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Title: The tension!
Reviewed By: vox dei On: May 04, 2005 21:44 CDT
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This is just great, the way you keep the screws on tight even after the previous chapter when they finally got together. So Wufei is Une's ultimate weapon, and instead of laying low he goes nuts! With time to think it over, Duo will understand Wufei (even if he won't forgive him). To echo some other reviewers, I'm very curious about what Duo's thought process is, both with the hook-up as well as the new revelation... keep it coming!
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Title: We're not worthy!
Reviewed By: mugi-the-eep [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 18:49 CDT
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Goodie!! The boys' tough outer shells are cracking, and now we're going to see their soft, gooey insides. Or not. You write the best 05 stories in the biz. And your lemons are amazing, too. I'm truly in awe, and I've been too shy to say anything until now. But you're really outdoing yourself with this one--which is saying a lot-- so I had to chime in. Looking forward to the next installment, Mugi
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Title: Another thing
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: May 03, 2005 09:48 CDT
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A stray thought while avoiding work. Wufie alread is a Blade for the New World Order anyway, isn't he? I mean he's the one who gets his hands dirty and risks his neck and all that stuff. So, he should stay with Duo. My two cents worth.
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Title: Ch 23
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: May 03, 2005 07:31 CDT
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God I love your style. Nothing fluffy and fuzzy about how you write these guys. Its great. I'm even re-reading The Arrangement. Gotta get my fix. Anyway...I think Wufei should stay with Duo and be his Blade forever. Screw the rest of the unappreciative world, what do they know anyway! But, there would be no story there, so... Wufei has obviously stumbled onto some serious shit here. Makes me wonder if Romerfeller (sorry, can't spell it) isn't still alive and kickin' behind the scenes. Hmmm...
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Title: ch 23
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:48 CDT
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Hmmmm... so the truth's out. // I can see why this chapter was difficult, with so many threads coming into play. What made me most curious, though, was Duo's closing off (what with the Scissorman jacket and all) in the morning. I didn't expect anything too different, but I'm quite curious to discover what's going on in his head. Fei's so wonderfully oblivious to the actual happenings. He's quite reliable in his narrative unreliability. // Duo's odd throat noise near the Trowa/slander comment... Is Duo still under the suspicion that something's going on between Wufei and Heero/Trowa? Or did that get cleared up? I can't recall. // Duo seemed to be quite twitchy for violence with the knife... I'd thought at first that there was an enemy Wufei hadn't seen, but it appears Duo was just agitated. Wufei (and I included) was unable to determine why, especially as it seemed to surprise Duo as well... I presume the answer will come to light eventually. // Of other note, I am devilishly excited to meet the Troll King.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 02, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's good to finally know what's up with Wufei. So he got sent there to keep him away from the public eye, huh? Bad boy... Please keep going cause I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: HakkaiDuo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Hakkai_Liren here, just found you on Media miner!!! Damn this story is kicking ass!!!! I'm loving it! I cannot wait for the next chapter, i was hoping online every hour this weekend waiting for the update hehe and i was no disapointed, you are totaly awesome and Justice breaking the law! Wufei is cool too, very interesting plot twist with that, never saw it comming, ergh now it's going to kill me. What was Duo going to say before his dagger all malfounctined. Well Have fun keep up the awesome work! *Glomps* Toodles!
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Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:09 CDT
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wow. I just. . . wow. You never disapoint me. This was so good. I can see Wufei as a Fixer.
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Title: Caught up!
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: April 28, 2005 06:20 CDT
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Woof! You write some of the best action sequences ever, sex and the other kind too. And thank God those two finally did the deed! I was begining to wonder about that. Two questions, what's the tattoo say? and what's up with all the riot inciting stuff? Can't help but think maybe Carver and his boss-man want a little anarchy for all, or something along those lines. Very interesting and well thought out, like always.
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Title: What a ride!
Reviewed By: akeleven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, that was great! Well worth the wait. You do the best job with stubborn, one-syllable men ever! You rock! I didn't put a score on spelling and grammar because = what? I was reading too fast to pay attention to nicetys like that!! It's like you channeled it straight into my brain!
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Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 06:29 CDT
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Nice use of the term FUBAR! Hee he, that one always cracks me up... Anyway, I like that you have Wufei using a sword in this fic. It seemed to be such an important part of his training in the otherone and now he gets to use it for real. Pretty cool. Personally, I like longer chapters. You know, more for your money's worth, that kind of thing. Good stuff so far.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhh! Nice one. Sounds about right for these guys! Rough and fast and they love it. Please keep going and update soon!
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: RedHedLvr (not logged in) On: April 24, 2005 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story as usual. You are great. You make the characters come alive and the whole story is just excellent, even if I am only on chapter 3. The gritty reality of how you portray the characters just grabs me and won't let go. I loved your other stories and the only reason I put off reading this is so silly...I "don't like" Duo with anyone other than Heero. Dumb huh? Anyway, just as with The Arrangement,(geeze, Heero and Wufei?) you have won me over. Clearly its not the pairing but the author that is making the story happen. Fantastic, incredible, wonderful. Can't wait to read more.
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Title: hubba hubba
Reviewed By: vox dei On: April 23, 2005 17:47 CDT
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Very hot for someone who feels they're "out of practice"... So it took a massacre to get these two together, which in fact seems very in-character. Great job in conveying Wufei's erratic, almost insane, mindset. Just one question- what about Duo's tat?? I'm really curious about that. -D
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Reviewed By: Okami Ryn On: April 22, 2005 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story ever since I read the first chapter, and have been waiting rather impatiently since then for each update. This is a very well written 2x5 plotline, and the story as well is origional and engaging. You'd best keep writing or you'll have some angry fans at your door demanding answers. Too good to pass this story up, a perfect 10.
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