| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: Non compos mentis
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:28 PDT
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I am completely in love with Houseki! I just want to hug her/him/it/them. I don't know why I find the creature so appealing, but I do. The section where they were discussing DNA and quarks and the like completely cracked me up. Great job. I hope that everyone gets balanced soon though, the strain seems to be too much for Kagome to handle. Is that why the crap is happening in the future? Anyway. They aren't balanced because they need more supernatural, right? Why not add Kirara? (or perhaps I got confused in the Houseki speak.) The situation with Kohaku, Kanna, and the Falcon is decidely odd. I never know from one minute to the next who Kanna is really playing for. Perhaps she is just playing against Naraku and for nobody. Sounds about right. There is another chapter calling my name. Thanks for writing!
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Title: e pluribus Unum
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:02 PDT
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I bet merging with a baby wasn't one of the threads that kagome saw when she was first in the nexus! Adding the babe and Shippou into the mix is definately a twist that I didn't expect in any way. I like that about your writing. You bring something in from left field - wham! Great chapter BTW. Thanks for sharing your story with us! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 18:38 PDT
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You may not get tired of reading this, but good chapter again. Your Miroku is a letch, but only towards his Sango and I like that. This chapter showed a lot of their relationship, both in and out of the sack. Playful, loving, and caring all wrapped up in a wise houshi wrapper. He tries so hard to understand and interact with youkai!Inuyasha. And it is so human to smile to try to comfort someone....poor Miroku. You have added an interesting twist with placing all four of them in the nexus. I wonder where that is going. Need to read the next chapter, huh? Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:41 PDT
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I just realized that it has been months since I have read this story, and I don't know why. Extra bad Caitriona. Concerning Canis Mala: WTF! What is going on with the shards? Are the ones that Naraku controls burning as badly as the ones that Kohaku and Midoriko possess are? On a humorous side note, when Kagome goes into her trance and Inu sends the dogs to get the other members of the party, I can just imagine the conversation when they get there. Miroku runs up to see K&I still joined at the hips and K staring into space. "Inuyasha, I know you said you were going to f**k her stupid, but this is going just a little to far!" Sorry. Had to go there for a minute. Anyway - Great chapter as usual. I love the bits with Kirara and Sess. That she calls him bad dog most of the time just makes me smile everytime I read it. Thanks for sharing your writing with us! Onto the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and it is difficult for me to review because the story has so many small nuances and there are so many things happening at once. Please forgive me for not regularly reviewing.....The creation of Houseki threw me for a loop. All I can do is wonder what it's purpose is. It is quite funny. Oh my, I wonder how Sesshoumaru will respond. Perhaps Kilala will be of some assistance and perhaps remind him of his responsibilities to the pack in general......I must tell you that you are an excellent writer and produce quality work. I won't be able to review all aspects of a chapter, but know that I do appreciate all of the time and effort that you put into it. It is obvious that you spend a lot of time on your chapters. Your story is one of those that no one ever forgets. I will tell you what has me very excited at the moment. It is the developing relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kilala. That is only because I am a Sesshoumaru fangirl. However, everything that you have done with Kagome and Inuyasha has been absolutely wonderful. I love it. I do have a difficult time with all of the Japanese terminology, but in the grand scheme of things, it is unimportant. I will be re-reading and then I will do more commenting. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie On: March 20, 2007 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this story sooooo much. I can't wait until the next chapter! I love that Kirara has a big part in this story. She is left out so often and I love the interaction with her and Baka no Tashio! lol! I love this story.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This tale is spun with colorful strands of plot and imagination. So many things coming at you, that your head spins (in the good way). I find myself hanging on every word. I hope you will continue to dazzle us with your talent for original story telling. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 19:41 PDT
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oh shit.... stupid stupid Houseki!!!!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:27 PDT
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Heh, I still like how you portray Houseki, even tho its a serious situation, how the character comes across is rather humorous, lol. Kirara's appearance in her humanoid form seemed to startle a few there, but I do love how you have her portrayed as well. But now Lord Sesshomaru arrives, and not in a very good mood, I take it. Wonder how Kirara will convince him... Great chapter. Update when ya can! :P
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Title: long time, no review (sorry)
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story just keeps getting better. It's incredible and the excitement keeps building the closer we get to the big climax. I love how the living jewel is finally starting to come together, only with a couple of additions no one could have planned. I can't wait to find out if Kirara and Inuyasha can talk some sense into Sesshoumaru before he goes nuts over the perceived challenge. Man, so much exciting stuff going on! You've done a wonderful job writing a story that's turning out to be truly epic.
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Title: sempai18
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shoot. Sess is going to be pissed. Poor pack.
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Reviewed By: SlightlyPsychoPrincess On: March 11, 2007 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Especially the latin titles, as i am currently taking Latin II. I have a question though, isn't salve a greeting similar to hello. I had thought to save was servo(i save) or servare( is saving) I could be wrong though. That aside, This is one of my favorite fanfic's to follow and i check every weekend for updates. I absolutely love your plot line and character development! Update soon!!
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Title: Ch. 62
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 17:39 PDT
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Kirara revealed and Sess as part of the jewel? I didn't see that coming. Really great job on Myoga too, especially the escape towards the end.
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Reviewed By: lsc33 On: March 05, 2007 04:16 PST
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Very good story. You have a few qurks, but otherwise very interesting I like the sci-fi parts. My husband is a big star-trek/star-wars fan I told him to read alittle. He started reading at one of the lemons..hehehe Now he thinks its all Harlequin. :P Anyways Update soon.
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Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: inuyoukaikiyo On: February 18, 2007 18:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..This fic is one of the best I have read in a VERY long time. I love the story line and plot, you are very creative and I appreciate it! I am a huge fan of doggieearlover and Fenik's stories, and yours is right up there with them! I can totally see why Kirara in this story is up for best characterization, she's awesome! I love how you write Inu and Kagome! The InuDemon and InuHuman idea is awesome. I am sadly restricted to the Anime on Adult Swim so I am usually lost in some stories, where they base it on the Manga. There isn't any stores that carry Manga around here. (damn) You explain it so I'm not lost, and still keep it within the story line. That's not easy to do. Sesshomaru is placed in the story nicely, and you don't make him seem like a heartless fool, or a 'I cry for help on the inside', as some authors do. (it's very irritating) And about Kagome...I love how you wrote her as well. She's very confident, and not a 'poor me' kind-of thing. Also the situation with Kikyou...that's where you got my thumps up. I HATE when people drag on the Kikyou thing. Uhhg...You made it short-sweet-and simple. Good Job! I am looking forward to the next update, I will follow this story like a religion. *giggle* This story is absolutly wonderful, and don't let anyone tell you different! If you quit this story, I will personally track you down, and make you finish it! *giggle* Okay, I'm rambling once again...I do that alot. Great Story, your a Great Author! Keep it up! ~Kiyo Fallen Wolf Angl@aol.com or InuYoukaiKiyo@aol.com
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