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Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: March 28, 2005 17:53 CST
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Aww 17 was really cute. GO NEZ! heh, I'm so proud of her! ^_^ Ryo and Nez are just so adorable. Good for her for having the courage to give him a kiss on the cheek. I love the painting too, it sounds really beautiful. lol, I always end up with this stupidly happy grin on my face whenever I read one of your chapters! That's a good thing!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:49 CST
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awww wut a sweet update!! haha hmm i wonder if that painting that kagome got is to help out the 2 of them with their trusting problems...at least those two seem to be gettin closer!!!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for asking my question...that was a very cute chapter. I wonder when she's going to start believing in the 'mating' thing...hmm...
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Reviewed By: yasha 101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how sweet! So nez finaly got the courage to do something. I wish she would of just acsepted ryo'2s gester for what it was. but I guess the suspence her reluctance causes is what makes it so fun to read. At least she is getting closer to understanding that she is not like the other girls to him. later yasha
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Title: Cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you posted another chapter. I think I go through withdrawls on the weekends. Reading this story is the bright spot of my morning. Really nice chapter. It was fluffy but you didn't take it to the point where it would rot your teeth. It sounds like Ryo's youkai is smarter than he is. Oh well, like father like son, huh. I seem to remember another pighead hanyou that couldn't get his act together until it was almost too late. I think this is exactly what their relationship needs. They didn't have the time to gradually move from friends to lovers beforehand so now they must do it afterwards. I just think that their date was so cute. And if they survive without killing each other while designing the house then it means their relationship can handle anything.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha and Ryo are so easy to sway... All it takes is a few pretty pleases and some eyelash batting and they're gone. lol I have a question, have you ever considered writing a Miroku/Sango fic? I love those two, but I have yet to find a half way decent fic about them. I know you would do them justice. :o)
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 11:59 CST
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I bypassed the silly ratings, since I always make it all 10s anyway ... wow, things are really starting to gel for Ryo and Nez, huh? I'm dying to figure out what the unspoken "you don't think ... ?" stuff is between Kagome and InuYasha!! Obviously, it has something to do with Ryo and Nez's childhood friendship, but I can't imagine what it could be that Ryo would actually remember ... hmmm, this will keep me busy for a while! Great idea with the portrait that Kagome had done - can hardly wait to hear the reaction to that one too!! Thanks for another enjoyable chapter! :-D
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 28, 2005 11:52 CST
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I'm glad there was no crying this time. Ryo is so damn sweet when he wants to be... or maybe he's just a sweetie all the time - there had to be a reason that she hung around him for so long. "Nah, Kich is still around." LOL. What's Yasha going to ask?? Ryo said that he'd protect her all those years ago... he's own undoing...mawhahaha
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Title: I smiled all the way through this chapter...my cheeks hurt.
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:39 CST
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This was so cute, and fun. I loved the painting, awwwwwwwwww. And Kagome's needling InuYasha to 'ask' Ryo...hehe. His reaction was almost, "How can he not know if his youkai chose Nez? He can't be that thickheaded!" But Kagome knows her wonderfully thickheaded mate...and some traits always breed true! LMAO - Awwwwww (there I go again) the moment between Ryo and Nez at the swing was so warm and fuzzy. I loved it. And Nez has discovered that, as strong and confident Ryo might be, she has the upper hand. I bet if she tried, she could have him stuttering like a schoolboy. *giggle* -- What a great way to officially start the week! Thanks Sue!
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Reviewed By: AkuPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww, what a sweet chapter. When she said on her terms, I thought she was going to knee him in the groin, but it is very apparent that she is really enjoying herself now and letting Ryo help. She seems to be letting out a more carefree side and I think it has caught Ryo hook-line-and sinker XD. And it seems that Inu and Kag have an inkling about Ryo's youkai choosing her, but it is adorable to imagine it choosing her back when they were so young! Great chapter, as always!
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Reviewed By: Catnel On: March 28, 2005 09:29 CST
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Sueric! I found you! :) I am so glad I found your writings again. I was going through Purity 3 withdrawls. :) The story is going so well, and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work. Sad about Nezumi's mom. Made me cry... It's not her fault at all, but a child takes so much burden upon their souls when they shouldn't.
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Title: like dating
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness!! How cute it's like their dating. Well anyway I am such a glutton that I was hoping due to the weekend you would post an extra chapt. I am getting fat on this story (better than cake). lol . Great chapter sue, I like how you referred back to inu and kag's relationship (friends first then lovers). I think those relationships last the longest and the most profound. The kiss by the swing it looks like nez is finally realizing the impact she has on ryo (or vise-versa). Love it!!! Thanks again, sue. J
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Title: so sweet
Reviewed By: Deep Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah so sweet and funny while I am a fan of agnst it's good to see them just enjoying each other. I bet that picture is so sweet! I like the current direction and can't wait to see where this goes, good job
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Title: great chappies
Reviewed By: littleolmee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapters, poor nez to loose her mom that way. no wonder she is such a tom boy. love how they are slowly getting closer, he has a house being built, to sweet and her own room and bath (far away! lol) she is breaking through him isn't she? thanks for another great chapter. littleolmee
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 28, 2005 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello great updates as always. I have an announcement I wanted to make. I believe it is time for us to take action. Action against the flamers on tthese fanfiction sites. These people are ruining the experience for authors everywhere. They are torturing these writers and they dont even give it a second thought. I know how those authors feel. I once wrote my own Inu/Kag fict and After I recieed my reviews I just ended up deleting the story and now I only review. So it is about time someone took this to the administrators of these sites and put a stop to this Flaming. Whose with me?! We must put a stop to these people! There stupidity is starting to ruin these sites. These people should be given a warning about this and if done again be banned from these sites all togather. So stand up for what you think is right and tear down these FLAmers!!!! That is all I have to say. Great story Sueric hope you update real soon.
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