"The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse" Reviews/Comments [ 452 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:36 PST Comment/Review: Absolutely wonderful. I love it when Inuyasha is all concerned for Kagome. I hope he drives her nuts during her convalesence. I'm not sure about how I feel towards Rin. It may just be that I don't like her as a character normally. Anyway, wonderful update as always. Please update soon. Now that my finals are over, I can actually read fanfic again!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 12:24 PST Comment/Review: Teehee! A Human is first lady of the Western Lands by dint of marriage toa half-bredd! Quel amusement!
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Title: Very Satisfying... Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 16:35 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ...as usual. You just keep dishing out the most delightful and filling chapters. This story just keeps getting better and better as you continue to hone your craft of storywriting. It is such a pleasure to get updates! I was all choked up when Inuyasha handed Kagome to Sesshoumaru. You got the best lines! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 15:48 PST Comment/Review: awwwwwwwwwww Rin's sooooooo cute...i LOVE the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 17:48 PST Comment/Review: loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 14:15 PST Comment/Review: I'm sure Licensia Poetica and Lady Rhiyana are thrilled to have a cliffie written for them. Sorry I haven't really reviewed lately, but I have been reading. It's nice to have a story that actually is well written in the Inuyasha fandom. And Sessaki's warning is worrying me too. Maybe it's Sango or Miroku, because they couldn't survive to the future naturally, so Kagome wouldn't know their fate. Gah! Well, hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Title: Heee! Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 08:10 PST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Cliffies? Moi? I NEVER leave the reader guessing! But I'm honored you dedicated yours to me... *snort* As always, a wonderful treat to read. Now I'm off to write another cliffie...er, another chapter in 'Facets' Thanks for the chapter and the giggles!
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 23:29 PST Comment/Review: awesome chapter! loved feniks little outburst, kickin' ass and showing who's boss! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 19:10 PST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter. I can't believe you ended it like that!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!!!! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 18:38 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chap..oh yea! Was wondering what was gonna happen, lol...that was great!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 13:55 PST Comment/Review: I hope you realize that the end of that chapter was SO cruel! Actually, I'm sure you do realize that, lol, and it was completely intentional...so I suppose that instead of having a fit over, I should just skip right to the begging. Because I really, really want to see the next chapter! After all, reading the summary at the top and then the part about Inuyasha and Sessaki meeting, I was hoping it would all happen in this chapter. Should have known better, huh? But at least Yashita finally managed to make an appearance, so I'm happy about that! I'm also glad that you finally revealed what happened to Shiori, and that it WON'T take place anytime soon! That would be terribly depressing for her to die that young, and then I really would have been calling you evil, lol...but anyway, great chapter, and I'll be looking forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 22:02 PST Comment/Review: I hope you dont mind but I might post Feink on my Xanga site....I'll tell you if I do if you say i can...anon...nevermind??...o_o.....^_^!!...But anyways Very cool story....Squeet actually!!
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Title: Kagooommeeee! You have some 'splaining to dooo! Reviewed By: bluefuzzyelf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 15:18 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I've steadily read through this story over the past three days, spurred by seeing the drawing of Fenik at KrisCynical's devart site. I love it. Really, truly love it, and I love this Kagome. She is still pure of heart and loving and kind, but she also can kick some serious ass! Also, hentai!Inuyasha, yay! The whole military pov is pretty awesome. BTW, if you get tired of saying "fatigues" you could also use the word "BDU's", cause they're the same thing. I hope you update soon, and that the plotbunnies aren't small flat furry disks, cause I know how that is.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 12:25 PST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon PLEASE!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 07:01 PST Comment/Review: Ah, poor Yashita...so close, and yet so far away. Poor frustrated older hanyou, coming upon his younger self's marks while controlling his libido. Such a cruel author! And you leave tantalizing hints that the "greatest challenge" is coming in the next few weeks...are you coming to the end of your story, too? Argh! I look forward to the new installments...what will I do for well-written entertainment? Masterfully done, as always, my friend. Have a Merry Christmas and I'll talk to you before the New Year!
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