| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akihana (its not letting me log in...grr) On: April 12, 2005 10:54 CDT
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I almost feel sorry for Ryo. He's sure gonna go through a lot to keep Nezumi. Though, maybe this will convince her that he is actually serious. I know you have said that your writing isn't great, but it you have amazing talent with plots and story development. I always look forward to updates on your stories. I love the Purity continuations too. The characters are really well developed, especially for characters you created. I look forward to your next update, and reading Nez and Ryo bantering again. Man, the spam thing is really irritating.
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 12, 2005 10:46 CDT
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Too bad the relationship has devolved into punishing each other. Good thing Ryo and Nez are in a fiction and at the hands of a talented and generally merciful writer as these sorts of relationships usually don't end well. It gets too easy for the petty squables to become the focus of the relationship. Thanks for the great chapter.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 12, 2005 10:13 CDT
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Nez is in trouble isn't she? I know that she used to practice some sort of martial art, and would be able to defend herself against a human well enough. Maybe seeing believes for her, maybe that would make all the rest of it real.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 12, 2005 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dont worry about getting this story back on track. Take care of your family first their the ones important here. Hope you are all feeling great by the end of the week. Just dont think of the story and time shall fly. Good Luck
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Reviewed By: Kraffin33 On: April 12, 2005 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!! I knew it!! Ryo got the kitty!!!! XD
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Title: Kawaii ...
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 03:16 CDT
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Heh, heh ... so Ryo got Nezumi a sweet, fluffy white kitten. Very kawaii chapter, Sue. :)
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 12, 2005 01:21 CDT
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Ok, first things first: AWWWWW!!!! Baby kitties are SO cute! It was really sweet and really tricky of Ryo to do that...but so cute! Ahem. I loved this chapter, I was so happy to see you've updated! And everyones healthy again, so happy for you! I hope you continue to find time to write, I cant wait to read more! EAP
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Reviewed By: Mayu-chan On: April 11, 2005 20:55 CDT
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I just wanted to tell you I have been a silent reader of Chronicles and all of your Purity fics and I just love all of them, their addicting! I read Chronicles awhile ago(loved it), and just last month I read Purity(loved it too!) and ever since then I could put any of them down, so to speak. You are an awesome author and I hope you continue to keep posting your fictions on the web for all of us Purity junkies to read, :). Ohh and I just read Purity 4 last night and I gotta say I just can't wait. Keep up the good work and I'm glad everybody's feeling better at your house. Mayu-chan
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Reviewed By: Lisa C On: April 11, 2005 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God. I thought I was going through Sueric withdraw for awile there. *do a happy dance*
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 18:03 CDT
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Awwww, he got her a kittie!!! lol That's so... underhanded. lol Glad that you and your family are feeling better! No more getting sick!!! :o)
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Title: Sleeping?
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: April 11, 2005 17:22 CDT
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Yeah! "claps hands in glee" I am so glad that everyone is healthy there! Did you get some rest now that your not chasing sick little ones and Oi are the sick husbands the worst? They whine more than the kids when they're sick! Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: April 11, 2005 17:15 CDT
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LMAO!!! Heheheh... This was just priceless. That cat is definitely NOT stupid ("Stupid Baka" ROTFL!) - she's got Ryo right where she wants him. And he deserves nothing less for stooping to such an underhanded tactic. I'm glad your family is feeling better! :)
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:04 CDT
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thats sweet to give nez a cat for christmas...but definitly low to make her move in with him like that but she said shes gonna get him back for doing it so THAT should be interesting lol...[glad to hear everyone is feeling better!]
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Title: Baka Ryo
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, congrats on the family is all better thing!!!!!! I was getting mad that you were updating until I saw the note. Well, I hvae to say, Ryo just keeps coming up with more idiotic things to do everyday. Ya gotta love 'im. Yet another great chapter and I will look forward to your updates!!!!!!!!^_^
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Title: Glad to have you back...
Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't feel like logging in) On: April 11, 2005 16:48 CDT
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Giving Nez a cat for Christmas in order to get her to move in with him was really low of Ryo, but I liked the chapter. It's good that everyone in your family is feeling better. Glad to have you back, Sue. Hasn't been the same without you.
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