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| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: June 01, 2006 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you very, very much for updating your fic. It was a wonderful end of the imense stress period and onto another one in 6 days present. I thank you and wish you luck in writing, and in life in general.
| Reviewed By: slinkygrrl On: May 29, 2006 23:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story brings together many aspect of the anime series in an original way. I feel InuYasha, his brother and pack are portrayed in a realisic way. I really enjoyed the writing style which shows the same event from different POV without being too repetative. I hope InuYasha learns to be a good Sub because we all know the subordinate holds all the power;) Very Impressive story writing! Keep up the good writing.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 15:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read back through your fic and tried to see things from Sesshoumaru's perspective. He knew that he was continually drawn to Inuyasha. And after the trip to Bokuseno, it seemed that perhaps he really did want to find out if Inuyasha was his mate. Although, expecting that he wasn't and not certain that he liked the idea, once he made the decision, he was fully intent on his purpose. He didn't seem to have any real plans to throw Inuyasha out, at least not while mating season was in full swing. Later was questionable. Regardless, his youki seems to be gaining more ground and in the process, Sesshoumaru appears to have developed feelings for Inuyasha. The problem now is that Sesshoumaru is insecure that Inuyasha truly wants him as a mate. I felt really sorry for Sesshoumaru when he recognized that Inuyasha's words were hurting him. BTW, I nearly cried when you had Inuyasha crying in his head. I probably would have had you focused on it a couple of more sentences. Anyway, I'm starting to see that Sesshoumaru is becoming more fond of Inuyasha without his youki's prompting. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru now also sees how his specific behaviors affect Inuyasha. It was really hard to see things from Sesshoumaru's perspective. I don't know why though. Perhaps it is because all sides of Inuyasha are colored with emotion and overreaction. I am really interested to see how the two respond to each other once they wake up; particularly Sesshoumaru. I found his behavior toward Inuyasha when the healer came in to be very touching. And OMG! I forgot that Inuyasha's pack is there. Those subjugation beads feed off of Inuyasha's youki. What if Kagome 'sits' him? Will it be life threatening? Ooooh, Sesshoumaru would go into a rage if he were not trying to save his mate. I can't wait to see how that one works out. Excited to see the next chapter! Snow PS. Hope this makes up for any chapter reviews that I missed.
| Reviewed By: Taisho On: May 27, 2006 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Glomps you* Yay! You updated, you updated! *lets go* I'm okay now, but I want more, I know I'm demanding, but there are so few stories out there with these two that they actually have to work to make the mating work. Most stories are all like they go into heat, the fuck, and they're happy. How lame is that?! I'm all for some angst, but most comes from out side of the mating, not very many stories focus on the angst of these two mating. I mean, come on, they've only been at each others throats for centuries, that shouldn't just suddenly stop as soon as they mate, right? I mean they have to learn a whole new way of dealing with each other or they both die, and that's not high on either ones list. So having you write a story where most of the angst is comming from these two in the begining is awsome, and that's why I love it! So please forgive me for being demanding, but I really hope that you update soon. Sooner then you have been. I look forward to seeing what happens next, and what this rising evil is that the kitsune lord was talking about. Ja ne.
| Title: OH MY!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It's very interesting and I look forward to reading more.
| Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like Sesshoumaru got a swift kick in the pants. I kinda felt sorry for him when it hurt his feelings, but he's still the stupid jerk that won't own up to even having feelings. But, you know, I've actually met a man like that. It seems that what Inuyasha said hit him like a ton of bricks. Ooooh, Inu's demon side really pisses me off. I just wanted to knock his lights out when he started berating Inu. I'm surprised that Sesshoumaru didn't. After all, it was his mate that was being insulted. This is so confusing. I think that it is time for me to go back and read the entire fic at once. I think that I'm losing the train. However, I was amused at Sesshoumaru's reactions and it was funny that he was blaming his emotions on fatigue. It was sad when he realized that what Inuyasha was saying was coming straight from the heart, so to speak. *sigh* I think that I feel sorry for them both. I'll be glad to be getting out of Inuyasha's head though. It's weird in there! LOL Just kidding. I enjoyed Sesshoumaru's POV very much. Can't wait to see where you take it from here! Snow
| Title: Finally, an update XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 25, 2006 08:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waaaaaa!!!! You finally got Sesshomaru's POV in there. I imagen doing his POV is alot harder than doing Inuyasha's, espashally when your trying to give him an air of pain, or of careing. I think you really captured it while keeping him in character, as for the modern phrases you mentioned, I think you would havta point them out for anyone to notice. ^^' Beautiful job as always!!!!!! XD XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
| Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant wait for the next chapter...
