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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 06:10 PST
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I'm really starting to want to kick Kagome's ass. Her and Sango both. I've been reading the manga and there is a lot of difference in character traits from the anime. Now I understand why different people write the characters so differently. I swear, Kagome is so lucky to be alive. It's amazing that you've given Sesshoumaru so much patience, despite Inuyasha's wishes. I can't wait to find out whether or not Inuyasha is really asleep or if he is allowing Sesshoumaru to defend him, and maybe for more than one reason. It was so sweet that Sesshoumaru was being so tender toward Inuyasha. I was all warm and fuzzy with the hair combing. Although, Sesshoumaru's more dominant side was about to make a very bad mistake. Actually, Kagome's sit may have inadvertently saved Sesshoumaru from making a very bad move in alienating Inuyasha's human half. Inuyasha definitely doesn't like Sesshoumaru's dominant traits. That was fortunate. Ah, the secret is finally out. Thank goodness for Miroku and Sturaki. Miroku sure is smart, but I hope that he doesn't do any major damage. It is nice to hear that Sesshoumaru doesn't have a real problem with it their mating. At least he was defending it. That was so important. He is more protective of Inuyasha than I thought he would be. It will be interesting to see whether or not it was their father manipulating them that brought them together, though, in the end, it won't really matter one way or the other. Still, it is so good to see Sesshoumaru being such a good mate, his instinctual defense of his mate. Too bad he couldn't defend Inuyasha's instincts. In this case, I think that instincts might prove to be more useful than the human perception of love. I was wondering if their relationship may have taken so long for Sesshoumaru to realize because Inuyasha's growth to maturity was stunted by the life that Inuyasha had to live. Maybe it had something to do with it. Oh, I loved how you portrayed Shippou. Maybe he can feel the depletion of Inuyasha's youki. He would be the perfect go between. At least Kagome and Sango might listen to him. It is good to see him on Inuyasha's side. I appreciate that. I don't think that the girls respect Inuyasha enough to listen to him. He won't be able to persuade them. Not with their current attitudes. Again, Sesshoumaru holding and protecting Inuyasha was a welcome sight. I think they could use another bout of luvin. Through all of this, I wonder what Sturaki, the swan and the wolf are thinking about the whole thing. Oh! And Sesshoumaru was right! What if Inu is with pup and Kagome killed it! It would be so terrible! Please don't let that happen...*whines* I have been hoping that Inu's discussion with Bokuseno would somehow affect how Inu views things. I'm running out of space here. I just hope that Inu is okay, that Sesshoumaru manages to protect him and do something about Kagome and those damn beads, that Inu and Sess won't be affected by a possible manipulation, etc. There is so much to wait for! Gah! Well, I think that you have encouraged me to finally write something. My muse abandoned me. Hm, I've got to give my muse a name. After avoiding me for so long, she deserves it. Thanks for a great warm and fuzzy chapter! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 21:37 PST
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I now know the pain off all your other reader. I can see why you would not be able to write as often as you would like. My sister has only one baby (2years) and he is a handful and a half already. I am amazed you have writen this much. Well i hope you get to write some...even if it is only a page or two when you get the chance. i would love to know what is going to happen. The thing that matters is that you don't stop writing the story completely, it's one of the best sess/inu i have read.....I have to admit i never saw some of the things from inuyasha the way you put them, but the way you explained it, they make sense from the actual story. like why don't they take off the beeds? etc. Well hope you get some time to write. I'll be checking every now and again waiting for your update.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:35 PST
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49 ah kill kagome. hehehe ithink inu would be mad even if she had the audacity to harm sesshoumarus mate.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 16:21 PST
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14 i really liked the puppy discussion... inu already know he wants sesshoumaru.... and it's kind of cool when Bokusenou mentions that the reason inu is changing is because of sesshoumaru. aww he is making himself EVERYTHING sesshoumaru wants in a mate
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:29 PST
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5 i appreciate your hard efforts in writting this chapter. it was well worth it. as sesshy and his mate.....but inu was kind of young. ah well he didn't really do anything. Or did he? they didn't have shirts on...
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:17 PST
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4 awww i like this one. at least now i know some of what happened on the infamous night. a drunk sesshoumaru, its good inu wasn't older...i wonder if sesshoumaru would resist.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:07 PST
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3 aww how cute. he was taking care of him. i wonder how someone so smart could be so dense.... but i love him anyways
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 12:00 PST
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CHAPTER 2 i guesse it is true, she does spoil shippou. Aw no one would mate a hanyou....ehehee. how do they happen across each other i wonder...
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 11:59 PST
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chapter 1 see i am reading from the beginning. i like the scene at Sturaki's house. YEAH! I am just excited about reading this story
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 04:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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chapter 45 ooo i love the three inuyashas. and the statment if i can't cry in my head where can i? serious right. i feel bad for sesshoumaru. well he knows why main reason behind the mateing.....damn i should go to sleep.......i've been reading this all night...but it is just so good!
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 02:10 PST
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32 i love your evil laugh........yeah! i also love the one thing on inuyasha's mind.
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Title: *misty eyes*
Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 00:22 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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chapter 20 I am crying...and i didn't even start from the first chapter. i really have to read this whole thing. Even if you can't update frequently...as long as you manage to update that is all that maters.i already love this story and it's so long....lots of good story!!!
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Reviewed By: Isis191 On: December 13, 2007 11:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very new to FanFiction and this in one of the first stories that I read, and I'm gald that I did. Your story is wonderful as is your writing style. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 16:20 PST
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Great chappie! Poor Sesshoumaru. I feel so bad for him. He really has had to lower himself. It's a miracle that he hasn't killed all of Inuyasha's group. Kagome and Sango are really being bitches. I'm glad that Shippou is not being a staunch Kagome supporter. That is a relief. Poor Inuyasha just can't catch a break. I'm kind of nervous about what will happen when, and if, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha find out that their relationship may have been engineered. I would think that their father hadn't initiated the process, but had only hoped to support fate. So many bad things could happen! Miroku is smart. I just wished he had kept his mouth shut. Inuyasha is happy.....I love how Sesshoumaru is being so protective of Inuyasha. I don't believe that he can blame all of their newly developing relationship on instinct. Even if it is, I love how you are portraying it. Can't wait for the next chapter!.....I can't remember how long you had said it would be before you were going to be settled in to your new place, but I hope it is going well. Say 'hi' to the kiddies for me! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 18:56 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
indeed. you are sustaining the interest and the fun in this fic. glad to see you updating even if your real life schedule keeps you very busy. thank you. this fic has kept me reading. i'll go check aff, too and see if you've updated there too.
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