| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awsome! So far, I love it, can't wait to see what happens next....
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 05:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I am not getting notifications of your updates. That was a great battle scene and I enjoyed how you took the point of view of Midoriko without getting involved in the minds of the others. It gave a clear vision of the battle. Everyone participated valiantly. Everything seemed to have come together so well. Sesshoumaru learned that he had something to protect, Housenki matured enough to participate, Kirara (though unknowingly) has given herself to Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha has finally gained his brother's acceptance, Midoriko finally found a solid purpose. The battle scene was well done. I'm sure that there is more that I have not mentioned. Where is the hawk?......Being a Sesshoumaru fan, I loved the way that you had him working toward protecting the others. In the end, he even gave in to becoming a part of the living jewel. Talk about a turn around! This was a very meaty chapter. Very satisfying. I know that it isn't over and am so anxious to see the next chapter! Go you! Awesome job! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 22:44 PDT
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Well.. I don't know what to say, that a fantastic chapter and me not knowing what to say may have something to do with my mind being like roadkill, deader than dead. God I'm tired. Anyways great chapter. Loves it as always. Keep up the goodwork.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 18:29 PDT
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I am quite literally sitting on the edge of my computer chair as I read this latest chapter. The action is so fast paced that I had to re-read some sections to understand what was going on. (mainly because I was reading it too fast to get to see what was going on ::sigh::) Kohaku/Souta's inclusion in these last two chapters has been amazingly wonderful. I felt kinda bad for Souta, with his big sister being able to do all this really cool stuff and he could only listen. I also love the continuing interaction between Kirara and Sess. Thanks so much for writing for us.
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Reviewed By: Mysteriously Moi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 17:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I try to rate fanfics fairly, but its difficult when its positivley the best fic I've ever read! Your an awesome writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Your great with characterising everyone. But I'm sure you've already heard all of this. So, yeah. Haha! Your an inspiration for me to do better with my writing. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 20:21 PDT
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Wow! What an action scene. So much going on all at once, but you never skip a beat. That has to have been the single best action scene I've ever read. I'm so jealous. Loved the interaction with Sesshomaru & Kirara, by the way. It doesn't matter what species, the females are always wiser. *ducks all sorts of rotten veggies*
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 05:51 PDT
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Wow! I love this fic!! I can't wait for another chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sannah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 12:20 PDT
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Evil, Evil person!! Another cliffhanger. You had better make the next update quickly in return for visiting another evil cliffhanger onto your loyal readers. This was an awsome update though! well worth the wait. I hope that there is a happy ending though.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo, damn but that was good! A whole lotta action goin on in this one. Definitely worth waiting for. Particularly like the interaction between Kirara and Sess, most interesting. And you are most welcome for IYFG and FA. A very excellent chapter, iPoe. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 00:32 PDT
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This chapter was well worth the wait!! This is by far my absolute favorite story. Your writing style is smooth and everything just seems to flow naturally. I also love the titles in Latin...I have so much fun trying to figure out what they mean. I usually guess incorrectly, but is fun anyway. :)
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as always. I hope we get a new chapter soon.
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Title: Ch. 65
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:51 PDT
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Wow! So much action and so much character development AT THE SAME TIME. It's going to be really interesting to see Sess and Kirara as part of the meld.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:24 PDT
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It's always a good day when you post another chapter...and this was exciting. And made me want more....
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 23:01 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007.html And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open August 1, 2007 - August 15, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after August 15th. ~ The Daimyo
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Title: What a ride!!!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:37 PDT
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OOOOIIIEEEAAAHHH!...cough, hack! Ah well, tried it, muffed it. Well hell, bouncy bouncy goes my stress level. The way you build up the tension and release it, only to do it all over again within a single paragraph (or 2) is frickin' awesome! You're killing me here. Ok... I'll bite, Inuyasha's human voice seems to have gone bye bye, and not just for the full moon luvin' on a tree trunk escapade. He's not getting phased out as Inu's demonic half becomes more pronounced, is he? Hope not. Balsamic moon eh? I hear that goes great on Belgian endive, o' scientific one. Um, I've never reviewed before, because I thought you quit writing this. My bad. I really like it. It's very entertaining.
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