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 Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2006 15:30 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Excellent time for a bridge chapter. I was wondering what everyone else was doing and when they would decide that it was time to 'rescue' Inuyasha. LOL Can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter since both Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha seems to be in danger from this strange phenomena. Snow
 Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2006 15:28 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, news of the beast. I am interested to find out what it is and why it is heading toward Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. I like the way that it has a chapter of its own. Well, written as always. Off to the next chappie. Snow
 Reviewed By: Rawben...  On: March 30, 2006 15:10 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh yey! i didn't know you were posting here too! since aff.net has been down, i've been out of the loop... ;) wow for the bad guy! he's creepy. i'm excited for your next post!! oh, btw: is this story the exact same as the one on aff? i'm not like... missing part or anything am i?
 Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 30, 2006 05:20 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh yeah, we are on our way to some action. The plot thickens! Snow
 Title: Miss your update
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 28, 2006 07:33 PST
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Alrighty then, I'm going through withdrawals now. Just to let you know how much I like your fic. Update soon? Please, please. I know that you have a life and little ones and I'm being pushy. But...but...just to let you know how anxious I am to see what is going to happen next. ^-^ Snow
 Title: What Snowfall Said...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: March 26, 2006 05:23 PST
Comment/Review:
I havta agree with Snowfall on the way you word things, I dident think anything of it until she mentioned it, I mearly thought that was the was you talked or expressed what was happening, but when you think about it theres humer in some of what you say. The shifting form anger to panic mode made me laugh the most, Imagining Sesshoumaru's face changing expression in a matter of two seconds just tickled me. Thanks to Snowfall for pointing that out, you make me think about what I read! :) Goes to show that reviews are the awsomeness! ^-^
 Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2006 17:06 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I was re-reading the fic and realized that when Inuyasha was a child and Sesshoumaru had cared for him that perhaps it was Sesshoumaru's youki that had kept Inuyasha from dying! And maybe it was that draw that scared the attacker away! Kewlies. Snow
 Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2006 16:55 PST
Comment/Review:
See, told you that I miss stuff. I've read this chapter a couple of more times. Things that our found amusing are: None one talks about Sess 'that way', Sess thought that his behavior was 'a tempered display of his displeasure', the picture of Inu being plopped down and ending up on his back with Rin laughing, Sess's opinion that Inu was 'slow on the uptake', and Sess's youki going into 'panic mode'. Your wording on these makes me smile and laugh. Also, I found it intriguing that mates who are able to exchange youki are only usually able to do so after the third or fourth mark. It'll be interesting to see where you go with that.----So, I was right. I need time to really study a chapter or I don't get to comment on everything that I want to.---^-^ Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
 Title: I cant get enough..
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: March 25, 2006 11:18 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
10 is not high enough a # to rate you, your more of a 100! I always look forword to your storys!!! Wonderful update, please write the new chapter soon!!! :)
 Title: Chap. 37
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 23, 2006 20:20 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Quick, call the 'mate' counselors! Sesshoumaru is absolutely clueless about what really goes on in a relationship. LOL It's about give and take - there should not be just 'my way' or 'no way'. Sure, he's the alpha male, but, Inuyasha is the alpha 'female' of their family to be. That implies sharing because they both will be leaders for their family pack. And Sesshoumaru is certainly not sharing his alpha state. No way, no how. Poor Inuyasha, again he finds himself in a dual position; Sess thinks he is only the beta mate but Inuyasha is at the same time filling the role of the alpha pack female. And then there is Sess's jealously issues!! No wonder the fellows are having such a hard time. Hopefully Sesshoumaru will realize that his strong-arm tactics won't work on Inuyasha. Had to shake my head when he tells the healer that he just 'touched' Inuyasha. If he were human it would come under the heading of abuse. I can just image the look on the healer's face when she does check Inuyasha and finds a huge bruise on his arm and a very sore shoulder caused by his escape from Sess's crushing grip. That poor lady! But she must be made of stern stuff to survive in that household. I hope she gets a chance to voice her very correct idea about what makes a good mate relationship work! They both need to hear it. Had to chuckle at Sesshoumaru. He was thinking the least he could do was to make Inuyasha comfortable when he passed out. Argggh!! I should hope he would take care of his poor mate! LOL I got the feeling that Sess was doing him a favor by picking him up off the floor and granting Inuyasha the privilege of being placed in his futon. What will happen when Inuyasha's youki has absorbed as much of Sesshoumaru's as needed? Will it start to back-flow the 'excess' into Sess and perhaps drag his emotions and feelings to him? Would that start the third binding? Is it possible for just one of the pair to initiate or does it take both to participate? I imagine that Sesshoumaru will 'fill' the very low youki in Inuyasha but that would mean his youki in turn would become low. Thus it would cause a 'leveling out' so to speak after a while with my 'logic'. Which brings up another thought. The healer was able to detect that Sesshoumaru's youki was already streaming into Inuyasha to support him; did Sess inadvertently use his youki to actually war with Inuyasha's youki in the battle for dominance and so put more stress on an already bad situation? Another lovely chapter! Thank you!!
 Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 21, 2006 19:29 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was nice. but whatever could be wrong with inuyasha? is he gonna be okay? i hope so. can't wait for the next chapter!
 Title: Chapter 37
Reviewed By: Snowfall1  On: March 21, 2006 15:02 PST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sometimes I wonder about Sess's intelligence. He seems to be utterly clueless. He has absolutely no idea, nor does he seem to care, about what is going on inside Inuyasha's mind. However, his youki was not very happy at not being the center of attention at breakfast. It sounded as though his youki felt that it was being rejected and was perhaps even hurt. What!? He wants a fawning Inuyasha? Not likely. Sounds like Sess has been deprived of a mates affection for way too long. Poor thing, feeling as though Inu didn't think he was worthy of consideration. Hm, maybe now he knows how Inu felt. Still, he's treating Inu more like a possession accept when Inu is weak. I feel like telling him, "Get a clue, will ya!? LOL Though he was concerned that Inu was still hungry, it was not a good sign that he thought that his concern was all youki and he might not really give a damn, and he was appalled when the healer asked if they had done the third mark. It makes me wonder if Sess really wants Inu as a mate anyway. There is a lot of room to question his devotion to his mate, even though there is only one. I can't believe that he expects Inu to just submit,especially with the human blood. Clueless. I liked your description of the scream and how Sess never wanted to hear that sound coming from Inu again. So, will Inu fully recover without going critical? Does Inu and/or Sess's committment to the relationship affect Inu's health? Can Sess truly bring Inu back all by himself? I would think that the gentle, tender and oh so concerned Sess is sweet except that Sess only sees it as his youki's doing, not his own. He's blaming his OOC'ness on mating season as though he will dump Inu when it is all over. Not a good omen. He needs to be seriously bitch slapped! Uh hum. Sorry. All he is thinking about is pleasing his youki in keeping with a promise. He doesn't seem to really care about Inu at all. He is confusing. I can't figure out what he wants. Maybe it is because he is confused.-----Well, great chapter. Plenty of meat and the little action appeased my action addiction. LOL--Snowfall ^-^
 Title: The Prophecy
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2006 22:08 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, I just love your story! I started reading it at adultfanfiction.net but with all the problems i got annoyed and desided to look for it else where! and boy am i glad i did. there were like 7 chapters that i hadn't read! but that doesnt' mean i'm not excided at the prospect of more chapters! can't wait for the next update! i'll keep an eye! yep yep!
 Reviewed By: Vulcana  On: March 20, 2006 20:37 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more soon. I so much want to see Sesshoumaru's reaction to what just happened with InuYasha. It should prove to be very interesting
 Title: More Please?
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 20, 2006 07:09 PST
Comment/Review:
Um...I hate to be pushy, but *whines* are we going to see another chappie soon? My poor baby, Inuyasha, is unconscious and his ass of a mate is in a rage. Someone needs to have a talk with Sesshoumaru. Maybe Myouga could help. Dunno. --waiting impatiently--Snowfall ^-^
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