| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 13:00 CDT
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*sniffles* They're so sad!!! :o( If they would just learn to talk to each other instead of jumping to conclusions and overanalyzing EVERYTHING, situations like that would not get so out of control... Arg... Bakas...
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Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Nez, that's alot to take in. But then I don't imagine there is really any easy way of explaining Ryo. I thought "human/youkai relations" was a pretty good euphamism (sp? O_o ) lol I loved how he stood up to his uncle about not leaving the woman alone. Thanks for the update. ---Official "Purity" Junkie TurtleDreamer
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Reviewed By: rowan_lynn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 12:17 CDT
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Awesome chapter Sue! I love this line :"Sesshoumaru is gonna blow an ass gasket" Ryo is so much like his dad sometimes. Again awesome chapter Sue and thanks for posting! ~mackie
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Title: Darn...to slow...now this will have to suffice for 2 chapters. :)
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 12:16 CDT
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I hate not having time to R&R in a timely fashion. I could not believe it! I think I felt as shocked as Nez when she saw the news report. The media got ahold of that quickly, and unfortunately I think that Japan, like most other countries, you are guilty until proven innocent. Good thing someone was on the ball and Uncle Sess showed up fast. There will be no more beating around the bush for Ryo. His compassion keeping him with the vicimized woman is commendible, no matter that in Sesshoumaru's opinion it was considerably foolhardy and rightfully so considering all that is at stake, but now Nezumi knows unequivocally what he does for a living and the rest will shortly follow...as it must if she is to completely understand. Her comment, "...I used to think that I knew you" was devistating at the least, for her and him both. Hopefully by morning, she will have settled herself enough to listen to what Ryo needs to tell her. -- As to the crass demands on your creativity and the abhorrant persecution you have undeservedly recieved from small-minded boors and juvinile delinquints that know nothing about the world and haven't got a lick of courtesy in thier twisted little hearts, continue to disgust me. Who do they think they are? You are a talented writer, generously sharing your 'mad skilz' with other fans and voracious readers like me *wink* and I cannot stand to hear the pain that they have inflicted upon your sensitive soul. Shameless bullys! If it were up to me - -lost tran |
Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 14, 2005 08:47 CDT
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Oops, forgot to weigh in on the lemon issue. I likes 'em when the time is right. Your stories are exactly what I like. It's the build up of tension before the lemon that makes the reward so satisfying. I don't generally read citrus free stories (unless I am a fan of the author or the story has been recommended) but straight porn is just boring (and generally poorly written). Your stories are perfect for me. They have loads of plot and character development along with great story lines. The sexual tension you build up between the characters is made even more compelling because it's not just a tease. Eventually something wonderful will happen for the characters. They (and the readers), however, get to have a great rollercoaster ride before the always beautiful and tastefully written resolution. Hats off to you and your amazing stories!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 14, 2005 08:31 CDT
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Oh geez! What a cliffie! Aargh. That's terrible. They put his face on the TV before even proving anything. Poor Ryo and his family. Even if the police do eventually realize they've got the wrong man, that taint will follow him forever. Ack. I'm beside myself. He's the good guy, for crying out loud. Groan! Thanks for another great chapter. Now my head's all messed up though. Sigh.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 14, 2005 02:19 CDT
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Ooohh man...How is Ryo going to get out of this one. If they do a DNA test on him will it show enomilies or something because he's hanyou? Oh no! He's single-handedly revealed the youki world! Stupid, stupid. Perhaps I'm getting carried away, no? Excellent chapter, Kagome talking to Nez was realy sweet. And dont worry about the perverts, some people just can't appriciate beautiful writing *sigh*. Sorry for them. They're missing out, really. You're a great writer, I so enjoy reading your stories. Please keep updating!
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Title: Baka
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: April 13, 2005 22:42 CDT
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Oh my, Ryo's soft spot... got him in trouble? Hard for any Hanyou to walk away from an injured human... DAMN that is gonna mess up Nez. Naughty, naughty Sue... I worry that Ryo's never gonna get it right with Nez. Now she's figured out he's an exterminator AND his momma just left after telling Nez that her "baby boy" ain't so bad... Then she's gotta determine if he's a rapist? You toture these poor characters... Oh my Sue... You're breaking my heart, I am really fond of the Baka Ryo... Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 21:05 CDT
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Sue...if it makes you feel any better, I don't really read the lemons because I feel that it isn't necessary for you to allow those hentai's their 'reward'. Now, I have to admit, I did read most of the lemons and I'm grateful that you actually had them based on LOVE instead of LUST! But your stories are just as wonderful as they are now without the lemons, and those who can't see that, they don't deserve to read your stories!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 13, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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(Chants with hip hop music)GO SUE! GO SUE! GO SUE! Glad to hear you tell the immature, rude asses, to buzz off! Story is still great! I love it! Thank You, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: anon..... On: April 13, 2005 20:14 CDT
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very good!
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pah! Who needs a lemon? I don't. You are an excellent writer who can write whatever the hell you want. Piss on everyone else. I like your story just the way it is. You write quality not trash. So I for one love your writing. Keep up what your doing it works. (not that you need my opinion or permission)
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: thegoddess On: April 13, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely think you're currently the best inu fanfic writer. If people want to beg for mindless sex tell them to go watch some porn. But all that aside I truely would like to extend my deepest gratitude for your work. It makes the hours spent looking for a readable fic worthwhile. Please for the love of kami, keep writing and don't let those @$$*%^holes tell you how your story should go.
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Title: Purity
Reviewed By: Fluff-maru-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOl nice Chapter. I love all the Purity Series. Your funny When it comes to lemons. I love the story so far and all your other fics and lemons aren't really that important or is it lol anyway keep up the good work. Ryo gets himself into alot of trouble. I hope Nez doesnt kill him for being on the tely for the misunderstanding rape thingy. Don't make it to tragic lol. KK UpDate Soon KAY! Signed Fluff-maru-Sama FmS
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: April 13, 2005 19:11 CDT
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Nice chappie title. ;) Oh, Ryo, Ryo, Ryo...what have you gotten yourself into now? I have to imagine that Sesshoumaru has some good contacts to help deal with this situation, but having Ryo's face plastered all over the news can't be a good thing. As for the lemon-hounds...WTF??? I don't get that at all. I love me my citrus, but only if there's a point. If that's all they're looking for, there's loads of other places to get it. Sheesh.
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