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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 › » ] | Title: I still love that chapter
Reviewed By: LMAO15 On: March 29, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As one of your fastest written chapters, I still am giggling even after I finished it. This had some of the best lines in in, including Toga insisting he wasn't afraid of Gin...showing just HOW much like his father he really is. Course, I don't blame him after the barb that Gin threw him, about almost getting killed by a couple of kitties. My...that was LOW. The first part of the chapter was amusing, but I wonder just what it does mean if ryo can't hear his youkai...would explain why he keeps 'talking' to himself. His youkai is trying to thwap him in the head. I am sure that sooner or later he will listen to it instead of arguing with it. Did you know you are the only author where reading the reviews is almost as amusing as the chapter? They make me laugh....LOL
| Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 10:09 CST
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Ah, so InuYasha didn't have to ask Ryo, he had to ask Sesshoumaru ... no wonder Kagome "owed" him!!! I still don't understand why someone in the younger generation wouldn't notice how upset Nez was by the fighting and explain things to her (especially since the whole family can tell Ryo hasn't told her ANYTHING). As for poor Ryo ... one baby step forward, two GIANT steps backward, huh? This should be good for at least two or three angst-ridden chapters before poor Nez even begins to see the light - or poor Ryo even begins to get within 10 feet of her! You have no idea how much I look forward to this each day ... thanks!!! :-D
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 29, 2005 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. you know, out of all of the fics that you have written with the abundant amount of chappies, this chapter is by far my favorite. i laughed from the opening line to the end. that was just halarious!!! i'm still trying to decide what tickled me more: Sesshoumaru swatting at InuYasha with a rolled up newspaper, Nez's reation to the two older bakas fighting, Sesshoumaru's reaction to Toga getting his ass handed to him by Gin...or Kagura's interfearence. that was PRICELESS. ...::snicker:: romper room...that is GREAT!!!! LMAO. ohh....you managed to do it agian, anoter great chappy i mean. excellent job!!! (btw- i know you left anime spiral but i feel obligated to tell you that you're up for best overall fic on metamorphosis.). :-) GREAT job and keep it up! this chapy was priceless
| Reviewed By: fruitcake On: March 29, 2005 09:33 CST
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lol.
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 29, 2005 09:29 CST
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Family of Youkai fight as entertainment... Nez is going to have issues...
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 29, 2005 09:22 CST
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Kichero's two "helpful" words made me laugh. Such brothers. He's right though, Ryo is really being dense about Nez. Poor Nez. I hope she can eventually learn to accept Ryo for what he is, 'cause he's pretty cool. He'll be even cooler when he's not so dumb. (grin)
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 09:20 CST
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still lovin every chapter. When will Ryo actually do something right with nez? seems like all he does is get himself in trouble with her.
| Title: Review Pt. 2
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 08:56 CST
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...and surprisingly, Sesshomaru this time not dragging his brother threw too many flaming hoops before bequeathing the answers. And Sessh has only himself to blame for Inuyasha's appalling lack of knowledge, though IMO IY's none-the-worse for that lack, and far stronger a personality for what he's endured to get this far. Yeah! Hah, Kagome continues her miko role as matriarch, LOLROTF!! Thanks are insufficient for your latest literary outpourings, but I say it anyway: THANKS SO MUCH!!! WARM AND FUZZY DAY after a hella week medically from additional complications, you'll never know how so very MUCH, SO damned much it means for me to be able to grasp some hafts of light. Helps me take care of my fam that much better, even when primarily incapable;to go that extra mile. You don't need this much info...but,in light of your recent disappointments, I think you do,the tremendous difference an author can make--in this case, YOU. {{{{ }}}}
| Title: Review Pt 1
Reviewed By: Washuu Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 08:56 CST
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Priceless, the chapters. First, Nezumi agreeing to accompany Ryo to the contractor's office as she slowly continues to deepen her mate's hold on her life in all aspects. The ice cream cone scene? HILARIOUS, as the hit-to-the-nuts flashback, the touching reminder of Ryo's that he'd never let her fall with the swing...the wonderfully heart-wrenching subtle tenderness as Nezumi please, "My terms"? And, Ryo not only acquiesces, but he suffuses slightly yet again--and she *catches* this,allows herself to comprehend the import, at least the barebones.And that painting idea? Consummate genious. Oh,oh,oh, you just keep enriching this amazing, continuing Saga. Hah, All Hail Inu Family Tessaiga Shoving Festivities in all its multi-generational Gloria!!! LOLROTF--poor Nez, tho, and in Ryo's cheerful bloodlust, he completely forgot just *why* she'd be so affected,after the memory dredging the previous night. Oh, I hope he didn't completely undo the hesitant strides accomplished into softening her stance!!! Kich had the sense, but Ryo just didn't listen, Baka! But, she did need to come to grips with this integral aspect of family life. Oh yeah, loved the comfort level in the exchange between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. Heh, the fastidious Inotaisho eschewing IY's bare feets on the desk, LOLROTF
| Title: *dying of laughter*
Reviewed By: Lady_Yukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 07:59 CST
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Oh this chapter is priceless. I would soo pay to see a picture of Sesshoumaru thwapping InuYash's feet. *snickers* I love reading about their family get togethers. And I'm glad to see that Kagura still has all of the boys still quacking in their toes in fear of her fans and temper. But I feel bad for poor Nez. *sighs* Kich is right, Ryo is a dumb ass. lol, but he's such a lovable one. I can't wait to see how he gets out of the doghouse noew.
| Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: March 29, 2005 07:23 CST
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Very entertaining. It's always a laugh fest whenever Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get out the swords to "play." Looks like Nez didn't really take it that well.. ah, that's to be expected. Loved the "two words" for Ryo, hahaha. Cannot wait to see what happens next! loves it! --Aitu
| Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 29, 2005 07:10 CST
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Just wanted you to know that you had me laughing outloud several times during that chapter. Thank you.
| Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: March 29, 2005 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so interesting...I was wondering how they all vented, since Inuyasha can't exactly go on forest clearing sprees anymore...poor Nezumi...I hope she kicks his butt when he finds her! Anyway Keep up the great work!
| Title: Ah yes
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
boys will be boys lol. Interesting chapter. I wonder how nez is going to take to ryo's profession. Especially due to she cant stand blood. I assume that since she is a tough ass that she was more upset about the possibility of someone bleeding than the display of fighting.
| Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 06:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I love the conversations between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha! You crack me up with the way you have them baiting each other (mostly Sesshoumaru). I can just see Sesshoumaru swatting at his feet! How will you be able to get Nezumi to lose her fear of blood though? The family she is mated into is pretty much always going to have to deal with blood one way or another. I can't wait to see how you pull it off though. Thanks for another great chapter!
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