| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 09:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: linbee On: July 13, 2007 08:39 PDT
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I love your story. I've been hooked since I read the title and summary. Please tell me its not finished.
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I am hooked! I couldn't stop reading and ended up reading until 4:30am this morning. You are a very talented writer. I can't wait read more. I am so enjoying everything you wrote. No flames from me, 'cause seriously there is nothing I can find wrong with your story. I love how Inuyasha now has the necklace and they are heading to her shrine. I wonder what they will do there. Please update soon. I am awaiting at the edge of my seat, and I am almost falling off....
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:37 PDT
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*jumps up nd down n fangirly excitment*.. i freakin love ur story.. i swear im hooked... nd their relationship is so cute.. how his expressions r softening around her... yes.. so adorable... i love ur story.. hope u update soon ^_^... good luck...
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Reviewed By: lil6ter On: July 11, 2007 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited to see what happens next. When I first started to read this chapter and when I read the summery, I thought that this would be the end of inuyasha and kagome for a while. I was very happy though when the rosary came into play. I don't think that I will really be able to understand how it will help keep him safe until I see it put into play. Is the concept that because she has this kind of power over him, he is no longer a threat? Also, if they really want to make him look more human they could try filling his nails and maybe if he doesn't want to were the hat they could pin his hair down with close pins or dye his hair. Personally though, I would recommend only filling his nails. I loved this chapter though and I can't wait for the next one go up. This is a great story and you have a great imagination. I can't wait to see the family's reaction to him.
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Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:40 PDT
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I love it so much. I even added it to my favorites. There's one thing I am wondering though, are you going to still insert Koga in seeing as he was the one who proposed to Kagome and was watching before hand too. It's just a thought/ question though.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 22:50 PDT
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This is one of favorite stories, I still think it's so funny that prostituting is seen as a spiritual thing but hey, that's why this story is so intresting. I'm glad that they're leaving together, I wonder what awaits them on the other side and how will everyone react to Inuyasha and more importantly how will he react to them. Kagome better not use those beads nonchalantly either, I always hated seeing her make him "SIT" in the anime for the silliest of reasons. Until next time happy writing.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 18:42 PDT
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yay new chappie! it actually shows them starting to trust each other & understand each other even more :) awesome. love the fic
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. You certainly explore the struggle for acceptance that Inuyasha faces......intimately. Looking forward to seeing how it ends up.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very original. I really liked the switch up with the rosary being Inuyasha's suggestion and Kagome's hesitation. I suppose she was being selfish, but in a very small way. Ultimately, she wanted to give him something - whether it be good memories of being treated as something other than a whipping post, or just a reprieve from being suffocated by his status in life. In a weird way, it's almost refreshing to see the sex out of the way. No overly emotional build-up (or let down). It was a task, for both of them, but still one that Inuyasha oddly found enjoyable, even after being so jaded by all the crap he'd been subjected to. Now, if they can just get past all the mental blocks. Really awesome story. Good job!
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Reviewed By: FMAInuOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 07:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh. my. GOSH! This fanfiction is.. just wow. Honestly, it is absolutely brilliant! The second I started reading, I just couldn't stop! Your style of writing is superb; you describe their emotions and situations really well. And you also portray the characters in a very "in-character" way. I can't wait for some sort of romance/love to blossom between Inuyasha and Kagome (hopefully :D). Well, update soon! Thank you for writing this fabulous fanfic. It's honestly the best I've read in a long time.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 05:59 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. This was my favorite chapter as well. I never thought about the rosary as a solution to Kagome's problems with taking Inuyasha home (although, now that I think about it, is was a good idea). But, I was truly shocked that it was Inuyasha himself who suggested the subjugation spell. THAT, I never would have guessed. Kagome's negative reaction to the suggestion was expected; he's never been a physical threat to her in this story, so I can see her not wanting him to be humiliated like that. But, Inuyasha's willingness to be put under subjugation by Kagome speaks volumes about his growing feelings for her. And the TRUST she's earned from him. It may not be love yet per se, but they are falling fast. This has gone way beyond just good sex.....and you have done a great job of allowing their relationship to evolve slowly like this. A person who's been through as much as Inuyasha has couldn't fall in love fast...but would have to won over gradually. And watching them NEARLY fall has been some of the best fun I've had reading fan fiction. I definitely look forward to reading more as soon as you can put it up.
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Reviewed By: LadyButterfly On: July 10, 2007 05:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time I read this fanfic I'm more and more impressed! I loved this chapter because it finally advanced to a crucial turning point that we've all been waiting for; Inuyasha heading off with Kagome.You did a great job keeping us in suspense in how the final workings of their relationship would be. Will he go with her, will she stay...Nice inter working of the rosary beads :) Grammatically/Stylistically there was something "off" with this chapter I think your sentence structure was off in a few paragraphs (sorry I can't remember specifics!)Anywhooo overall i loved this chapter and please keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is my fave so far too, though the lemons were quite nice I must say. I can't wait for the next chapter and seeing how Kagome's family reacts to Inuyasha. I felt horrible for him in this chapter he was just so nervous and scared, (curses self for being so dang mushy) I always want to comfort people in those kinds of situations. (rolls eyes dam mushiness (I wonder if thats even a word...)) See ya next time. Happy writing from the one and only strangeness, Emily.
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