portray Wufei. Usually the man is bashed or shoved aside but you write him as one of your main characters and do him in such a believeable manner even people who don't like him would come out giving him more props. Still one of your huge let downs is waiting again for the next chapter. -__- I'll play good girl and wait patiently so do us a favor by making it they way you know how, fantastic.
| Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. Well actually I love all of your stuff you are an excellent author. You really should consider going professional if you havent already. Well tata, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Merit Somnia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 19:47 CDT
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As usual your writing stle impressives me to no end. Simply it has all the grace and danger it needs. A grity edge to it that makes the reader relate to our world.
| Reviewed By: stardancer On: October 30, 2004 17:34 CDT
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Super start...looks like another Arrangement caliber story. Speaking of which...will we ever get the sequel to the Arrangement? Just fishing, but, you know, it was sooooo good.
| Reviewed By: NeNa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2004 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey- I'm enjoying this fic already! It's dry somewhat sarcastic humor is making it even better and more enjoyable. It looks like it is going to be another great fic! Keep up the fantastic job and I can't wait to see how this mission and their relationship progresses! ~*+NeNa+*~
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