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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 › » ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: April 13, 2005 18:46 CDT
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great additions to the story. wow...i guess it is back to Sesshoumaru to the rescue, ne? geez has Ryo put himself up shits creak on that one!! eep? and with the disappearing bodies, this is not going to be easy. and jails in japan...oh no. LOL, great additions to the story, i can't wait to see where this goes!!!!
| Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I agree with you. I am a lemonhead, but I don't usually beg for them. I never beg for them in this story because the story is way better than the lemons because it HAS emotion, it HAS a plot. I don't mean to insult other writers, but. . . . You get my point, right? Good--Great chapter as always!! See ya tommorow!
| Title: YATTA!
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well said Sueric!!!!! Why would someone only read your stories for lemons; you don't really have that many of them in there, with the exception of Metamorphosis. I can't understand why people would beg you for them when your stories aren't even about them. People these days...anyway, now Ryomaru is in prison, I hope Nezumi will believe that he is innocent. Oh, this isn't going to be good, not good at all...I wonder what Inuyasha's going to do when he finds out...or worse...Kagome! Yikes!!!
| Reviewed By: btrains126 On: April 13, 2005 17:21 CDT
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Ok. Sesshomaru let him get arrested? Shouldn't the Inu no Taisho be keeping things like that from the news? Slightly confused at what Nezumi's thoughts are right now - her sentences aren't complete - I'm sure that you'll explain next chapter (Although I know already but still - its nice to see it in writing). I always thought that PWP meant Plot? What Plot? but to each his/her own. Woohoo! You tell those hentais! You would think that by now they would have gotten the message - you've only written a gazillion stories - each saying "Lemons if and when necessary only" Geez, can't they take a hint?
| Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:55 CDT
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Oh, for crying out loud!!!! Why on earth do people keep doing that and pissing off the author???? What on earth is so necessary about LEMONS that they have to be inserted every three chapters in every fic?? Aaarrrgghhh ... I'm more frustrated about that author's note than I am about the fact that my hard drive crashed and I lost five years of my LIFE! I'm just glad that you are still writing ... period ... lemon or NO lemon! I'm also VERY GLAD to see that FINALLY one of the more wise, intuitive, caring family members decided to let Nez in on PART of what's going on with Ryo. Sorry, but it was a little overdue, in my book ... although, I'm sure it all fits in with your overall EVOL plans to torture the poor guy some more and keep your readers guessing as well, right? You still do not disappoint ... and I've missed being able to review regularly ... but I'm managed to steal computer time here and there to make sure I kept up with the story anyway! ;-D
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:38 CDT
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OMG!!! that SUX for ryo...WOW wut a turn of events....!!!! i cant believe the luck for him....rape n murder?! and it looks like nez believes it....uh-oh....
| Reviewed By: machallFREAK On: April 13, 2005 16:31 CDT
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ha, sucks for ryo.
| Title: Voices?
Reviewed By: tachi_fossae [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:20 CDT
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Is the voice in Ryo's head his youki? At first I thought he was just arguing with himself, but now the voice seems to be a separate entity. A part of him, to be sure, but separate none the less.
| Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: April 13, 2005 15:38 CDT
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Where to start? I'm sorry but I am currently laughing hysterically. "Asking for 'lemons' is now constructive critisism..." HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! I think that I am more laughing over the fact that people are actally suggesting that it the most hysterical part. Oh Sue. I really do feel bad for all of the shit that you must have to deal with. You really should hire a PR agent so that you do not have to directly deal with this. I'd glady do it if I had more time. haha. I can see it now. "blah blah blah, I want lemons, blah blah blah" Me: Dear complainer, eat shit and die. (I swear, that's what they taught us in public relations, hehehehe... okay, maybe I lied a little..) Back to the current chapter of this fabulous story--- Ut oh spaghettios! What happens now that Ryo has been caught?! Lucy! You have some essssssssssssplaining to do! Hopefully Ryo comes clean to nez. It just kills me when he doesn't-- but it's what makes part of the story, and if it wasn't there-- it wouldn't be the same story. It's kinda like you're damned if ya go, damned if ya don't. Oh well. Terrific job!! Cannot wait to see what happens next!!! Good luck with the complianers. Hasta Luego! --Aitu
| Title: WOW...
Reviewed By: Realangel (on FF.Net & MM.org) On: April 13, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!....Ryo arrested!! FOR RAPE & MURDER!...And how can he be cleared?...the only living victim is in surgery and probably won't remember clearly who attacked her(Come on it was dark alley and she was scared)...and Ryo can't let them test his sperm cuz he's a hanyou and I doubt that fact can be overlooked. Ryo is facing a life sentence, seriously. Craziness...Pure Craziness!!...and what is Nez gonna do?...I'm pretty sure she knows that he didn't do it....but, the reason he was there that's another story..he's gonna catch hell for that one...if he ever gets outta jail...This really can't be good for the relationship...Wow...I'm still in shock...Fantastic job on this chapter, Sue!! I'm amazed at ur "mad writing skillz"! LOL...I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Always a fan, ~*~Realangel~*~
| Reviewed By: Turtle Dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's too bad that some silly puckers think that they have to yank the author's chain. They obviously have no literary sense whatsoever. On to greater things! I love your stories! The "Purity" series is incredible. I look forward to your updates. Have a great day!
| Reviewed By: D.V. On: April 13, 2005 14:31 CDT
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Poor Sue. You're writing some of the best, most enjoyable stuff I've ever come across, and people just keep picking at you. I'll be really sad if they make you stop writing. I admit, I DO like the occaisional, well-written Lemon, but it does give me the creeps to see so many people just blatantly insisting on them, or becoming threatening over them. That's just sad. I know it's gotta be incredibly hard, but please know that there are SOME normal people out here (well, maybe not quite 'normal', but close, LOL) who are appreciating your efforts, and thinking fondly of you for all your hard work. We don't really know you, but you've left a definite impression on a lot of us, I'm sure, with your characters, and your obvious love for your stories. I think you've also inspired a lot of people, too. Anyway, blah, blah, bliddy-blah, I loved this chapter - as if I'm ever dissapointed - and am eagerly awaiting the next. Feel better, K? D.V.
| Reviewed By: Ultima X On: April 13, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I wanted to say that you are an awesome writer. I've read all of your Inuyasha stories and I've enjoyed everyone. But why didn't Ryo try to escape? I think he would have been fast enough. But it's your story and you decide in which direction it goes. Don't let some idiots who beg for lemons and flame get to you. Your the best and fastest writer I have seen until now. I'll wait for your next update.
| Reviewed By: thebigguy On: April 13, 2005 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay this just gets better abd better. I wait for updates impatiantly every day. I check for updates every few hours and when one comes up it is like getting a christmas gift. I understand it takes time to create greatness i am just a little impatiant when I read a really good story. I LOVE the purity series. I reread Purity 1 just too pass the time and the heartfelt emotions and longing that was there the first time were still there and even more intense, and they have been weaved just as intensly in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. BTW Man do you have it in for Ryo or what Hahaha that was a cruel thing to do but all will come out a-okay but maybe your teaching him a lesson that will make him a better man. Thank you The Bigguy
| Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 13:07 CDT
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First off, Ryo and Nez arguing with themselves? Hilarious. It seems like sometimes they have more interaction with themselves than they do with each other!!! lol :o) Second, UH OH!!! Ryo's really got himself into a mess now. I hope Nez realizes quickly that he didn't do it or this could be really detramental to their already very fragile relationship. As for people asking for lemons, good god. How insulting... Just ignore them Sue.
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