| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 15, 2005 02:21 CDT
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Wow, what a heavy chapter. I loved it, it was so emotional, just made me want to cry. Great angst. Keep on writing, I just love this fic!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my sue this was soooo angsty I almost cried. I had to read it twice. hey sue screw them who want a lemon> this chpt really shows deep emotions with these two and also the hurt. very touching. and they do make a good match. hey keep writing as you are. you are in control el capitan suric!!! lol.
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Reviewed By: randomly yours... On: April 15, 2005 00:46 CDT
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that was so good! but man... i'm concerned about nez, i think she's losin it... but yeah, that'd suck to have your guy out killin people...
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this chapter was great! I hope that Ryo and Nez can work every thing out.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 20:25 CDT
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I FINALLY CAUGHT UP WITH YOU!!! I'm so proud. i love the way you write and now that I've caught up(at least with this story) I should review every chapter. This is a great story so far, and I can't wait to see exactly how Kyo and Nezumi work out all the missunderstandings that have become their relationship. Great story, update asap. Zirra
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 14, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent twist on the plot. Couldnt Ryo just like jump on the nearest biulding and get away? Anyway great chapter as alwats Sueric
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Reviewed By: koga52 On: April 14, 2005 18:36 CDT
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This chapter was so sad. I hope things are better in the morning. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: machallROCKS On: April 14, 2005 17:54 CDT
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awww...
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Title: Wow. . . . . . . . . .
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. . . .. . . . . . . That was. . . . . . intense. . . . . . Need ot shut up my jaw. . . . That was probably one of your best chapters yet. I was so impressed that I didn't even cry! *sits in shock*. . . . . . . . . wow. . . . . . . . . .
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, such a good chapter. I feel so bad for both of them. For Nezumi because she's so confused and for Ryo too. Does Nezumi even realize how much she's hurt his feelings recently too? Oh and I never got time to comment on the last chapter. Hehe I love that you used Mad Skillz in the title! I laughed my butt off. (Pfffffft *blows a raspberry at the pervs asking for lemons.* )
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 16:37 CDT
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omg...thats so sad...goodness those two just need to express their feelings more i guess...but dang that ending is soo sad!!! : ( but at least ryo got off easy for being accused of rape, but things dont seem to be going easy for him and nez though....
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 16:35 CDT
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Awww....She made him cry. Our poor Ryomaru, now who will cheer him up?
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inu-kitsune_youkai On: April 14, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, ok this is the first time that I've ever left a review for you but this chapter just got me for some reason. I love your purity stories. They are awesome. I can't believe how tortured both ryo and nezumi are. Doesn't it hurt you to write these things and cause pain to your characters? No doubt you have an incredible talent to writing. I'm sorry if my review sounds a bit cheezy but they are really really good. I can't wait to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 14, 2005 15:17 CDT
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Awww! This chapter almost made me cry. When does Ryo get some comforting? Yeah, he's an idiot, but he's also a good guy who's heart is in the right place. He has a bad day where there were no good chioces for him and instead of a shower, cuddle, and rest he gets blame, guilt, and responsibility. Awww. Poor guy. Hopefully things will start looking up for him soon. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: April 14, 2005 13:27 CDT
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Oh boy...well now she knows. I feel so badly for both of them here. I think this was the best job that Ryo has done in explaining his feelings (both about sticking around with the injured woman and why he does what he does for Sesshy), but it's still a huge thing for Nez to understand and accept. Not only does she have to deal with what he does, but that he kept something so huge from her all this time. I think you're doing a fabulous job of having them fumble their way to understanding, trust and love in a realistic way. Can't wait to see what's next!
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