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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 11:42 EST
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Yay for the chapter of slight cuteness! I wouldn't call it fluff...entrails and fangs were involved, but in this story its one of the fluffier moments. Apparently the Inuyasha anime ending is not so much of an ending,I've not seen it myself, so I may be horribly horribly wrong. From what I remember of I don't actually remember if Ling asked Ed that *looks guilty* It's not that I'm a rubbish fangirl...I just read the whole thing in a day so I missed some of the finer details. I really don't remember anything like that, kill me if I'm wrong. *Cries at her own fangirl failings* If ya wanna get into manga choose FMA, it's alot better than its anime, and not so long at the moment. I think it's generally like that, the manga being better than the anime, depends which one came first. What saddens me is when people watch the anime of something and don't like it, when the manga is miles better *Cough* DNAngel! *Cough* The DNAngel anime should be burned for all time I say!....But alas I ramble sorry, I don't mind your ramblings so carry on doing so! I can't think of a sequel name...I am wonderfully happy that there will be one. Hmm...'The Angst/Fluff Chronicles'? Doesn't quite cut it in my eyes, I've never been good at titles. Good luck on it!
| Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:57 EST
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ok... Am I the only one who thinks this is disgusting?
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 00:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I will give you as much flattery as you need...wow...great chappie...oh boy was I in awe of it...but please get that sequel up soon...it has been too long since I have read your work and it is so well writtent that I cant leave it at this...I am worried for Tsukiko and how Sess is going to get back...he will I assume be needing to take is father's body back as well as his brothers and daughters...poor guy will end up pooped again...anyway...flattery...flattery.times infinity so please update...hehe
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending...(to this part of the story, atleast) ^_^ I can't wait for the sequel, so update soon please. Keep up the good work!!!
| Reviewed By: Korune On: November 25, 2006 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short, sweet, to the point! Loved the interaction between the two... Very fitting end that isn't the end. ^_^* And I'd chat you up more if I weren't fighting a cold and feeling like crap! =P I may take ya up on e-mailing you. Don't wanna seem to be a stalker though. LOL Take carez! And thanks for the good read!! P.S. Yeah, Invader Zim is about as whack as crack, but hey! I love GIR!!! **pouts**
| Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 20:58 EST
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O My GOSH!!! *heaves a sigh of relief* It's mostly over now. Wow, i was really worried for a while there. Have you heard anything about the ending of the series? My friend said that it's over, but i haven't heard anything. I'm kinda worried. I don't want it to end... I'm really looking forward to the sequal! Are you going to write any more chapters for this one or is this the last one? I mean, i guess that would make sense, seeing as there is to be a sequal, but you left it off so suddenly, i just want to be sure. I look forward to the next update, and this last chapter was really good!!! (If i hadn't said that already)
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 20:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon. What the name of your seuqal? Please don't ever kill Inuyasha or Sesshomaru they are to hot to kill. And I hope Sesshomaru finds their daughter. Please send an e-mail and tell me the name of oyur sequal and when your goin to put it up. my e-mail is No1_Inuyasha_fan@yahoo.com
| Title: Lord_Sesshomaru's_Lover
Reviewed By: Sasuke's_master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 14:19 EST
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hey um i have a question where did you get that oni meant devil and youkai ment demon? from what i know Youkai are traditional Japanese spirits and monsters and oni are demons or ogres and are one of the most famous youkai, or spirits and monsters.
| Title: Lord_Sesshomaru's_Lover
Reviewed By: Sasuke's_master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 18:04 EST
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okay i'm not done witht the story but i have to ask this why, in an american, fanfic do people use Japanese words like onegai and arigato and nani? I don't get it is it to show off or something? cause it makes NO sense i understand in like Inuyasha and other demon stories why they'd use Youkai and hanyou but i makes no sense to use onegai, arigato, nani, etc. in an american fanfic why do you do it? why would you do it?
