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| "LOVE POISON" Reviews/Comments [ 202 ] | | Pages (14): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is ironic that both Inuyasha and Kagome both fear themselves but not the other. I really love your story and a lack of an conclusion or even a continuation is driving me nuts. So please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 15:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You going to give Kagura a happy ending? I know what is happening or going to happen to her. Kikyou has really gone off the deep end in your fic. Well, the body that looks like Kikyou. I don't hate Kikyou, frankly I pity her but I disagree with her actions. As soon as she found out the truth of what happened between her and Inuyasha she should have been content and ended her resistance. The fact that she was reincarnated meant she found peace and her reincarnate did what she never could, love Inuyasha as he was. To accept him without demanding change and trusting him and in return Inuyasha trusts her. If she truly loves Inuyasha she should have been happy that Kagome loved Inuyasha as she never could and that Kagome healed his heart. By simply staying, preserving her false existence it proves that she is not the real Kikyou but only a shadow. If she went through with dragging Inuyasha to Hell her soul would return to Kagome, her reincarnate, and Inuyasha would be left alone. Everything about Kikyou is sorry, especially because she causes her own by refusing to let go. I hated the fact that Kagura died in canon, I liked her. She was the only "bad guy" character I liked. I could understand her because I too want to be as free as the wind but is enslaved. Kagura by Naraku and I by the fact I'm human. I hope she gets a happy ending in your story. I am actually sad that I am finishing chapters because it means I am going to run out of them to read soon. So could you please update soon. Your fan and hopefully friend, Ivellios
| Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 22:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter is so absolutely heartbreaking that I can barely stand it. I can only hope that I too will be able to bring such emotions with my writing. Hope things are going well and I hope you update soon since I don't want to stop reading.
| Reviewed By: avidreader On: February 14, 2007 01:08 EST
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i love it! please please please update!!!!
| Title: yay!
Reviewed By: tarashi On: February 12, 2007 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story. It's incredibly creative and beautifully written. I hope you haven't given up on this story. I'm really really looking forward to reading more!
| Title: *smirks*
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 05:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
yes, i actually signed in, just to leave you another review. You deserve more reviews, and i want people to read this story. You put enough time and effort for it to be truely remarkable. So im gonna review it everyonce in a while, in hopes you will update it soon. And when you do finally finish this story i want you to write a new one. I eagerly look forward to any future endeavors you partake. Autumn
| Title: yay u rock
Reviewed By: too lazy to sign in On: October 01, 2006 05:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, im too tired to sign in, its 5:25 am. But, i wanted to tell you that this fic is awesome and i want you to continue writing. I want to know what happens next!!! :) keep up the good work and until next update.. Autumn_the_Reviewer
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 15:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I forgot! I have questions. *cough* Okay... 1)What's going to happen to Kagura. I know Sesshomaru's on his way to rescue her, but the last time you gave a look into what was happening with Naraku-tachi, he went downstairs and smiled at Kagura. That's not good. Can't be. Another question is 2)Just how long is Kikyo going to be in possession of Kagura's heat and soul? 3)Why do you say 'souls', instead of 'soul', for that matter? Just wondering if it's a religious thing. I know some religions/cultures believe the body has many - up to seven I think - souls, not only one like Christianity. 4)Will Kagome's mother ever have a serious conversation with Kagome (with or without Inuyasha present) about their current relationship? I know you said she 'trusts her daughter' and would wait for Kagome to come to her, but damn... Umm… I think that's about it for now. Oh yeah. I meant to say OOC-ness for my Sango and Miroku comment and 'non-chalant' in my previous review. ^^;;;; Bye~!! *wavies* (again) ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: Kawaii Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! ^o^ How much do I love this story?! *Gives you a cookie* Your plot is very well thought out. I hate to admit it, but it's hard to predict what's going to happen next (though, for an author, I guess that's a good thing). I am a little upset with a couple of the characterizations though. Well, Sango and Miroku's to be more specific. I know Sango isn't very trusting (given her profession and the way her family raised her, it'd be natural for her to be racist, for lack of a better term), but Miroku DOES trust Inuyasha not to hurt them in the manga as well as the anime. He's less of a monk and more of a pacifist, albeit a perverted one, because of that. I didn't think you'd actually have him doubt not only Inuyasha, but also Kagome, Shippou and Kaede's constant reassurances. And this probably sounds mean, but I think he and Koga disserved what they got. Miroku should have just known better. They know Inuyasha has never hurt Kagome when he transformed. Not to mention, Koga's instincts told him to leave and he didn't listen. I think your method is just about the only way Koga'd understand Kagome doesn't want him (though I suspect while he does care about Kagome in the manga and anime, him stating his 'claim' is more of ritual. I don't think he hates, or even really dislikes Inuyasha that