| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: April 20, 2005 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't rate, you know what I think. They never fixed that kitten...I sense a hoard of cats coming :whee: And for the people who mindless ask for lemons... oi... It's not nearly as juciy if you pick it too soon. If they want citrus that badly send 'em off to GW...orchard ye gads. Are you feeling better? I hope so, if I lived near you I'd help clean your house. And your devotion to us even when you were sick. We love you T-T. That kind of dedication is inspiring. Back to Story: I like it very, very much that you made Ryo's youkai somewhat sane. In all the other stories they make 'em out to be bloodlusting freaks. Um...hello? Yeah Sesshy a full youkai. HE doesn't kill everything he sees. Inu just does because whenever his Youkai comes out Inu's being ATTACKED. Hense BLOODLUST. I digress. Hope the Chaos is easier to control.
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Reviewed By: tinky On: April 20, 2005 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you think you can update more often, waiting sucks. your story is awsome!!!!! bitchs_unite@hotmail.com^_^
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 12:49 CDT
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Absolutely Beautiful! I cracked up when they were talking about the kitty. Inuyasha makes me laugh :) You're doing amazingly with this story - I never quite know where it's going to go, and I love that! It makes me a happy panda! (well...if I were a panda....)
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 20, 2005 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, an update! Great chapter, Nez's reaction at the begining was amazingly written. And Ryo saying he'd give it up...Wow. That was very sincere and loving and really good. Great job, I eagerly await the next chaper!
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Title: cute!
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww..... how sweet, he said that he would give up his job for her. I hope that she says no to the offer, any who Great Chapter! Keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: April 19, 2005 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww!!! so cute!! ..and kinda short. i'm greedy dammit! but really, good chap. still my fav of the purities. nez is the shit.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 19:16 CDT
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great chapter, update asap please, :D Zirra
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: April 19, 2005 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just a note to say that I am really, really, enjoying this story. Checking in daily. (I feel so spoiled/living the good life/ getting daily updates.) I hope Ryo does not change the most important aspects of his character, but it shows great dedication, that he would offer to give up something he relishes, for Nezumi. . . or maybe, Nezumi will grow in her emotions and abilities to deal with life's challenges. I have no idea which path this story will take next. Keep up the great writing. Thank You, Cynbad146
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Title: How cute!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, how cute!!!!!! It made me cry, too. I missed you yesterday!!! But since the chapter was extra good today, I forgive you. . . . lol. Awesome chapter as always and see ya later!!! Oh yeah, and yesterday was my Mom's birthday!!!! Now she's 46. Yay for her!!!!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 19, 2005 15:14 CDT
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Yea! Sue's writing. Missed you yesterday. Hope you were busy with something awsome and fun. Yet another great chapter. I like how you left the picture up to the imaination. I also enjoyed Inuyasha tormenting the cat and his assessment of how he and Kagome shop - she chooses and makes him pay for it. Looks like Ryo is starting to find his way through this relationship thing. Wow, offering to give up his job. Knowing how much he likes fighting and how protective Inuyokai seem to be of humans, he is offering to make a huge sacrifice. Of course if Nez says yes, lots of humans might die in addition to the less able hunter who would have to take over from Ryo. I hope Nez thinks things through before she answers. Ryo would do anything to please her but over time it would eat him up inside knowing that lives were being lost when he could put a stop to it. Interesting development. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 14:44 CDT
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Wow! Ryo offered to quit his youkai-hunting job. I wonder if Nez will take him up on that offer. He has mentioned how much he likes his job...but as neccessary as taking down rogue youkai is, her fear over losing him on one of his little missions may outway that consideration. Comprimise is almost as important as communication and honesty for the longevity of a healthy relationship. They both still have a lot of soul searching to do. -- I love this turbulent couple...our brash and cocky Ryo (just like his daddy, hehe) butting heads with Nez and crumbling her facade of tough confidence with the deep and tender emotions that take over when they are together...I like that warm feeling...WAFFage Galore! Thank you, it's such a great way to lift one's spirits.
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 13:44 CDT
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Aww....that was sweet of him to say...I wonder what her answer will be. The kitten is not stupid just playful...I remember when my cats were that small, scratches didn't even hurt, now you bleed forever lol.
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Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't log in) On: April 19, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just checked on this and I saw that you updated! For a minute, i had thought you were taking a vacation off of writing. Glad to see that I was wrong.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 19, 2005 12:55 CDT
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stupid or not, that kitten is cute!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: April 19, 2005 12:43 CDT
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great update. i loved the interaction with yash and that cat (and was waiting for it to swing at him. LOL) very well done, as always. it's interesting that ryo is willing to quit for her. now that's devotion!!! lol. great update sue!!!
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