| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I hope your girls get better soon. I thought this was a very well written chapter. I'm glad that Sesshomaru has accepted Shippo into the family! I can't wait till we find out if Inuyasha is really pregnant or not. I hope he is!! ^_^ Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: Kibou32 On: December 20, 2006 15:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Why haven't you updated recently? All I ask of you is that before December is over, could you post a new chapter? It'd be a great gift to tide me over the holidays and await patiently for the next chapter over the new year. Oh magnificent author, this humble reader asks of you to grant this humble wish.
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Reviewed By: Kibou32 On: December 20, 2006 15:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey. Why haven't you updated recently? All I ask of you is that before December is over, could you post a new chapter? It'd be a great gift to tide me over the holidays and await patiently for the next chapter over the new year. Oh magnificent author, this humble reader asks of you to grant this humble wish.
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Title: upDATE please!!!
Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 02:18 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic so much I cant put it into words! It's just bloody brilliant!!!! Please write more *puppy eyes* please? Shigure-san
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 21:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I tell you what, this fic has keep me entertained on many a lunch hour. Its kinda cool how we get to see into both characters heads during the events. I'm not usually one for Mpreg stories but this one is one of the few that actually explains how its possible, and that right there is very important to me at least. This one's getting added to the favorites.
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Title: Soehow I don't think I'm the only one waiting.
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know somehow I don't think I'm the only one waiting for more of this fic. I mean I know that there has been alot fo shit going on in the past few weeks but please, please update soon. I really wanna see what happenes between those three. How Inuyasha aliviates Shippos fears and how Shippo handles Seshoumaru. That oughta be incredibly entertaining. Please hurry. Please? I'll give you Virtual Cookies if you update before the end of the year! Arie Date.
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Title: Chap. 50
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 12:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive restraint on Sesshoumaru's part; he didn't use his poisoned claws on Kagome…he merely choked her. That should shut her up for awhile! I do hope he has a dungeon reserved for her and further punishment. She still hasn't gotten the big picture yet; she's not the center of the universe. Yup, she's still a child and pretty immature too. Lucky for the rest of the Inu pack that Sesshoumaru is zoned in totally on Kagome and her nasty actions. They weren't much better joining in with their chorus of 'sit' at Inuyasha. Poor Shippo! His 'dream family' is about to change. He's the only one that knows that the brothers are mates. Plus I'm sure he thinks he has lost another chance to be part of a family. Even he doesn't understand how Inuyasha thinks. The image of the two brothers setting out in search of Shippo is cute (snicker, Tally Ho! it's a fox hunt). And finally, are Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha getting closer to initiating and completing the emotional blood bond?
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 15:31 PDT
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Love it!!!! Update soon pretty please!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are getting along better. Update soon please!!!!
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Title: Chapt. 49
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the intimate moment between the new mates; that was really sweet. Inuyashsa is so starved for affection from Sesshoumaru. Every little bit he gets from his mate is like a bit of heaven for him. Hope Sesshoumaru realizes that and gives his mate all the TLC he needs. How stupid for the rest of Inu's pack to yell 'Sit' along with Kagome. Turncoats!! Kagome must be like typhoid Mary, she's a carrier for the 'Stupid' virus. Here they all are, in Sesshoumaru's home, attacking Inuyasha. They seem to have forgotten how Inuyasha acts when he's really worried about any dangerous situation that could cause them harm. Will Sesshoumaru let them off with their lives? Bad Guests! Bad!! lol Talk about not being 'house trained'.
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Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, please update soon! I just love this story! I think they should just toss Kagome. She's annoying and insignificant.
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Reviewed By: DemonGoddess On: October 20, 2006 17:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, most enjoyable! Sorry about the "too short" thing on the other sites... ^-^ It's just that I wanted MORE!!!! LOL Going back to an earlier chapter, out of the mouths of babes was right, with how Rin described everything. Considering the look you described as being on Shippo's face, I bet he's the ONLY one in Inuyasha's group who has even a CLUE of what's going on, besides Myouga. I also like how you show Sesshomaru actually beginning to accept him and actually SHOW it in this last chapter, before they are going to meet his pack.
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Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah, i love this story. man, kagome can be really stupid, huh? and they really weren't thinking all that clearly when they went after Inuyasha, were they? I mean, Inuyasha barely gets out of confruntations w/ Sesshoumaru himself. What chance did they really think they had? they were just being absolutely suicidle. god, i cannot wait for the next chapter and see what Sesshoumaru does to Kagome. I hope he at least beats the shit out of her. Or throws her in a pit full of ravanous youkai. Though, i don't think Inuyasha would appreciate that too greatly. Pitty really. She's just a giant nuicence.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does. Update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 14:46 PDT
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Well I do hope he doesn't kill her, please update soon! I wonder what the reactions will be like...
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