| "The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 20:43 PST
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Wonderful as always. Everyone is in character and extremely believable. Poor Shiori and Kagome. All this angst is making me cry *sniff*
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 17:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lords this whole chapter was killing me with humor and Kagome's sadness. The mounting tense is hard for ME to handle, how Kagome is taking the strain and having to stay away from Yashita is beyond me. Poor girl. The shiori part was so tragically romantic, as is all love that is lost. Despite everything I was laughing quite a bit throughout. Your line about him wishing he had a camera to keep up his stalking skilling was skilling me; I was laughing so hard. Wonderful chapter and I'm glad I finally had time to catch up. Great work as always. (Damn, yashita, good thing I'm not her or he would have to consider himself ravaged by now, lol).
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 12:11 PST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 12:51 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!it took me soo long to actually read it all but i loved it all...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 13:16 PST
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Wow, can you believe it? I've finally found some time to read some fanfiction! I think the world might be coming to an end...okay, actually, both my classes finally came to an end so now I actually have a little down time until the next ones begin. So I figured I might as well take advantage of it and get some reading done! Of course, this story was the first one I headed for since I knew I had quite a bit of catching up to do. I enjoyed reading all of it, but still no Yashita! But I am very intrigued, because I'm sure that you are just being evil now by delaying their reunion so long. I also can't help but wonder how much Inuyasha will find out about their future 'allies' now. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 12:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder how Kagome's going to get out of this one!?!? Update soon please because I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 21:25 PST
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Oh yea...I aomost forgot: Comgrats on the piece Kris made. I think its great. Really shows Feniks attitude and that beautiful body of his...WUF! Theres noway I coulda done anywhere near that good. Not even close, lol. Great piece for a great story. :)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 21:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap...Was hoping to see some Yashita/Kagome time but guess Ill just have to wait. Ah well, maybe next time. :D Least Inu got some action tho, lol...yea, Ima hentai. :P It seems Kagome's really stressin bout Shiori, not that anyone could blame her really. Seeing/knowing someone like that and knowing whats gonna happen. And worse too she cant say anything to anyone. Wonder how much Inu is gonna push for info bout it, then if he gets an answer. Hmm...
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Title: Presents!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 21:17 PST
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Hey! We both updated on the same day! I enjoyed your Christmas present from Forthrightly...a great pic and you must be so proud of Fenik (try to keep him from getting TOO pleased with himself). I also enjoyed your new chapter. What a wonderful day...I got to write for the first time in weeks and I got to read your new chapter...life is good!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 03:32 PST
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Heh, i've only got to chapter 34 so far, but i wanted to let you know that this is a fantastic story and i eagerly look forward to reading more as soon as i switch computers. I love your sense of humor as well, you make the characters come alive. I hope you update as soon as you can, lol cuz im a fast reader.
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 12:05 PST
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hy there just to let you know how much i enjoyed reading you AGAIN :) it's hard to find something specific, but right now i'd go for your description of Kagome's interaction with the wolves... and man, you've portrayed Inuyasha so great and understanding, like a perfect husband. Go fancy! hehe
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 20:13 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait for more...especially when Sesshomaru makes his appearance again!! ^_^ Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 18:31 PST
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Greatly enjoyed the flea Kagome put in Koga's ear!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 18:24 PST
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LOL! I almost feel sorry for Kouga. Both in your fic and in the series if Ayame gets her way. Kagome's line about Ayame being his best bet was wonderful.
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o0o0o0o0 I LOVE THIS STORY!!! cant waut till you update... I just love everything.. your plot and story line... how you used actual episodes and changed them to fit your story!! truely great.. and I cant wait till the next chap comes... Ja
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