| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:25 CDT
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aww i wuz afraid it would take a while for those two to make up...aww at least nez made the move to kiss him in this chapter...that shows that shes accepting the relationship more? hmmm but i dont no whats going to happen now that she saw those scars on ryos back....
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Without making it the reason for my review (because your excellent writing, as always, is the true reason for it) I just want to say I am sorry about the trouble you've had with...well, with everything. From insensitive reviews to just plain craziness. I happen to love your style and your stories, and I look forward to your updates. I pay good money for books that sometimes aren't as intriguing as your stories are. Please continue for all of us readers who truly do appreciate you and the time and effort you put into your stories. You're a rock star!!
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: April 15, 2005 17:32 CDT
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ouch. tough that she has a problem w/ blood... otherwise she could clean them for him. how are they going to get over this problem? and how the heck is he gonna be able to protect her? she leaves the frikkin door UNLOCKED!!! Baka Nez... also, is anyone else having a problem w/ the 'spam protection code'??? guh!
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Title: Whoa. . . .
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. . . . . . I take that back. THIS one was your best chapter. . . . . . . It was just so. . . . . .I. . . . I don't even know hhwo to explain it it was so good. See ya Monday!! Have a good weekend!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 16:44 CDT
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Well, that was a really sweet chapter. Nez is finally starting to let him in, at least piece by piece. But, now I'm wondering what she's going to do about seeing those scratches.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 15, 2005 15:05 CDT
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New game eh? I can't wait to find out what he means. Great chapter! Thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: April 15, 2005 13:25 CDT
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Yey! Finally some reciprocity on everyone's behalf. I don't know why-- but it just makes me feel so wonderfull, haha. I almost expected Ryomaru in the beginning to deny even holding the kitty. I thought that he might toss it off of his lap as soon as Deidre caught him being friendly with it, te he he. Speaking of the cat, what a great description of it at the end-- beast from hell, that sounds about right. Glad to see things are looking up in the future.. or are they?! dun dun dun! Hmm, i wonder who was on the phone, haha. So yes, LOVES IT. as always, --Aitu
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Reviewed By: TurtleDreamer (to gosh darn lazy to sign in) On: April 15, 2005 13:13 CDT
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(Heheheh.....kitty wants to play with ears too...>^.^< ) I'm just waiting for the shit to hit the fan when Nez finds out about the marking. If Ryo doesn't watch it, he may find someone a little less tactful than his mother trying to push things. Like his uncle, for instance. (LOL I love speculating...this is better than a soap opera.) HAVE A GOOD WEEKEND EVERYBODY!
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Title: Ch. 28 - Baby steps forward...but progress nonetheless.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 13:13 CDT
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There is no one, and I mean no one that can make my heart flip like you, Sue. The depth and intensity of feeling that fill your scenes, whether it be anger, humor, angst or love...the intimate moments that that leave indelible marks on one's life, are unmatched. It is rare even among published works to find such all-encompassing emotion so well depicted, raw and powerful, yet they are only words. Words...beautifully and lovingly displayed with a masterful flair...delving into the minds and hearts of your characters that readers cannot help but identify and sympathize with their plight. Your characters, for all that they start out on paper (figuratively) are three-dimentional as you breathe life into them from page one. We watch them mature, change, evolve and we grow to love them as our own. I am ever amazed by your 'Mad Skilz' as I probably will continue to be for as long as you allow me to be. Sincerely, Michelle
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 15, 2005 12:41 CDT
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happy fluffy Friday!!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Ooooo, I'm melting... :o) That was such a sweet chapter! It's about time that those bakas realized what they meant to each other!!! lol Have a great weekend Sue! I'm already eagerly awaiting Monday... (something I never thought I would do lol)
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again another great chapter! I still feel for poor Ryo, he does everything in his power to try and get Nez to realize that he loves her and, it seems as soon as they patch one thing up something else happens. Keep up the great work! Cant wait to read your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: April 15, 2005 11:51 CDT
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hmm. very intresting chapter. poor Nez...i can't imagine being that traumatized to wounds. i mean, granted, seeing that on the guy who you love can't be easy either but still...ouch? not cool. and i don't know, maybe it's me...but i'm starting to see a little bit more then projected inside of that cat. not afraid of Ryo...knows when he's being a baka...working behind the scenes to get our two favorite additions together...sounds a lot like another cat we all know and love....maybe reincarnated.hehe. how the circles turn. LOL. just a fleeting thought. LOL. great story, as always, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 11:51 CDT
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Well....there we have it.That lightbulb that was keeping Ryo in the dark just sparked to life with a surge of power. After all this time of not knowing WHY....he finally knows the truth. YAY for Ryo. I have to say...I am feeling pretty sorry for poor Nez though...he just changed the rules on her and something tells me she's not gonna stand a chance in hell against him...unless he botches THIS up too. As for the injuries...oh the angst...they aren't ever going to win...it's two step forward and a step back. You, my dear, are a superb storyteller. Who needs villians when your main characters are the ones causing all the drama? JOO ROCK!
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Title: Now we're cooking with gas
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read Chapters 26 & 27. Lemons? Who needs 'em? I love where this one's going without them. Keep up the FANTASTIC work, Sue!
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