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Reviewed By: Decoy On: April 13, 2005 13:03 CDT
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Damn all of you awful people who keep asking Sueric for meaningless lemons.... Get a life.. Get 9 of them! On a lighter note, why didn't Ryo simply use his super-duper hanyou powers to escape from the cops when they were bringing him in.
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this was a cute chapter. I love how you went from the apt to them moved into the house. didnt get what nez bought. was it a nicer scent of perfume or hopefully some flattering clothes?. Why does ryo have to be the ONLY one to fight nasty demons? Doesn't sessy hire anyone to help him. I don't get it. its almost as if sess just drops it in ryo's lap and then he's got to deal with it all alone???. Okay and did uou say that Kag wanted Inu to have a talk with ryo about the finding the mate birds and the bees???. cant wait for that talk!!! lol okay great chapter.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 13, 2005 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! Oh, thought I would die when Ryomaru walked in on her! I know why he didnt put in sower curtains, the sly dog. I loved her reaction and the "You drop your towel" line was hilarious. Fantastic chapter, the whole way through. Keep 'em comin'!!
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Title: =)
Reviewed By: Inuyashas_wishing_star [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 22:58 CDT
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Once again another great chapter! Cant wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about not reviewing yesterday, I've been sick and didn't get the chance to come on...Went to the doctor's, I have bronchitus (sp?) and an ear infection. Poor Ryo, having to deal with a cat, what next? I hope he tells Nez about his job soon; the sooner the better.
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Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't feel like logging in) On: April 12, 2005 22:47 CDT
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Chemical Warfare...good name for the chapter. It'll be interesting to see how Nez will react to what Ryo does, too.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: April 12, 2005 20:40 CDT
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2 chapters!!!!!!!! yey!! it was great! i'm excited about the upcoming fight scene... i assume there will be one... and i can't wait till nez finds out what ryo does.
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai(nsi) On: April 12, 2005 18:01 CDT
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You know, all you can really do is beg and hope. But bribery makes hope more effective! Looks like Ryo has learned this pretty well. The only problem with bribery is that it comes back to bite you, or in this case, claw you. Is Inuyasha going to play with yukitora too? Like he did to Buyo? that would be funny if inuyasha and kagome came to visit and he started messing with the cat after he got board from talking.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:00 CDT
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uh-oh so nez could be in danger???? and she doesnt even know why since ryo didnt tell her about his "job"...interesting...and i agree with sesshoumaru "like father like son" haha
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. I have to agree with Sesshomaru's final thought. Like father. like son. . . . .It's certainly true in my family. Great chapter as always and I will be looking forward to your updates! Wow, I like this story more than school, and for a nerd like me, that's REALLY hard to believe.
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Reviewed By: jadedlati [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 16:08 CDT
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great chapter like always. Glad that you and your family are feeling better.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 13:18 CDT
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O.o? Is it just me, or does Ryo's youkai voice seem to actually be smarter than Dog-boy Jr. #1? I thought it was supposed to be more primitive, primal. And Ryo is activly arguing with himself...LOL! -- Smelly warfare! I wonder if Nez would continue to assault Ryo's nose if she chooses a stink so strong, he's out of commision from it. We have all seen how quick InuYasha would go down from a particularly putrid stench and it seems that Ryo's olfactory senses are no less as strong, making him just as susceptible. - I hope that Ryo heeds his youkai's prodding and his Uncle Sess' advice...and soon. Full disclosure is staring him in the face and he can't put it off any longer. His reluctance to tell Nez like it is, smacks of cowardice but her safety is now in question. Chin up, Bucko! You can handle a little yelling. Quit stalling and get it over with. Maybe once Nez has the whold picture, it will help her reticence over accepting the reality of their changed relationship. -- God Sue! Your stories are better than Chocolate! *silly grin* And more addictive!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 13:07 CDT
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Oh dear, now they're both acting like small children! lol But I have to say, Nez is pretty clever.... I love that the kitten was "scolding" Ryo! Hilarious! I wonder how Nez is going to react to the whole marking thing. Somehow I don't think that is going to go over well...
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Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 11:04 CDT
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That was a great chapter, but Sesshoumaru's comment about him not wanting Toga to fight made me think. It's understandable that he wouldn't want his son to fight, but does it also have to do with Sierra and Toga having a baby? That also made me think to a few chapters back when they made their announcement, was Seirra already pregnant or were they just saying that Toga had agreed to try for a baby? (I remember how Sierra said he didn't want to share her or something like that.) My mind works in strange ways sometimes, LoL. Anyway, like I said, that was another great chapter. I love how the kitten 'scolded' Ryo. That was too cute. I just lurve cats!
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: April 12, 2005 10:57 CDT
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*chuckles* I love the way you write Sesshoumaru
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