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DEEP! It took me four days to get though this masterpiece, and all I could think of is I hope InuYasha can come to some peace with his life and his brother/mate. I'd hate to see those two not workout. Newt chapter soon please!
| Reviewed By: Russanya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 21:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. It is actually after reading this that I was moved to write again. It got me through a lot of really hard times at the end of my semester, having something that I could read and feel hope for. I know that might sound strange, but it did. Update whenever you feel is alright. It is always worth the wait Russanya
| Reviewed By: the tell-tale kitten On: May 19, 2006 05:43 PDT
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Hmm..I don't know when you plan on updating, but hopefully it will be soon. I have wated a very long time for an update, if you've stopped with the production of the story I wish you'd say so. I want to see what happens next and what's going on with all these others in Inuyasha's head, I understand who they are adn why they are there, I just want to hear more about them.
| Title: AWESOME STORY!
Reviewed By: Jubes On: May 15, 2006 20:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there, this is your loyal fan!! I am so happy you made this story, I dont think there are enough INu/sessh stories out there. And you are a great writer. My overall rating was a 10, however the reason my enjoyment factor was a 7...was because there were some points that FOR ME personally...they lost my interest. Like, for example when you finished writing a chapter from yashas point of view, then next chapter you start writing about what Sessh was feeling, thru out the whole ordeal of the last chapter. Those parts are really what bothers me...it gets repetitive...not in words...but in like...I start feeling...GET TO THE POINT. I hope that didn't sound bad, because I do love your story, I did after all read each and every chapter. YOu are an awesome reader, I just thought that perhaps you would like to know my opinion on the matter, weathear you ignore me or not, its your choice. Over all, you are a great writer, I think you have originality! I havne't quite read a story like this. And over all I just the fact that your spelling and Grammer is just...AWESOME. O_O I like your style of writing too...SO you are a great writer to me...I will continue to read your story. So UPDATE SOON, cause i find myself to be adicted!! =D
| Title: It's got to get better!
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that's so awful; I hope your daughter is feeling better this week! Please let her know that all of us are wishing her a speedy recovery. And when she's starting to feel like she can zip around on crutches, please remind her to be extra careful!! It's all too possible to have a second fall and get hurt more. Yeah, I have a friend who has been there and done that number this week! Ack! Where is Sturaki? Please say that she is in there somewhere too - the boys need her as a mediator! And what about the swan demoness? What does she specilize in? Inuyasha is spilling his guts out about the whole situation and it looks like Sesshoumaru is just about to loose it now that he knows Inu's reasoning. Another evil cliffie ;-) Concentrate on your family; we will happily await your next chapter. A happy you, makes for a good story. Take the time you need. Best wishes for you and your family!! Bibi
| Title: Good wishes
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 11, 2006 18:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, my 2nd time typing this. I though I had already mentioned it but I dident, very sorry about your oldest and I hope their ok! Sorry I forgot to put this in my last one ^^' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
| Title: Im having update withdrawls
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 11, 2006 18:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left me at a cliffy!!! Now I wanna know what happends next ><
ou made it sound like in this chapter that Inuyasha would just give his pup up to Sesshomaru, when in another chapter thats all he wanted from him. Dont know if that was intended or now but ^^' You really bring in Sesshomarus emoutions this time as well XD *Squee!* I cant wait till you update again!!!! ><
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