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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 07, 2006 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass new chapter. My angst senses are on overload. You are an awesome author and I love your work. Thanks for the update Please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story so much. your newest chapter is the best. Naraku is such a bastard I can't believe he would use the boys against inuyasha and Sesshomaru.
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Title: Awesome story!
Reviewed By: Jubilationqueen On: May 07, 2006 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl/guy whatever you are. I really love this fic, you did a great job. I am sure that if you keep up to this, you will be one awesome and incredible writer in your time ;) I love the story "what matters most" and i hope you finish it. My overall rating is a 9 because i feel you can MOST CERTAINLY do better. I can already see your talent with what i have read. So dont let anyone put you down ever, keep writing and entertaining me. Also, more into the story details. YOu better have sessh or Inu kick Narakus ass, BETTER or i'll kick yours. Once i find out who you are, that is. lol ok I'll stop with that now. ANywho, once again good story, please update soon, i will be impatiently awating your next chapter. Well...good luck, and keep going. bye!
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Title: ahhhhhhh
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods (not logged in) On: May 07, 2006 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WILL kill you if they don't survive!! come on a good fight scene or maybe drap their father into this? this is turning into a suspense piece you're doing great, please update soon
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Title: Great chapter!!!
Reviewed By: FXL-lazy On: May 07, 2006 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter so much!! I can't believe it!!! I bet Naraku will try to get all of them or Sesshomaru will kill him or or (weeping away) this chapter was so sad!!! I cryed again and I don't even know why any more! I hope if something bad happens their father or someone shows up! Please don't let Naraku take them!!! but of course if he does take them then it will be interesting and more exciting! Either if he gets them or not I would still love this story so much!!! And I'm glad you did good on your math test because I know the last test I had wasn't a pretty site not at all. So I can't wait for the next chapter this is the best story ever!!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that the administrators here would tolerate death threats. However, you may not allow Naraku to get away with Inuyasha or his pups! BTW, where the fuck is dad when you need him!? I think I'm going to go empty the contents of my stomach. See what you've done? Leaving at such a cliffie? If you don't hurry, I'll be dead. No more long emails from you. You better get your ass to writing. I'm not speaking to you until you do. So there! Humph. Damn that was a good chapter and well played out too. ^_^ Snow
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soom.
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Title: NOOOO!
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 06, 2006 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where is Daddy Inu?! Where? How can Naraku be so close when their on their own land? Ahhhh. Kill that spider. Poor Inuyasha... Guess thats all. Cool update. Tryst.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 19:42 EDT
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ok, officially crying here...Naraku is such an evil bastard who I want to kill, no...give to Sesshie, he would do better, more painful things. ^^ Did I just smile at the thought of complete torture and pain...Yes I did! If it's Naraku! You're making me ramble now, this is the longest review I have ever written, and it's barely about the actual fic (which is good) Inu torture...*muses to self* Hmm *gets out glowing bran-* no, must not give in! They must be happy! Must be...*bursts into tears of resolve*
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty intense... I don't think Sesshy would allow either:P Please update it soon. You should work on Subje.- that fan fic of yours, I'm hoping to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I come back and wow, there's alot to read! Kudos!!! As for Mokomoko-sama, it is not Sesshomaru's tail!!! If you watch the episode after Inuyasha uses the WindScar on him, both ends are quite clearly visible. In his demon form, the Mokomoko-sama becomes his scruff and tail, but only then!
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 04, 2006 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chapter. I really like the Inuyasha's views on parenthood and thanks for not having anything too bad happen in front of the pups. Can't wait for the next update. Angst senses are tingling.
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Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 19:03 EDT
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Very, very interesting!
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Title: Loved it again!!!
Reviewed By: FXL -lazy again On: May 03, 2006 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter alot!! I'm glad Inuyasha doesn't talk to his babies like that and it was so cute how he ruffled up Sesshomarus hair. I liked when Sesshomaru hugged him from behind it was funny on how Inuyasha was thinking maybe he had extra arms or something. Sesshomaru would have token him right then and there I am so glad Inuyasha had his human side to give himself some self control. I never thought Naraku would show up at that time but I guess it was going to happen eventually and it did. (I was hoping to read a lemon next chapter) But I like that Naraku came maybe they can kill him now so he can burn in hell!!!! But if he got away there would be alot more suspence and excitment!!! I hope Sesshomaru teaches Naraku a thing or two!! If it was me I would torture him and stuff stinky gym socks in Narakus mouth!!!! I'll calm down now because I just hate Naraku so much in this story I want to kill him!!! But I loved this chapter and I can't wait til the next one and I hope that Sesshomaru beats Naraku down and please don't let him take Tsukiko but of course if he did take her it would be more excitment and they would probably have to go to the castle and fight him then Kagura could fight him to and maybe that guy for her!! But what if he toke all of the kids and Inuyasha?? What would happen then?? Man I hope he dies! So I'll really finish right now and I can't wait for the next chapter!! P.s Hope you did good on your math test!!
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Reviewed By: Myli On: May 03, 2006 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a great writer and I love this piece of work. Hope to read more from you on this story! >>M
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