| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 12:07 CDT
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Awwww, Ryo is in loooooovvvvveeeee! lol Guys are so slow... I don't think that Nez is going to make him give up his job, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Oh, and Yukitora is not stupid! lol Bakas...
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Reviewed By: spookytooky On: April 19, 2005 07:19 CDT
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Are you ok? You usually update everyday. Hope you are well and that the stomach bug hasn't returned to your house. Miss you and hope your lack of update is because you're doing something fun.
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Reviewed By: koga52 On: April 18, 2005 17:54 CDT
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Thank you for the chapter. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Guinnevere On: April 18, 2005 15:51 CDT
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HGey miss sue, i would really like to draw a picture of theone of the characters in this fic, do i have your permision to do it?? id really love that!! the email is licorcione@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 18, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow another great chapter from the great Sueric. I still can not believe how good of an author you are. I also just read your Purity one-shot for April first. t was a helluva funny fict. Hahaha. Especialy liked the part with Gin. Good going so will there be an update expected today, tommarow, the next day????
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Reviewed By: scorpia86 On: April 18, 2005 10:48 CDT
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This is a really intense fan fic .You write serious issues very beautifully and delicately. Your chapters capture lots of emotion that most fanfics generally lack,and I'm grateful for finding such an awesome writer that writes the kind of stories that keep you wanting more. I just want to say thank you,and God Bless.
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Title: coolness!
Reviewed By: Lady Mac On: April 18, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Great chapter!! Normally I'd review on ff.net, but I can't view the last 3 or 4 chapters, for some reason. Has anyone else had this problem? Any suggestions on how to get around it? Anyways, great chapter. What's this "new game" ryo is talking about? Sounds like fun, though I'm sure nezumi won't like it at first.. Awesome chapter, as usual! keep up the great work!
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Title: teh Sue is awesome
Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 00:16 CDT
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Wonderful chapter again Sue. I'm going to start writing reviews for Chronicles right now....it might take me awhile but I'll get it done! ~ mackie
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Reviewed By: BakaBokken teh unsigned On: April 17, 2005 22:57 CDT
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NO MORE 666!!! XD Just so this isn't utterly pointless, I LOVE P3 so far - you truly outdo yourself! :3 Can't wait for more! ~ with Lurve, Baka. ^^
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Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 02:12 CDT
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such a lovely chapter Sue! It's fun to see both of them starting to give in and admit to themselves how they really feel. Yuki is just the cutest thing ever! Beast from hell... FEH! Who wouldn't want to play with his ears?!?! Oh, and their kiss was a beautiful moment. The amount of emotional punch you can get into 4 or 5 paragraphs amazes me everytime I read. Wonder who's on the phone? Family? And about that back... will Nez swallow her fears and wonder why he didn't ask her for help in the first place? It shall be interesting to see how they deal with this.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 16, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I like this 'her terms, his game' thing. That mught be very interesting...Excellent chapter, it was really sweet, with the kiss and all. Then Nez is finally making some headway, and she has to go and see Ryo's back...*sigh* I know you enjoy being evil, I just know it. And it makes for a very interesting stroy. So carry on!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 15, 2005 21:03 CDT
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My reviews may seem alittle off. It seems that most of the time ehen I put up a review it gets put up a day late. Anyway great chapter. Dont stop writing. and lemons fdont make a good story. The author does.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: April 15, 2005 20:41 CDT
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Wonderful writing - as always. I must share though - on the bottom of the page of your story on mediaminer they put adds ... and the ones displayed at the end of this chapter - cat training! *Amused* I don't know if those particular adds have been at the bottom of all/most the pages but their existance at the end of this chapter was simply perfect! *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 19:52 CDT
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oooh great chapter can't wait for more. update asap, at your convenience, i don't like to rush the writers, it usually makes icky chapters but yours are really good, so... im babbling sorry great chapter, Zirra
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 15, 2005 19:49 CDT
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What an incredibley sweet chapter god sue no one writes fluff like you do. SO the baka now realises that he loves her eh?? So much like his father though in that he has a hard time putting it into words. Some of the lines in this chapter where so beautifully written. When Ryo realises his feelings for Nez... poetic is the term that comes to mind. And the angst!!!! lol Joo are teh QUEEN of teh FLUFF and teh ANGST!!!!!! Angst can sometimes kill a story 9 times out of 10 in fanfic angst is very poorly written but JOO!!!! Your angst is as good as JOOR Fluff!!! lol I love how you terroerize these charactors we have come to know and love. :) Another great chapter as always! I so adore this couple.
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