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| "Commitments Made In Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 424 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: phoenixs_paiste (Not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 10:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beggs for forgiveness!!! *Bows down at feet and kisses then repeatedly* I'm so sorry I stopped reading for awhile cause well, I was getting tired of cross overs and how they all seem to be almost the same plot when it came do dealing with Naraku. I was worried it would be the same and this was such a good fic I didn't want to ruin it! But I am soooo soorrie! I should have never second guessed you would go the same route as others. You're so Awesome!! I would have never thought of that happening. It's awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter!!
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 15:13 PDT
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WHOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 15:12 PDT
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WHOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!I'M SO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: sp On: April 01, 2005 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really awsome fan fiction I hope u put more chapters up
| Reviewed By: SIT! On: April 01, 2005 06:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know If I've revewed this chapter or not but I just want say that I am curious(spelling?) as to what will happen with Kagome Kouga when thay go to finish the Jewle(spelling?). Also I was wondering how things will go when Kurama and kagome takethat BIG step. Please update soon, SIT!
| Reviewed By: [Shabopo] On: March 30, 2005 15:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hn. I can just see Koenma, teenage-formed, eyes closed in embarrassment and blushing after looking in the mirror and seeing the two together... lol! like he did in the Dark Tournament, when the females were embarrassing him. [rofl] I couldn't help but snicker at Shuuichi/Kurama's reaction to what Youko did. I did think perhaps characters were a little harsh on Kuronue; at this point they should realize that forcing Kagome to do something she doesn't want to do is not an easy thing to accomplish. I always thought it'd be cool if she learned how Kikyou did that paralyzing trick. 'M sorry this isn't a long, coherent review- I got about six hours of sleep and it's midterms again and... yeah. I loved the chapter, I'm afraid I'm not doing it justice with this review. [yawn] but I need to get ready for classes now.
| Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:07 PST
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OoOh, Kagome's in trouble! Hiei and Kurama are going to keep an eye on her for sure! Kurama must have wanted to join in the little fun in the mirror, I feel bad for him. Um, I'm kinda confused about Kagome being a virgin anymore. Her spirit isn't but her body is... wait.. ugh! It's sooo confusing! Could you explain it to me please? *begging* Pwease? *chibi eyes* Please update soon! *~*crazy-punk-gurl*~*
| Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 13:35 PST
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Yeah! Shes back! Shes back! Wait... what happends next?
| Reviewed By: golden_fire_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 10:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH! that was absolutely ingenious. I like the way you fixed the problem. Now the only thing to worry about would be getting Kagome and the others (beside Hiei, Kurama, Youko, and Kuronue) to know each other. I think that there may be some big problems and what about the rift between Yusuke and Kurama, that will not be pretty! Great Job on it so far. I hope you update your other stories rather soon! JA!
| Title: (Autumn Norris)
Reviewed By: Yoko Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 09:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! I can just imagine the look on Hiei's face when he saw Kagome and Yoko doing 'that'! And the look on Koenma's too... and Kurama's... anyways! Update soon! I had to review on mediaminer because I'm at school and the computer won't let me on AFF.net... so! Update soon!!!! Love ya with a passion!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Rabid is not logged in On: March 29, 2005 20:55 PST
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Heh, that, my friend, was the point. I purposely made it that way. Though I wonder, how many other people thought the same thing you did? ^-^ *grins widely* Ah, gotta love that. ...er, yes, this was in response to your review on 'Midnight Fervor' as I just sorta felt like it.. Heh. It cracked me up personally.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:19 PST
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Hm... I'm feeling forgiving right now so I won't murder it, referring to the limit on my babbling per review. Hm, I should get moving on the fight between Youko and Yusuke... and indulge shamelessly in my sudden desire to see Youko tie someone up. I think your earlier statement about us being demented individuals is proved. Heh, the world's more interesting with people like us in it anyways. Thus, we should continue acting this way and spice up everyone's lives. *nods seriously* Back on to the Youko 'throwing her against a wall' and such, I think he'd only do it if he was at the point where he couldn't take it anymore, and has decided to give up all pretense of a graceful dance of seduction, weaving it about her senses. Nope, just overwhelm her with sheer sexiness, and thus, appease himself. Heh, that's an odd subject to ramble on about... was it me or did Koenma seem a little grudging to bring back their souls? Especially after looking in on their passionate love-making in the shade of a tall, beautiful tree. I think I'm waxing poetic... no problem there! ^-^ Hm... I guess 'tis time to read 'On the Night of the Blood Red Moon'... 'till next time my friend! *glomps thee for updating so quickly*
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:11 PST
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*wide eyes* His Shortness is a shameless pervert. I have the oddest idea death is going to be visiting me soon... I'll update before I die though! ^-^ Yes, we are a couple of odd ones, but really... do you think he would be able to restrain himself around her, especially as he probably wouldn't have had any? Ugh... now I'm getting disturbed. And I'm sure Kurama has a few seeds with my name on them... That was an interesting way to deal with it, I should have thought of it though, as they did place Yusuke's soul back into his body. Yes, they did... but would the jewel really want to let her go that easily? I take it were entering the final stage of this fic, the aftermath. Naraku 'tis dead, Kagome's lost her virginity to Youko, willingly, and Yusuke needs to be taught a lesson. Yes, I envision him as a romancer to... *dreamy sigh* Hiei still is a shameless pervert. Though it was amusing when Koenma looked in the mirror... *can see his expression in her mind* Yeah! You didn't kill Kuronue! *cheers* Interesting as it is, it would be pretty depressing. Okay very depressing. Not to mention the fact you'd have Kuronue lovers chewing your ears, legs, arms, and any other body-part they can get ahold of off. Not that I would, I'd just indulge in this overly emotional side I've suddenly realized existed and cried, or laughed... er, or did nothing at all. Heh, I wrote a short one-shot about Kurama's midnight craving, take that anyway you wish, if you'd like to read it. I like it. dumb w | Reviewed By: phalon22 (not signed in) On: March 29, 2005 19:19 PST
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Great chapter!!! Interesing little goings on. Please let Youko kick Urameshi's butt for earlier chapters. Cuz that would be great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Jade Catzeye On: March 29, 2005 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. You've got a good plot going and its well written. And i must commend you on updating regularly, something that I can't seem to do for the life of me. Keep it up! ;)
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