much). In any case, I hope you have Inuyasha's youkai side'll react that way to Kikyou next time you have them see/run into her. That's a really good way to 'heal' his human side; get rid of the problem all together. = ) I AM glad that you're not having Kagome and Inuyasha as well as Kagura and Sesshomaru just jump into bed with each another. Nor are you having them ignore one another. While they have issues to work through and certain problems to overcome, they still acknowledge each other. I'm happy you for noticed this and wanted to thank you for that characterization. Makes them more... realistic. You know? I do have one suggestion though. You should really proof read. I know you're not American, but maybe you can get a beta that speaks English fluently? Or at least download the US/English version of Microsoft Word (or your country's equivalent). The spelling, grammar, word association and subject-verb agreement mistakes are becoming fewer in number as the chapters go on, but they're still present (i.e. you say 'especifically' and 'nonchalant' instead of 'specifically' and 'nonchalant' and '…he'd wearing…' instead of '…he's wearing…'). Other than that, I really like this story. ^o^ *claps*You should post it on www.fichaven.org when you have the chance. It's a really good fanfiction site on it's way to becoming the new (and much more organized, in my opinion) mediaminer.org. I hope you update soon~!! Til next review… *wavies* ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
| Title: Absolutely amazing and enjoyable!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 04:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is absolutely wonderful! ^^ I just had to say that to start, hehe. I have to be honest, I started reading this fic on AFF.net and moved here because I find fics easier to read on MM.org. Anyways, I love your characterization. You keep the characters in character while adding your own unique touch to their personalities. I enjoy the way you take your time developing the Inuyasha/Kagome relationship, and I'm not just saying that because they are my favourite Inuyasha pairing. ^^ I was hooked on this story the moment I started reading it. Trust me, it's no surprise you won awards for it since the way you combine the scenery, characters, events, all of it, brings the story to life with such delicious description. Reading other fics after reading yours made me realize that sometimes authors tend to rush the relationship development and it takes away from the enjoyment of the story. You know how to make a good, stable plot and how to advance it with skill. You do a wonderful job with the limes and I can't wait to read the lemons later!! Don't worry, I'm patient. ;) hehehe. I like the direction in which eveything is going and how you leave the reader in suspense every chapter. It's a very good plot device that you take excellent advantage of. ^^ I do hope Kouga has finally learned his lesson and in that same moment I foudn Miroku to be incredibly stupid for holding Kagome back. I mean, the guy witnessed what happened in the village before when Inuyasha mindlessly attacked the barrier with him in it, lol. Poor Monk seems wise but I guess Sango sees him most clearly, the pervert houshi that never learns. :P lol. Anyways, I just wanted to make sure I let you know how much I enjoyed this fic and that I'll be continuing to read new chapters as you post them here on MM.org. Keep up the excellent work and I encourage you to keep writing no matter what other people or reviewers say. You have talent! ^^
| Reviewed By: Kitsune Hanyou On: June 25, 2006 00:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Are you ever gonna update?! You're killing us with the suspense! Kitsune Hanyou
| Reviewed By: Lori On: June 15, 2006 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just reread the last chapter. I absolutely can't wait for another! Your writing is incredible. Keep it up.
| Reviewed By: tearzofred On: June 09, 2006 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE hurry up with the next chap! im a new reader and i love your story! i hope that you can continue! please hurry up with what your doing! please pretty pretty please finish!
| Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 17, 2006 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a HOT-T chapter! Someone, please, get me a fan, quick! (Waves hand back and forth to move air...and swoons.) Did you say lime? What a limon! Your writing amazes me. You write like you have been doing this for a very long time. You have much talent. Some parts that I so enjoyed: "last puppy in the shop look," I can see InuYasha doing this, most definitely; "'would not possess his bitch," gotta love his possessiveness; "InuYasha was struggling with his body and mind," very much in character; "It's...it's your fault," I really loved this,"didn't like the idea of his bitch leaving him for a second," shows how much he cares; there were many more. I blew a fuse LingMAO in regard to your comment about Naraku's tentacles and creepy hentai movies; soooo right. Sorry that I am late with my review. I thought that I was checking every night. (Little chaos in my life currently.) I humbly bow to the most artistic YM for sharing such a wonderful chapter. Cynbad146
| Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, I caught up! (Somehow MM.org decided to not alert me that you had updated twice. Grr...) And wow...excellent! These past few chapter were really good, especially love getting insight to the character's thoughts. I don't think I've ever mentioned it, but you are really good at that. :) And just so you know, I have been known to go back and re-read earlier chapters of an ongoing story. So if by chance you edit it here, it may not be for nothing since I have a tendency to go back through stories. :P Heh...I may be weird for doing this, but if its a good story then I love reading parts more than once. Anyways, awesome job! Take care and hope to get another chapter from you as soon as you can. :) I'll just have to check periodically since MM.org is being mean. ;)
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