| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitty Neeka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2006 19:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't belive you left off like that! So evil! PLease update soon I love this story!
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Reviewed By: Oh Yeah On: February 17, 2006 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost forgot. Inuyasha's daze is too cute, sweet, funny, romantic. I do feel sorry for him because he doesn't seem to have any control over himself. I'd be afraid if it were me, but maybe he's too overwhelmed with hormones. I can't wait to see where you are taking this. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Oh Yeah On: February 17, 2006 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting impatiently. And you leave it there!? You bitch! Your rendition of Rin was too cute. What a place to start out too. Sesshoumaru's home? His room? His futon!? Has Sesshoumaru finally given in to Inuyasha? Or is he giving in to his promise to his mother? How far does he intend to take this? Ach! You've left so many questions! I sure hope you have the next chappie up soon. Love ya, Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Won't let me On: February 14, 2006 05:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshoumaru's thoughts were rather amusing. 'Marking' itself has been around for a long time along with the blood extending the life of a human mate. I had no idea that this was already being done when I wrote a fic back in 2004. And I was rather proud of myself to. Just goes to show. Oh well, I think that some things are inherently plausible and many can come up with the same ideas. Whoever started the whole marking mythology should be proud that it has went so far. However, yours have different levels. I like the levels and the fact that Sesshoumaru is so dead set against doing the last two and most definitely not the fourth. LOL His attitude is so funny. Although I can see it. I feel so sorry for Inuyasha. He's trying so hard and now he truly believes that he's not the one. I wonder where he will go from here, psychologically, physically, etc. Does he want to be with someone who doesn't want to really be his mate? I wouldn't. Screw that person. Of course, he's went through this earlier and almost got mated without his permission, but now he feels as though someone has confirmed that fact. I certainly wouldn't want to be in his shoes. You have something planned. I can tell. Sneaky wench. Can't wait to find out what it is. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: Won't let me put my pen name On: February 10, 2006 21:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great two chappies. I'll review on AFF when you can finally post them there. You know, if I were Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru was acting like that, I'd be dying one piece at a time. His body has went through hell for his mate. His mate's youki wants him, but Sesshoumaru is ignoring it. I think it's time for Inuyasha to start getting deathly ill. Yep, and only Sesshoumaru's acceptance can save him. It will push Sesshoumaru to make a decision. I don't think anything less would. Sesshoumaru will either accept him or let him die. He's such a jerk. Okay. That said, love the whole 'sensing' thing. That's good enough to become inu fanfiction mythology. I like your witch, great character. Hope you keep her around for awhile. Ominous portence. I knew that the kitsune lord was bring bad news for the brother's future. Hope Inuyasha is able to defeat it. He's probably the only one that can, being that it is destroying the balance of the land. He's probably the only one that knows how to fix it. Even if he doesn't know that he knows. LOL Ignorant puppy. If I don't shut up now, I'll be babbling. Can't wait for the next chappies. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: dye4 On: February 08, 2006 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! I didn't know it was uncompleted. I spent all day at school wanting to finish it when I got home but I can't it's not finished to read!!! Cruelty to humans is what it is...but please hurry up so we know what happens to Sess and Iny!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 23:23 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Shippo. He's still so confused. I can't wait to fine out what Sturaki's like. I hope that the boy's get it worked out before they have to deal with the others. I wonder how Kagome's going to take it when she finds out. O'well the boy's make a better pair anyway.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen (can't sign in) On: February 03, 2006 08:41 PST
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This is very good. Very Very good. *nods* Please keep it up. *thumbs up* keep up the good job
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: bwlj (bookwormloverjen) On: February 01, 2006 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there was a twenty out of ten, that would the rating I would give to you. Out of three whole episodes I have seen of Inuyasha, you caught them well. I love this story and wish to read more when you update. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 16:43 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon... Poor Shippo he's stuck and don't know whats going on. Well what's really going on with Sess and Yasha. I can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 15:29 PST
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omg! Its soooooo amazing! You have to update soon!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:27 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the new view. Will Shippo have to choose between the two? Inu or Kag? Does 'Daddy' save him? I hope so.. Can't wait till you update.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Taiyono [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 21:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oah, where is the rest? Come on you got to be hiding it somewhere? (Obsessed fan reader breaks in to house and begins ransacking the place) Nope not here. Urrr... could you pleeeeeeease update soon. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 14:46 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know thats was a tawist. Frist Sess needed to get his head together after he did Yasha needed to get his together or should I say needs to? Like I said great story can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 18:24 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for Sess to get his head together. I like the way that you gave a reason for Yasha to be the one to have the pups v.s it being just because he's a half breed, like most. That always bothered me. Well hope you update soon.
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