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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 › » ] | Reviewed By: Tai-san On: July 17, 2006 16:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass extreme. I thought Sesshoumaru would never go to find Inuyasha. As far as you being sadistic. I loves it good. Can't help it. Just got to have the angst. I'm glad they are close to saving Inuyasha though a part of me will miss his tourture. I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru is going to do to Naraku. *Evil laughter* I also am curious about Inu's new collar. Anyway thanks bunches for the new chapter. Best wishes and good waves. Can't wait till the next update.
| Reviewed By: Nahau On: July 17, 2006 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love your fic. I find myself waiting in anticipation for your next chapter. I can't wait for your next chapter, please update soon.
| Title: I have a confession to make . . .
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
. . . I have been literally unable to get onto mediaminer for more than two weeks, due to the end of school and the start of my summer job. But the first thing that I did when I was able to go online (for longer than it takes to check my email) was to check on this fic! I just read chapters 63 and 64, and I was blown away by the depth of the emotion and tension expressed. I am inside Sesshy's head (not the most beautiful place to be at this point in the story) and I can't seem to escape from thinking over his confrontation with Kagura. I have to admit, in the last two or three chapters, I was starting to get a bit bored of reading the back and forth angsty chapter of InuYasha saying "Aaagh, save me!" and Sesshomaru thinking, "Let me at Naraku and I'll tear his weaselly black guts out!". But this new plot twist and added action pulled my interest back in from its wandering journey. I always need to feel that something is happening in a story for me to keep reading it, and I am glad to find my desires met again - it's like you read my mind. Please pardon my vapid and fickle taste - unfortunately, I, like the majority of the entertained public, am easily bored and need frequent fresh meat to sink my fangs into (ha ha, I'm a demon too!). I suppose that you are having a pretty busy summer, like me (I work five days a week - whew!), which is why you haven't been updating as freqently as usual, but rest assured that there are still avid readers out there who care about reading what you have to say about our loveable Inu brothers. I'm not pressuring you to update more frequently - I know how difficult it can be to get something out when you only have nights to work and all of your inspiration seems to have boiled down to the size of the cup of coffee that you're drinking to keep yourself awake. But rest assured that as long as you keep writing good stuff, no matter how infreqently, I, your most humorous and rambling reviewer, will continue to fill thousand of lines of nonsense with abstract praise and criticizm in your honor. Now, on to the individual critiques of chapters 63 and 64: I loved that scene with Kagura visiting Sesshy and testing his patience - it is really a measure of how distraught he is that he cracked so easily and lost his cool - something that he would normally NEVER do, under any circumstances. Another query - is InuYasha only not fighting back at Naraku because he is afraid that Naraku is going to hurt his daughter? It seems to me that InuYasha could at least have given him a couple of swipes of the claws or some bites - before the poisoning collar was put on, that is. Oohhh, Naraku is so deliciously diabolical that it makes my blood run cold to read about him! Anyhow, keep up all of the good work and the awesome stuff, because I won't stop watching and checking, no matter how busy I am with work. Believe it or not, I actually feel inspired to go and do something ofor my own poor sad fanfic after reading this. Bye!
| Title: argh
Reviewed By: Inu_sesshoumaru_luver On: July 14, 2006 14:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVIL CLIFFIES thats not fair you make it sound like there's gonna be a very messy blood bath and then you cut off the chapter (wtf) i wanted to see sesshoumaru rip naraku limb from limb now you are making me wait no fair
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update.
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 02:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-AGH! COMPUTER SCREWED UP! connect this to above^^- (Naraku)....is going to get his ass kicked (but like someone said, you always find a way to trick us into thinking something good's gonna happen... what's next? AHH! -angsting-). About the name; lol... yeah, it's four. I couldn't think of any kind of name, so I was just like... you MM guys can make it for me... which didn't quite work, as you see. So now I'm stuck with "____insert user here". (Not that I mind. o.o Sorry for the backstory... tend to do that. =O)Yep, classmates + fetal pigs + mammary papillae + male lactation doesn't always make for the best situation... X___x. I agree with whoever said that they wouldn't relive that experience. Wowww. -shudders- Nope, Japanese isn't my language either, although I can insult some people pretty bad. (If you consider, 'you eat your socks' to be a really bad insult. If not, then, well... I got nothing better. Q_Q) Don't think your work is terrible! *virtual slap* Tsk, tsk -does that pointer finger slashy thingy to show shame... yeah... well you get the idea. And if you don't... well... hm. You're not the only one- Hah, glad you like the reviews. I'm told that I can be rather entertaining when I'm obscenely hyper and also half-dead at the same time, what with some really bad jokes and some really REALLY bad attempts at pure sarcasm. I don't believe them, but, who am I to question? Sorry if I'm confusing you... well, I try not to... okay, no I don't. I don't have proper brain activity to try to dissuade people from my raves. But, it was worth a try... Thanks for trying to console me for my crazy-ness. -snuffles- WELL! Loooove the story, can't WAIT for an update!! Keep going! -puts on doofy encouraging face- (not to mock) Time to see whatever you have in store for the inu pack! YAY!! ^_~
| Title: sorry this is so long... O_o
Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-get ready for really long review- LOVE THE UPDATE!!! Toooo awesome. I don't personally think you sounded that tired, afterall... so no worries there. Sounds like hell-man (sorry, I like to call him this when I am not referring to him as the devil.
