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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Waht an incredible story. I absolutely love it! I pray you are gonna finish it. It'l be such a crime if you dont. I see Kirara and Sesshomaru are getting closer...hmm.. i wonder.. how close will they become? ...maybe ..mates? or is that jus for Rin? Hmm.. who knows.. wait .. you do! lol Any who .... Hope u continue . =]
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd been holding off on commenting on this until I read it all the way through. Unfortunately, you have a the misfortunate of bad timing to revise chapters I had previously read, but no worries. Anyway, I like you approach to this, emphasiving the sci-fi elements of Inuyasha and since I'm a huge sucker for time traveling stories, all this talk of Time Lords and such nonsense makes me wonder when Tom Baker is going to show up and the good 'Doctor' will take over. ;p Very well written, lots of consideration made towards imagery and metaphor while keeping an eye toward action and science. My kind of story. Great work my friend. BTW, I would to second what SnowFall said, you're doing a bang up job. And I also think I can somewhat sympthize with you as a writer with a very technical background (engineer), I know it can get discouraging but hang in there. I need ya to finish this damn story.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:05 PDT
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I've been re-reading and because I know that I didn't review as I should, here is an example of how great you are. In chapter six (?), when Kagome was lonely and crying, you described it so well that I cried too. Doesn't that make you a great author? Think about it. It is the goal of the writer to evoke emotions, influence opinions, etc. You are doing just that. Now, off with you. Go write with confidence, grasshoppah. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 16:55 PDT
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You despaired of your writing ability? What hallucinogens was someone slipping into your tea! Geeze. If I knew who it was, I'd...well, I don't want any charges of terroristic threats leveled against me, so I'll just leave it up to your imagination. Onward and upward. Squeeeeee! Sesshoumaru and Kilala! And, ooooh, everyone was given a show! Yummy! Inuyasha's declaration was absolutely excellent. *sniffles* Can't wait for Sesshoumaru's answer! Good show woman! And I have to tell you that, by the context, I was able to understand the Japanese words. That is important to me as the tedium of reading the glossary and then attempting to place them at the point where they occurred in the story is too much trouble for this here lazy person. Souta showing up in Kohaku's body was totally awesome! I sure hope that he and Kanna can help. Wouldn't it be out of this world if he and Kanna were the ones to balance the whatever it is? I know it's not going to happen, but still...Where do you come up with this stuff? Your story is well written, original, sensual, action packed, full of suspense, contains mystery, surprises galore. Who wouldn't love it? The only thing that I'm left wanting is more! That's it. That's all. I would like more in each chapter, but authors must move at their own pace, go where the story and chapter leads them. I'm always disappointed when a chapter is over...because I am selfish and want more. It's the truth. sigh I guess I'm just stuck, gazing at the ground until another chapter arrives. No more despairing or your collective readers will just have to kick your talented ass. Now, back to work, woman! ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:31 PDT
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HOOORAY! You updated! I'm glad that people convinced you to continue. I have been checking back in on this story and eagerly awaiting more. Not too many authors have as well constructed a premise - and an interesting premise at that - with well composed writing to boot. I hope we will see more soon.
| Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 05:57 PDT
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Oh My freaking god!!!!!! Souta!! You're alive!!!!!!! Update soon!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a strange turn of event... well, interesting to say the least, lol. Love Kiraras' character in this. Ive seen her displayed in human form some before, but none of them ever seemed to work:this definitely does. Her character is purrfect and very believable. And love how she can placate the 'Big Dog' like that. Awesome! The thing with Kohaku was interesting as well, especially with him trying to talk to Kaede, lol. Now what will InuYasha do? Should be interesting to say the least. Great chap... update when ya can! ;)
| Title: Another Home RunFJ
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you get Kirara to translate "Most Mighty Little Two Tail who Whips Big Pfffft Into Line" into Neko? Because she certainly deserves the title! As always, it was well-written, with great characters, action, and dialogue, and just plain tons o'fun! As always, I'm waiting to see how Kirara will manage to teach the Inu yet another lesson in how to run a Pride. So glad you've kept at it!
| Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:29 PDT
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A most awesome chapter!! I am absolutely in love with this story. Even though I am waiting for the end to see how everything works out, I will be sorry that the ride is over. You are doing an awesome job and I hope that you are able to see it all the way through! Until the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:46 PDT
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Great chapter! Please, please don't give up writing. There were so many good things that I could probably max out the comment box without covering them all. You KNOW I loved the Sess/Kirara stuff. Also totally love that Miroku got to show his stuff this time and the continued excellent use of the real mythology that RT pulls from. The Souta as Kohaku was totally unexpected and a fabulous plot twist. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: AHAYNES On: May 28, 2007 11:58 PDT
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This is soooo good! I hope you update soon! I'll be checking back regularly for updates (=
| Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!!!! This is so well written and i absolutely love it!!!!! Please get the next chapter up as soon as possible!
| Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:52 PDT
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I have just discovered your story. I absolutely adore it!! It is exceptionally well written...and I LOVE the Star Wars tie ins! I cannot wait to finish reading this one!
| Reviewed By: shalinilahiri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 07:01 PDT
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Nice chapter! Sorry, for reviewing it so late! I'm really worried about Souta now. Have I ever mentioned that I simply adore the way you depict Kensei and Innin's relationship? And also, Mouryomaru making his grand entry!
| Title: Salve me
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:43 PDT
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I was right about Kirara...but I didn't think about Sesshoumaru. Another twist in this wonderful story. I can't imagine where this is going. I don't often do this, but please update soon. Thanks for writing for us though. I know you say you want to leave us a good story, but you have given us a great one so far!
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