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Reviewed By: Won't let me put my pen name On: February 10, 2006 21:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great two chappies. I'll review on AFF when you can finally post them there. You know, if I were Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru was acting like that, I'd be dying one piece at a time. His body has went through hell for his mate. His mate's youki wants him, but Sesshoumaru is ignoring it. I think it's time for Inuyasha to start getting deathly ill. Yep, and only Sesshoumaru's acceptance can save him. It will push Sesshoumaru to make a decision. I don't think anything less would. Sesshoumaru will either accept him or let him die. He's such a jerk. Okay. That said, love the whole 'sensing' thing. That's good enough to become inu fanfiction mythology. I like your witch, great character. Hope you keep her around for awhile. Ominous portence. I knew that the kitsune lord was bring bad news for the brother's future. Hope Inuyasha is able to defeat it. He's probably the only one that can, being that it is destroying the balance of the land. He's probably the only one that knows how to fix it. Even if he doesn't know that he knows. LOL Ignorant puppy. If I don't shut up now, I'll be babbling. Can't wait for the next chappies. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: dye4 On: February 08, 2006 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! I didn't know it was uncompleted. I spent all day at school wanting to finish it when I got home but I can't it's not finished to read!!! Cruelty to humans is what it is...but please hurry up so we know what happens to Sess and Iny!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 23:23 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Shippo. He's still so confused. I can't wait to fine out what Sturaki's like. I hope that the boy's get it worked out before they have to deal with the others. I wonder how Kagome's going to take it when she finds out. O'well the boy's make a better pair anyway.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen (can't sign in) On: February 03, 2006 08:41 PST
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This is very good. Very Very good. *nods* Please keep it up. *thumbs up* keep up the good job
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bwlj (bookwormloverjen) On: February 01, 2006 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was a twenty out of ten, that would the rating I would give to you. Out of three whole episodes I have seen of Inuyasha, you caught them well. I love this story and wish to read more when you update. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 16:43 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon... Poor Shippo he's stuck and don't know whats going on. Well what's really going on with Sess and Yasha. I can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 15:29 PST
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omg! Its soooooo amazing! You have to update soon!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:27 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new view. Will Shippo have to choose between the two? Inu or Kag? Does 'Daddy' save him? I hope so.. Can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Taiyono [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oah, where is the rest? Come on you got to be hiding it somewhere? (Obsessed fan reader breaks in to house and begins ransacking the place) Nope not here. Urrr... could you pleeeeeeease update soon. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know thats was a tawist. Frist Sess needed to get his head together after he did Yasha needed to get his together or should I say needs to? Like I said great story can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for Sess to get his head together. I like the way that you gave a reason for Yasha to be the one to have the pups v.s it being just because he's a half breed, like most. That always bothered me. Well hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Misty Rose On: January 12, 2006 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your evil you can't stop there it was just getting really good. Please updae soon.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I hope that you keep the updaes coming..
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Reviewed By: Persimmon On: January 06, 2006 17:14 PST
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I really love your story :D please more!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 03:16 PST
Comment/Review:
I like the story so far and hope that you will update soon and often
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