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Title: chpt50
Reviewed By: LynnGryphon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for finally going where dam near no one has dared go before, the acutal birth. Never had a kid and I have been questioning my desire to eventually have one all day, this was just icing on that particular cake ya know? As for the female munchkin, I can't wait for Sess's reaction. Let's see how well he can stick to the "Regardless of the biological father" bit ne? Can't wait for the next update!
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Title: Chapter 50
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! How could she have a spider and a half moon!? Is it latent is Inuyasha? Did Naraku and Sesshoumaru's genes combine!? Oh no! Was she just damaged from Naraku because she was in the womb when Inuyasha was raped!? Damn You! That poor little girl! I think I'm going to cry. Otherwise, I loved your portrayal of Inuyasha during the birthing. That was funny. And then Yuko and Rin's gasp at the placenta. LOL Hm, was breach a sign of Naraku? I am so very curious and anxious. I do hope that you have the next chapter up soon!---Snow
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always. Please update soon cause i want to know the pups names
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Title: chapter 49
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 03:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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omg, its 210 am lmao just finished what you have done all in one day! woo! I have no life sadly... *Tear* oh well i don't care happy easter. I can't wait to read more!! :D
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Title: for chapter 42
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMFGA ROFL that was the most funniest chapter EVER!!!! omgs!! I love how you put his mood swings xD almost makes me wanna have a kid (says alot) just to make my mate go through it lmao, too bad she's a girl though.. :| WOOT WOOT!
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Title: chapt 36
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 00:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I belive I know that the pups are Sesshies because while Inuyasha was running away and Naraku attacks him he is weakend some how, signaling he is already preg. before Naraku does anything to him. so Hah! I pay attention! I hope you noticed this as well. but seeing that this story is prb finished by now meh.. to late now guess that I Will have to see now wont I? (has been working on this since early morn. or something like yest. morning. can't remember... but yeah... )
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I know its hard to get reviews on here so, I'm doing one for you as well. It is kinda annoying to see someone speaking in these quotationmarks: ' ' and not this " " But it is your style so yeah... :| But nice work, I've been working on trying to get around to reading this one because its so long I don't feel like reading it but I feel as though its worthy of reading.
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Title: Chapter 49
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Traitors!" That was too funny. I love your depiction of Inuyasha in labor. Hehe, it gets worse actually. *smirks* When is he going to start trying to kill Sesshoumaru for being one of the possible fathers that is putting him through this pain? Oh, it would be funny if he finally broke loose, screaming away to have his pups in solitude. The thought makes me want to laugh; frantic Sesshoumaru and healers racing around trying to find him. LOL Seriously, that's how I felt with my last one. "Just leave me the fuck alone! I'll do it myself!" I would have too if they hadn't been stronger than me. Hehe. You go, Inuyasha! Give 'em hell! Oh yeah. Great chapter, can't wait for the next. Snow
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Title: inocence shattred
Reviewed By: vampirebabe of inu and yyh On: April 13, 2006 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is going to shatter my inocence. but it is really good.please continue.
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Reviewed By: lov it On: April 12, 2006 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lov it. update soon.
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Title: Yaaay!/Darn.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 12, 2006 18:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous, if very informative about giving birth. Thanks for that. But there's this creepy bad feeling that those pups aren't Sess's. I hopefully hope that they are. Though I really hope Naraku gets a taste of his own medicine. Ohh Ryuukotsui... Hehehe. Or a dip into the springs at Jusenkyo. Or, hehehe... Okay. Author moment there. Anyhow, cool chapter. Just one word.... Get on with it. Update. Hurry hurry. Sorry. But now that we're here... I wanna read more. Thanks. Tryst.
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always. I'm sure I'm not the only one that wants Sesshomaru to be the father of the pups. Oh and please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 48
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2006 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was just awesome! Yes! We are gonna see some action. We are gonna find out whose pups he has in there. And they had better be Sesshoumaru's or...or...um, whatever. I love your description of Inuyasha. Oh yeah. He wants them out alright; enough to crack his claws though? LOL Great chapter.--Snow
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome capter as always. And Yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Inuyasha is goin to have his pups. And I still hope they are Sesshomaru's. Please update soon.
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Title: Chapter 47
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the trials and tribulations of parenthood, but parents have their fun too. Awesome lemon, just loved it. Sorry this is so short, but how much can you say about a hot lemon. Hehe. And Sess heard. LOL Just loved that.---Snowfall--(okay, this is like the fifth try on trying to post this. MM.org can be so frustrating when trying to review. Does anyone know the secret?)
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