| "The Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 244 ] |
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice very nice
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Reviewed By: Mad Maxx Coyote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 21:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I like how you see the events through both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's eye's. Your about to have a baby? Aww well congratutions. Hehe and hey if or when Inuyasha becomes pregnant at least we know you'll know your stuff. Good read, this is one of my favorite Inuyasha fics. Its also one of the stories that helped inspire my own Inuyasha fan-fiction. Looking foward to the next chapter. I wonder how Inuyasha's group is going to take all this. Even more I wonder how Inuyasha will cope with being Beta, because he just doesnt even strike me as the "roll over" kind of guy.
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Title: Hi. I was just wondering if you were going to update in the next little while?
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 05:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I was wondering if you were going to update at all any time soon? It's been almost 3 months since the last one. I know because I checked the 'update' thing on fanfiction. It said you haden't updated in a little over 2 months. Truthfully it feels like it's been longer. I guess it's really just cause i wanted to read more. I really wanna know how exactly Inu is going to explain to the others that he mated his older brother and 2nd worst enemy. In my mind it's always hilarious! Something like Miroku being freaked but accepting it because he's InuYasha's friend. Sango accepts it a little better bacause of her backround as a Demon Slayer and Kagome is pissed beyond words and leaves because in all actuallity she is really just a child. A well endowed child but a child none the less. Sorry but there are times she annoys the hell out of me. Mostly when it concerns InuYasha mating Sesshoumaru. There are few fics out there that actually show her as being mature enough to handle it. And unfortunatly for her so far you've portrayed her as an idiot. A hormonal idiot truthfully. But I digress. Is there any chance your going to update soon? If so I would loved to be notified. This is one of my favorite fics. and I can always bribe you with cookies for your kids and the 4th InuYasha movie! It's on YouTube. Just search for it. I think you'll like. Only problem with it is too much InuKag and NO SessInu. Anyway thanks for your time and listening to my rambling. Have a pleasent day/night! Arie.
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Title: 51 chapters
Reviewed By: gen50-inlj [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been following this at aff - and your story is really great. i was hoping you'd have time to update but i guess you're still busy. i hope real life finds you okay though. but i hope you get to finish this. there are a bunch of us awaiting this fic. i can name 5 in lj alone. the 5 of us are really looking forward to your next update. this is really a beautiful story, wonderful povs.
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 13:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so liked this chapter it was so good.can't wate for the next cha[ter.
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Title: Chapt.1
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. Had to laugh when Inuyasha gave Shippo his speech about his future; Inuyasha sounded like a drill Sargent working over the new recruit. And what about Rin? Will we get to hear her POV? I hope your whole family is well now and that the new year will be kind to you and yours. Thanks for another great read.
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Title: hmmmm
Reviewed By: gen50i-inlj On: January 23, 2007 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've enjoyed this fic ever since i discovered it. i was able to review once in aff, but they've changed policy and i dont know if i could review there again. just wanted to say - i agree with snow's rec of your fic. i was alreading reading when she did. i love your pov shifts. if this sounds like all the stuff i said in aff, it's because i really like your fic, what you've done with it, and what you continue to do with it. whilst i want updates and more updates, i understand that life happens. there's just one thing i hope, that you continue this story, no matter how long it takes. i hope you had a wonderful holiday, you and your family. and that 2007 is good for you and yours. i suppose, in my head, there are various strings of your fic continuing... but nothing beats what the author has for it. waiting for your next .... installment, whenever. thank you for writing.
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know that in my defection from AFF, I'm bringing my reviews over here and want to make general comments on your story. This is written with unusual depth and I find that it keeps me coming back for more. I believe that your portrayal of the characters are spot on. Though your style is quite a bit different than mine and I'm a horrible action whore, you've managed to captivate me. And, oooooh, I am so anxious for the next chapter!...Snow
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 02:29 PST
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I quite enjoyed that chapter ^_^ I really enjoy your writing, this story is great! Sorry about your children, hope they get well soon. Please continue to write, this story is too good to leave unfinished -- Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Tani [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:18 PST
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Hi! I discovered this fic last night and have been reading it pretty much non-stop since then. I've really been enjoying your portrayal of the characters as well as the thought you put into the plot a great deal. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 19:29 PST
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Oh, I'm sorry to hear about your children. Being sick really sucks. And I wanna thank you for updateing before Christmas. THIS is my christmas present. And you get your cookies! Do you want mint chocolate chip, sugar cookies, or just some snickerdoodles? I will give you ALL for writing such an awesome chapter. Please tell your girls that I hope they get better soon. Thanks again! Arie Date.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 00:50 PST
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LOL Nice good one I love how you played that last chapter out, Happy holidays and I hope you update soon.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood- not loged in On: December 21, 2006 17:23 PST
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Not reading it at the moment but what was all revised? O_o *reviews for this chapter will be later* Email: thevampirephoenix15@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 16:09 PST
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I love this chapter. It's just so sweet and ahhhhhhhhh. I'm really happy to read that Sesshomaru accepted Shippo and that Inuyasha will be happy and they will all live happily ever after... hopefully. Anyway I loved this chapter, Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 13:42 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I hope your girls get better soon. I thought this was a very well written chapter. I'm glad that Sesshomaru has accepted Shippo into the family! I can't wait till we find out if Inuyasha is really pregnant or not. I hope he is!! ^_^ Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!!
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