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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 17:57 PDT
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i was going to ask you about the "creature" - i didnt know what to call it. obviously the title is about the conflict with the creature the interim is just a reminder - looking forward to the real chapter
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Reviewed By: FG On: April 27, 2008 10:49 PDT
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My dislike of Kagome seems to be nothing in comparison to everyone elses hatred. Ahaha! Well, Sesshomaru could use those beads to his own advantage...but I thought the beads could only be used by Kagome because she was the priestess....or something like that? Ehh...I havent seen Inuyasha in such a long time. -FG
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Reviewed By: DollyLauren On: April 27, 2008 08:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely review on this site as it takes forever but you deseve praise because you have written such an AMAZING piece of ficyion.I am totally in love with this story!!!!!! The characters are very belivable because you think about how the characters minds work ; not just decide you want a certain outcome and skip how you got there. The plotline is also creative. You have a true talent for writing !! Can't wait to see the next chapter - PLEASE update as soon as possible and i have become addisted to this story.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 18:19 PDT
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Oh man, I hope the kitsune lord is okay. He probably had something to do with the army that attacked that thing. I like him. Please don't kill him off. It's good that the other youkai are banding together. That must take a lot to accomplish, especially during mating season. I'm very intrigued by what this thing wants from our boys and whether or not the humans can be of any help. I don't think you've mentioned it preying on humans. Sturaki seems to think it's evil. But, if it has no mind, how is it evil? Unless it came from hell. You have me so curious. Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so worried about the kitsune lord. He's someone that Shippou should probably meet. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter! Keep up the awesome work and update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: *psychokitsune5 On: April 21, 2008 19:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You could always have the witch revamp the focus of the bead so that they now throw Kagome to the ground instead. You know, for Irony and all that.
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome should definitely be the one wearing the beads of subjugation for a change. Thanks for the update.
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Title: 53-55
Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 21:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent. wonderful development -no more sits. i hated that - and how kagome uses so indiscriminately often. there were some valid uses for it, but too few and far in between. i missed your updates since i was also dealing with real life issues - best wishes to your new home, and congratulations to the new baby!! you have quite a handful there. am back and glad to see you're updating! thank you. i love this story. i first found this in the other website
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 07:12 PDT
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Oh! I can't believe that Inuyasha actually asked Sesshoumaru to let go of Kagome. Wow. He's at least trying to be a reasonable beta. High five for Inuyasha! There was something else I wanted to mention and, dammit, I can't remember! You always have so many small details that slip through my fingers when I try to review. I can't believe that Miroku and Sango didn't interfere when Sesshoumaru latched onto Kagome. Are they afraid? Or are they just smart? You don't have to answer any of my questions. I'm just thinking out loud. I liked Sesshoumaru's definition of the incantation. It is a form of 'attack'. Looking at it that way, he should have already killed Kagome. I wonder if that was what had Inuyasha's jaw dropping. And I don't think that once did Sesshoumaru mention the pup out loud, only Inuyasha's well-being. That is definitely different and should bolster Inuyasha's confidence in how Sesshoumaru feels about him. Ah, the joys of discovering what is there that isn't said. You sneaky thing, you. I'm proud of myself for seeing that, even if it wasn't what you had intended. You put so much detail into everything, I'm not sure you would have unintentionally left that out. Anywho. Great chappie! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 07:01 PDT
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That was an awesome chapter! It appears that if Miroku decides that the two aren't under a spell and that Inuyasha is happy, he won't try to interfere. Dunno about Sango though. However, being in the times they are, m/m relationships are quite open and aren't unusual. She should be alright. Miroku was privy to Sesshoumaru's handling of Inuyasha. I love that scene where you've had Sesshoumaru stroking Inuyasha's hair. Considering Myoga's communication with Kilala and he understanding of the others, I'm wondering if she had any thoughts on the matter and if she would take Kagome's side or if she would defend Inuyasha. That would definitely put her in a tough position. She really likes Inuyasha. I bet you had a great time writing Sesshoumaru's thoughts. They were so amusing! You were probably grinning from ear to ear. That was so great. I loved the way Sesshoumaru was speaking to Kagome. His ultimatum was the best! Do it, or die. Sqeeee! I guess I like males who know what they want and aren't afraid to go for it. Don't get me wrong. I don't see the manga Kagome as she is portrayed here, but here, she deserves more torment than what he gave her. He's controlled his temper quite well. Is that why Inuyasha's jaw dropped? He couldn't believe that Sesshoumaru wasn't killing her? Or because Sesshoumaru was defending him? I'm curious and sure that you'll tell us. If Kagome hadn't been using the beads to keep Inuyasha 'in line', what the heck did he think she'd been doing? Is he dense? I liked his come back though. He had a valid point. The beads! I just bet that Sesshoumaru has a little subjugation in mind for the priestess. You truly are wicked. I can't wait to see what you have planned. I loved Sesshoumaru's attitude about it being only the beginning of Kagome's punishment. Sturaki didn't seem concerned at all. Hm. I guess she knows that Kagome isn't a future threat. Although there is one lurking around out there. I loved this chapter. One happy camper here! Thanks! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 15:27 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Update really soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: April 13, 2008 15:13 PDT
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Hey I got an idea. Someone should just cut out the wench's tongue. I think it would make everyone happy.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I'm so glad that you post I thought it would be a while. I know that your busy. But man oh man I'm am so happy. I enjoy the chapter. I love that a family coming together. and I Hate kagome I really do she should do off a cliff that will make me happy. I think she would do it and hurt the pup if it's not damage already. KILL HER. man thats so freakin funny, I agree that the others and kagome treats him like a slave. what kind of friends would let that go on for so long. did they every ask Inuyasha if he want to be with Kagome? no they worship the ground she walks on and she's spoiled. by everyone, I don't blame Inuyasha for not wanting to have pups with her. Even I can see the way she treats Shippo that the kid would not live long on it's own if something happen. Beside all kagome thinks about is herself even when going to Sesshomaru palace sure she was worried that inuyasha would die and she wouldn't have him. Think about it if he dies kikyou can get his soul, and she was thinking that the witch was going to take her place in inuyasha heart. Beside she didn't think this through this is not some fairy tale and shes a sleep, where will they live? in the past of present, how they would live. the scarfice that would have to be made. She is a child that need to put over someone need.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 22:46 PDT
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LOL Not a lot of plot progression? Sesshoumaru isn't killing Inuyasha's pack and is defending Inuyasha! Wow! That's a lot. It's amazing that Inuyasha manages to keep his own temper under control, but then again, he's weak right now. Allowing Sesshoumaru to handle it and going back to sleep was really cute and sweet. Poor Shippou. I hope he'll be alright. The argument between Inu's youkai and human was funny. I'm starting to think that neither Inuyasha and/or Sesshoumaru consider that their youkai is themselves. Geeze, I wish Kagome would give it up. It will be interesting to see what the conversation, or yelling match, consists of. Aw, Sesshoumaru was petting Inuyasha. That was too sweet. I'm glad to hear that you've got a home and are all moved in. Hope the little ones are alright. Well, I'm off to read some of the older parts of the story! Can hardly wait for the next chapter! ^_^ Snow
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