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Title: cool update, yaaay.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 23, 2006 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehe. Well now. Evil point to leave us hanging at. Is Sesshomaru gonna be able to free him, or not? And what about his human and demon sides? Will there be more of a physical confrontation between them and Inuyasha? Or even Sesshomaru? Somehow... I do not see this being resolved quickly. Thats cool. Please, I beg of you, update soon? Tryst.
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: April 23, 2006 14:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww! so cute! i liked the youki yasha! adorable! will sess get hanyou yasha out?? i hope so!! great chapter!
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Title: Inuyasha's POV
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I was just thinking that Inuyasha's three perspectives sound like the id, the ego and the superego. Very interesting.
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: Awesome! On: April 21, 2006 17:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I missed a review. Oh, and incidentally, I think that I titled chapter 41's review as 40. I loved your characterization of and dialog for Totosai. You made it so witty and true to the character; forgetful and very blunt. The history that was gleaned was quite a bit to process. We also get to see more depth with Myouga's character. His concern was very endearing. Oh no! Please tell me that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's mating is not just an effect of the swords blood bond! Even if it weren't true and Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru thought it was, what havoc would that tidbit of information wreak? What a suspenseful ending. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. Is the group going to make an appearance and totally screw things up? Will Sturaki arrive and save the day or will the mates recover and choose to go their separate ways? Of course, I know that you won't answer all of those questions in one chapter. But it's nice to wonder. Great chappie, Snow
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Title: Nice.
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: April 20, 2006 19:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just 'discovered' your fanfic not to long ago was it only 18 hours ago? Anyway you're doing a very very good job on it and I like your writing style. Please continue to update this fic, and e-mail me if you're having any writer's block. luciferhawk_neko@yaoo.com
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Title: Chap. 42
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 19:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More lovely background material! Great job with Totosai! He let's you think that he's nutters and he is anything but! Always has some off-the-wall thought process that makes a weird kind of sense. And as to the number we have on the road all headed for the Inu's, it's either 7 or 9 depending on the current variables. There's Sturaki, Inuyasha's pack and Myouga, which totals 7. Plus there is the swan demoness who is yet to come plus that really nasty monster thingy; which gets the count up to 9. And just for fun, add in Kisho, who has already made the trip, to get a grand total of 10. But who's counting?! LOL Looks like a really big get-together is coming up!! Bibi
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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It's a bit confusing... maybe that is me though. So... um Guess I'll read it over again when I am less tired and distracted, apparently I can't eat a pizza and read at the same time LOL! :| Mer.. hope to see more chapt. updates soon :D
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Title: Thx
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 18, 2006 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the tip on using the ctr key, I'll be sure to try that ^^' Hpefully I'll be able to get this review up in one pice this time, very sorry about last time >-< You seem to be bringing everyone toghether now, it looks like things are gonna get complicated once everyone arrives, the next couple of chapters must have/or will be really hard for you to figure out trying to sort out all the comotion while keeping them in character. Im looking forward to it though as im confindent in your skill, I mean, after all you did come up with this brilliant story, im sure you've already got the next chapter in your head. Until next time your loyal but clutsy reader ^^' XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: April 18, 2006 16:23 PDT
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ohhh! new development! good chapter, but i agree! i miss inu and sess!! yey for updates!
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Title: for chapter 34? 1st n second mating thingy
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 14:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow the mating marks was kinda unexpected, I like the idea though. Wish IY got him deeper lmao sounds a bit shallow? meh. Good job so far.
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Title: New Moon
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just thought of something else. What about the New Moon!? That should be happening pretty soon. How is it going to upset that power struggle going on in Inuyasha's head? Will the youki-self just go on hold, involuntarily, so that Inuyasha's hanyou-self has a chance to take back control from his human-self? Bibi
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Title: Chap. 39, 40
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chap. 39 I feel so sad for Inuyasha; being held prisoner by his youki and human selves. Yeah, it's safe to blame this mess on Sess and his years of 'hate you/love you' attitude towards his baby brother. Sturaki did warn him! And, I do pity Sess too - he is trying the best he can. Too bad Sess and Inu couldn't get to experience or at least listen in on what is going on inside their minds right now. Will the 3rd and 4th Claim help them this way? Would it create a mental link that they could use as needed for a really deep communication? Oh, that has so many possibilities! Chap. 40 Yoshehana is cool; her assessment of the wolf Kisho was funny. It seemed like they were more interested in one-upmanship for a bit and then settled down into a mutual admiration for the problem at hand. Help the boys!! Don't go off and start theorizing! Allright Sturaki! She's on the move!! I like the way she assessed Kagome; she's just not right for Inuyasha - period! I agree with her. Kagome is not all 'goodness and light'. And who will be sending the swan demoness to help the boys out? How many other seers are interested in or know about the happenings at the palace? This story just gets better and better!
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Title: berating Inuyasha
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 16:31 PDT
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I just had to comment on something. I found it hilarious that Sesshoumaru would go to the Goshinboku just to berate Inuyasha for getting pinned to the tree. That is so funny. Snow
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 19:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ach! So if Inuyasha's youki being so sapped is not from the transformation, could it be from a broken heart, believing that Sesshoumaru really doesn't want him, but was just affected by pheramones? Could it be that he is subconsciously attempting to dissolove the mating bond and it is killing him? Could the boogie demon be doing it? Gah! You're killing me here! Will his friends be able to help or will only hurt Inuyasha more? Will they drag Inuyasha away with them? Would Inu be better off leaving Sesshoumaru's presence? You better have some answers soon, woman, or...or...or...I'll go friggin' insane! Great chappie, lots of meat.--Snowfall
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yoshehana was too cute by wanting to skip down the hall, her jubilant spirit and loyalty reminds me of Rin. Hehe. Describing Sesshoumaru's impending wrath at her for bringing in a wolf as 'fallout' was very funny. It was fortuitous that the old wolf, Kisho, was curious enough to be swift, even though he does not know how to help. However, we did learn a few things; such as, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are somehow bound in a way that no one understands. I am just as curious. As with Kisho, I am also curious and worried about Sesshoumaru's youki being so drained what with the knowledge that it shouldn't be happening. Why? Is it just the internal war within Inuyasha? Or is there more? I'm starting to get quite anxious about that one. The fact that the wolf could communicate with Sess was just too cool. Loved that. Oh yeah, Sturaki to the rescue! I love that woman and can't wait to find out what and/or who she is. Her view of Kagome was quite enlightening. Her saying that there wasn't much time made me more worried than ever. Please update soon. The suspense is killing me. Gah! Snowfall
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