| Reviewed By: Reviews from Tryst On: July 13, 2006 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry... I'm a bit over done myself. Loved the update. Finally we get to see some action on their parts... LOL. But you have a nasty way of doing something evil to us... Just when we begin to hope. So... Till the next email/reveiw... Tryst
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Doggiez! Woo lol. I was starting to forget what happen in the story its been so long since you have updated! Gosh! Anyways keep it up! Love the chapter ^_^ haha Sesshomaru didn't make it to the otherside of the river or w/e. how humiliation :D
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The begining of this chapter made me think of some kind of poetry. Very beautiful, kind of, but extreamly deep! I've never seen all of the third movie (what I have seen has been a cross between japanese which has Sesshomaru sounding like he's seventeen going on seventy, and a little bit of the english version) I understand what you ment by when you mentioned Ryuukotsei (hope I spelled that correctly). But I don't remember Inuyasha defeating him. Anyways, let me stop now before my story goes on forever. Absolutly loved the chapter!
| Title: How did I know?
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guessed it'd be Kagura to be the one to help him. In the show, she had asked him to help her defeat Naraku, though I don't remember exactly what he told her, do you? Anyways, I liked the silent dominate fight between the two, wish I had of been in the room to see Sesshomaru! (Okay, TMI...) As to the comment about either me liking your story too much or I don't like my friends, I care about them, it's just that this story's very interesting too! Well, I guess I'll just go and read a book or something till the next chapter comes out.(Yeah, I ment for that to sound like I'm completly bored out of my mind. Which I kind of am but once again TMI!)
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!! You updated!! Wheeee!! FINALLY ME SO HAPPY!! Is Kagura going to show him the moon with her fan like she showed Rin? OOOOoooh and does she already know where Inu-chan is? Such an amazing fanfiction I lurv it sooo much you do such an awesome job on creating it! Kagura is going to help him... hmm... I like the 'game' though it's fun!! That's crazy and a gasp!! Sessie didn't KNOW she was playing the 'game' lol!! Poor poor Fluffy! lmao! Butt-kicking soon hopefully? and are the other two pups okay, like their poison gone and all that good stuff? I'm soooooo happy you updated, I'm like bouncing around in my chair and trying to type all at once!! It's fun!! My thoughts on Naraku origanlly? That he's a sexy evil beast!! I was just thinking, in the show would you consider Sesshomaru a bad guy or a good guy? I mean he doesn't exactly apporve of Inuyasha and he hates Naraku. I've been wondering that for awhile and I thought YOU would be the perfect person to ask! ^-^ Loooooooooooove your fanficiton, please update soon!! Lurv it soooooooo much, got to love the angst!! L8RZ! (^o^)/~
| Title: Yes Yes
Reviewed By: Lare On: June 26, 2006 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagura is going to help? That's great! I can't wait to see when will Sesshomaru save his mate! I really hope Naraku will be killed soon like in the next two chapters. Kill him soon!!! And I hope Inuyasha and his daughter will be fine. Don't make Naraku mark Inuyasha. Ok bye bye!!!!!!
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: June 22, 2006 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Insert Evil Laughter) so much angst. Poor Sesshomaru if he goes with out Inuyasha much longer he'll definatly go insane. wheee insanity. Love the new chapter and i'm so glad someone's finally taking action to save inuyasha. I love Naraku's torture but inaction is depressing. hehehehehe. Love the update. Can't wait to see the next chapter. ps don't push your self too hard. thanks for the awesome work.
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