| "Freeport" Reviews/Comments [ 194 ] |
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Reviewed By: GoodOmen On: February 01, 2006 02:21 CST
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Having sustained life-threatening puncture wounds I can assure you that your representation was more or less accurate... You don't *really* feel it until much later. I can't believe it's almost over. I love this story and You would not believe the great lengths I've gone through over the last year to keep up to date. Your efforts are much appreciated.
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Title: that hurt!
Reviewed By: akeleven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 01:26 CST
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Excellent fight! Just think you underestimated the kind of pain from that wound (after effect that is - not at the time it happened). So glad to see this fic back in action. When it's done I will reread it as one piece because I've totally lost track of the political side of it.
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Reviewed By: Becs On: January 22, 2006 05:10 CST
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Wah. Please update.
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Title: *dies*
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: December 30, 2005 02:09 CST
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hopefully you havent forgotten the fic....i may lose my mind before the new year! Love your work! X3
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Reviewed By: Stardancer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 16:38 CST
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going into withdrawl...need Freeport... Just as an amusing aside, I work in insurance and one of my clients company is Freemart...for some reason, though, every time I make a notation to do something for this account I end up writing FREEPORT...PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Title: Freeport dreaming
Reviewed By: RazZadig [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 22:03 CST
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I had this dream: I was a Samoan dressed in wrapped flower skirt and t-shirt going out of Samoa to visit a truck driver in a strange, phobic town. I had to trust the driver not to run into overpasses on the way. It was hard not to duck (I was sitting on top of the truck). In the town, we entered a dark apt where everyone kept trying to peek thru the windows at us. Then the truck driver helped me on my secret mission to find out the locals' favorite TV shows. Luckily, at that time, I woke up and realized I was dreaming about "Freeport". Whew. Checked the webpage for updates and voila! There was an update that day. It was fate. Don't let me have anymore weird dreams. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: required name On: November 17, 2005 23:03 CST
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man, i was all into it & you pull a cliffy like that. obviously you should make it up to us by writing more as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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insane!!!!! this fic is neat. can't wait to know what happens next. keep writing. This is definetly in my favourite stories list!
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Reviewed By: Tully On: November 09, 2005 08:59 CST
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::loves:: Damn. Just damn. This latest chapter is definitely one of the best - you did a great job of capturing the idea of the mob, of the demagogue and the power of words and spectacle, of violence straining for a target. That's something pretty much impossible to entirely pull off - especially when major characters are exercising their rhetorical prowess - without ending up with traces of a Hollywood cardboard Colosseum, but you pretty much managed it. and meat hooks?! I really can't wait to see what happens next. Don't make us wait too long!
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Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: November 08, 2005 23:33 CST
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*dies* you kill me with these cliff hangers!
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Title: thank the lord!
Reviewed By: d On: November 07, 2005 22:57 CST
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Another update! That means I have to live up to my side of the bargain, and provide non-sycophant feedback. In this latest chapter you took a giant step to tie up many loose ends- suddenly we get a foggy sketch of what the 'big picture' is (things were really vague and convoluted until a few chapters ago). In parallel, on a more micro, Wufei-Duo level, there is a sudden clarity to the relationship as well (an ancillary benefit of of imminent death, I guess). And then you had to cut us off at a pretty critical juncture. I will reserve my ultimate verdict once the work is complete, but this chapter may well convince me that this is your best multi-part yet (I'm really struggling with the non-sycophant guideline). Unlike some of your other pieces, this has clearly been more action-oriented, and not a psychological thriller. Maybe that's what's thrown me a bit off in terms of hard-hitting critique. I will give it some more thought. While there are many things I would like to see (ie Trowa, Heero, some introspection), they are not material to your tightly-wound plot. So for now I await with baited-breath (and my still-coalescing thoughts) for the next chapter. (aquononascendetATyahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 21:07 CST
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MEAT HOOKS?!!!!!!! What in the hell are they doing fighting with Meat Hooks?!!!!!
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Reviewed By: stardancer On: November 07, 2005 15:35 CST
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I LOVE YOU...please tell me we don't have to wait too long for the end...please...pretty please...with sugar and honey on it...
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Title: oh man!
Reviewed By: d On: October 31, 2005 20:30 CST
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More unexpected twists and turns, very good! I have to say that while your surprises are unexpected, they flow quite well with the story- not amateurish at all. How far ahead do you plan these things? On another note, I guess we'll be seeing more of Mako after all. When we first met him way back when, there was some promise in the character. Great work, certainly keeping my attention. Let us know if there is anything your readers can do to keep you going- are you more partial to flattery or bribery? aquonanscendet@yahoo.com
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Title: hn
Reviewed By: Blueflower On: October 28, 2005 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hard to rate anything, but I'll stick with this. I'll call 5 average, so well done. I like the anarchy idea, ever read any Ursula LeGuin? Especially with the opposing roles these two boys play, perfect! Room for improvement? Aside from random typos, style can best be polished simply from more writing. Have read a couple of other works by you as well, like the zing. Thanks.
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