| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: December 09, 2007 18:30 PST
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Kagome was really quite the B in this chapter. I like how Sesshomaru is holding himself back, it's really quite the effort for him not to kill her.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 17:52 PST
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Whoa Sesshy is pissed and I don't blame him.. Kagome should listen once in a while.. Well I'm Glad the you updated!!! Good luck with the baby/babies!!!
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Title: Chapt. 53
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 11:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...And of course, Sesshoumaru doesn't think that he's an 'annoying personality' too. Albeit, a rather dangerous one. Guess The Lord of the West has never heard of that human saying, 'birds of a feather flock together'.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 10:02 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it!! Update soon please and keep up the excellent work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AnimaAngel01 On: November 30, 2007 01:01 PST
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Please write more.
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 20:48 PDT
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I really love this story! I started to read it and couldn't stop! PLease update soon!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 15:09 PDT
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Gah! I was just re-reading. It's horrible that Sesshoumaru executed those who held his father's views of hanyou and human. *shudders* How is he going to explain this! Won't there be some pretty pissed relatives of those that he executed? Wow. This could be a real problem! Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall_ On: April 19, 2007 20:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, chapter six. You asked what was thought about the fight scene. Though it was a bit short for this action whore, your description was excellent, particularly concerning Inuyasha's last swing. You did a great job on that. Eh...yeah...I'm reading it AGAIN! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snerk* You said that Sesshoumaru was plotting and scheming. Is this a hint of things to come? Yeah, I am curious to see what he has planned for Kagome. Mind you, I don't hate her, but Sesshoumaru does need to assert himself. You have created a perfect opportunity for him to immediately take care of her perceptions. Maybe she will lose her voice long enough for him to have his say without her putting her foot in her mouth. ^_^ Aw, he found Inuyasha's voice soothing too. *warm fuzzies* And he smiled! Yes! A happy Sess is a sweet Sess. Yummy…I wonder how the differences in their parenting are going to affect their relationship. Inuyasha doesn't expect perfect obedience, but Sesshoumaru does…Hah! Sesshoumaru finds out that Inuyasha is more intelligent than he originally thought, or at least that Inuyasha had more common sense than he first believed. Good for you! And! OMG! Sesshoumaru had a little insight into how to approach Inuyasha with training to be a lord. How awesome! Now maybe there will be more understanding between them…Sesshoumaru just had to go and be a jerk. He could have explained things to Inuyasha, but instead, he just had to pussyfoot around and get Inuyasha all worked up. You are so mean. Poor Inuyasha needs a break…Hm, the strength of Inuyasha's scent claim on Shippou gave Sesshoumaru more to think about? It makes me wonder what that was. Would it be how strong Inuyasha actually is, or how much he really cares for those under his protection? Hm….Aawww, Inuyasha's adoration. That was so sweet. Still, that was mean of Sesshoumaru….If you get to the interaction with the rest of Inuyasha's pack in the next chapter, I hate to see what is going to transpire. Thanks for the update! It was really fascinating. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 15:24 PDT
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LOVED THE CHAPTER. i'm glad that inuyasha and sesshomouruare getting along better. can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your pregnancy goes alright. boy? or girl?
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Title: Chapt. 52
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru is just wonderfully arrogant! And, in spite of it, he's developing a deeper appreciation for his mate and patience too. He actually explained all of his reasoning's to Inuyasha without being such a jerk. And he's going to give Kagome "THE TALK"...that should be interesting!! Will he be able to hold his temper or will he get the urge to try strangling her with his 'fluffy'? She can be pig-headed and stubborn; it's a good thing Sturaki is there. Damage control seems to be one of her talents and she does it so well. How will Kagome react to Shippo's new status? That will shoot a hole in another one of her fantasies for sure. Congrats to you on your new arrival! I hope everything goes well for you and your little one. Have a safe and happy holiday yourself too!!
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: April 06, 2007 18:48 PDT
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It has been a while, I got this one confused with another story so at first it was really confusing, but I am all caught up with now. A happy family has been created. yeah
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Reviewed By: CandyCane On: April 06, 2007 15:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am so glad you've updated. Liked the pov and flow of this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I wonder what will happen when they get back to Inuyasha's "pack"?!? I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Hope everything goes alright in the rest of your pregnancy!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Vulcana On: April 06, 2007 07:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear that you are getting hit from all sides. I'm glad to see that you are writing again. I rather enjoyed the description of the scent claiming. It was very detailed and interesting. I wonder how much deeper Kagome will dig herself into trouble. I hope you can write soon since this is a very enjoyable story.
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