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 01:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well good chapter, I lurv how Naraku was killed, rather thoughtful of Sesshy-sama. Damn, Inu-kun's pretty crazed when it comes to his inner youkai. I don't mind though, it adds a bit more spice to your fanfiction that nobody else can do. Well then... I might have to hunt your muses down, now won't I? InuPapa NEEDS to be brought back, Sesshy having a good relationship or not. I just luuuuuuuuuuurv InuPapa too much for him to just... die and stay dead like in the anime!!! Feh, yes, I'm gonna have to hunt your little muses down. lol, Well I think that's all I really have to say truth be told. L8RZ! (^o^)/~
| Reviewed By: AyaSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 22:32 EST
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asjkhaskjfsagjf omfg. i love it so far. hoolyshit. hahaha. and i must say, even though there appear to be a myriad of typos, it's still amazing. honestly? i teared up a few chapters back when inu pulled sessy's guts out. i gasped and cried a little. i love it. love it love it love it. i havent loved a fic this much since flames of purgatory [read it, it's good]. so uh...yeah. keep up the good work? haha. ^.^
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 23:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't you go "we're back on male lactation somehow"-ing me!! It's all your fault dammit! -cries- Pssh.. It's not cool to make reviewers cry... I'll take the sugar wholeheartedly, though. Not sure about the paper. I prefer the cotton and plastic, thank you very much. *_* Well as for normalcy and relevance to posts, all sense of the word was lost during the *first* post. Because I was only a small bit less than 5/16 crazed then. And as you well know, it only gets worse from there... *~_~;; PSSH!! The Lost Island of Mu (or whatever the freaking name is, god) is LOST!! Hence the name!! (It vanished like Atlantis, only five times better! -goes and gets popcorn-) POCKY? Where?! Actually, because you're just *dying* to know this, I ate REAL Pocky today!!! I love Pocky... I've been having that "random" feeling sporadically today (like the aforementioned declaration of pocky-love) and to sate it made sure that I got in all five thousand words for NaNoWriMo. Hey! Wait? Have you ever heard of/done NaNo? (translation: national novel writing month... aka, this month! November!! o.o) It just strikes me as something you'd be good at. Don't ask me why... and yes, it's American, but people from all nationalities can join, and yes, -gasp- that includes Canada! -a tremor and some surprised murmurs travel throughout the crowd- Okay, yeah... the whole "politically correct" thing bugs me. And I get why you heed standards, considering you post on the net and a lot of shit comes from people who sense so much as even the tiniest bit of racism, sexism or blechism. I know this is a rather large topic change, but I'm at a loss as to why you posted at the top of the chapter... OH!! I got it!! -Hallelujah chorus rings through ears- The thing where you apologise to males, yes... I understand now! I feel so special. ^_x And, might I ask, what psych? Are the voices in your head bothering you again? -looks determinedly at the computer screen and checks said inanimate object's temperature- Yay! I just lost myself on *that* tangent, back to chapter-talking-abouting-ing! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! I was soo scared that you were going to kill someone other than Naraku!! (Which in no way says you won't later, or that said kumo really is dead... but pssh, cross that bridge when we get to it... heh, heh.. bridge...) I put off reading because of it! And plus I wanted to review when I wasn't all schoolish and after I got in the beginning of NaNo. Oh, and yes! Back to chappie! YAY!! I'm seriously freaked out for Sess, though... who knows what he'll meet when he comes to. Inuyasha's problems not withstanding. Those are too great to count and pfft I'm lazy. ^_^ And now it's time for -dundundun- the Inevitable Evolution Lesson! (funnn,.... z_z) Cro-Magnons weren't very smart! And I end there because you mentioned brain capacity! Yay! Brain capacity=fun... F-U-N. And now you know! 'Cause it's Mike's Super Short Show! @_@ BYE!! ~i u h ~ PS And don't worry, I'm tracking down the brain cells now! I have Search and Rescue people looking for them! AND a missing persons warrant! '_'
| Reviewed By: Korune On: November 03, 2006 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just HAD to give ya all 10's again!!!! **squeals in delight** And, omg... I looked at that horoscope thingie, and I about fell outta my seat when I looked at Gemini! I mean, now I'm shocked at it all! I don't believe in it, but sheesh! If it's true, then I know why Aries and Taurus' are about all I meet these days! LOL. I'm an airy wordsmith that loves languages... Hmmm... YUPPERS! ^_^* Bleh... Anywaaaayz.... Take a look see if ya wanna. Oh... And how can I hate ya when I barely know ya?? =P But you can bombard me with rambles all ya want anyways. ^_^* Gives me something to do. Besides, **points up** airy wordsmith here. Hehe... But onto story matters... Ummm... Ya know what? I don't know what to say about the story other than I'm immensely satisfied with this last chappie! ((73)) I could go on about what's in my head on it, but fact of the matter is, I'd rather watch how things unfold from your incrediably angsty little mind!! And yes, I'd simply looooove a piece of that cake, thank you! Oh... Yeah... Fight scene... Kick. Ass. ^_^* Torture scene... Disturbing, but still... Fitting, and thusly... Kick. Ass. ((and other things that mere words can't express at the moment, for I can get rather... Eloqent and quite graphic sometimes, and I'd rather not at the moment, seeing as putting forth that energy to do so just doesn't seem quite logical, nor particularly entertaining at this point... And if my cat keeps licking my toe, I'm gonna kick it... >.< ~GRR!! Sorry, the little hellspawn has been at it for about 2 to 5 minute now, and it is damn hard to type shit with it going on! **sighs** I think that he wants to be fed... **grumbles** That fat little bastard is lucky that I love him... >away< .... >back< Ya know that I've gotta chat ya up just as much, if not more, than you did me, right? =P And let me tell ya, you may be in for it! LOL You wouldn't believe the randomness in my head! I'd love to put you on my spam list for the times that I get bored and decide to e-mail friends lines from my favorite TV shows on a whim. I especially love to quote GIR from Invader Zim. "Yay! We're doomed!" t this time though. ^_^* >there is a knock at my front door< Shoot... You're lucky I've gotta get off of here with so many letters left... ^_^* As it is, you've just been another victim of my boredom. And no, not sorry! Hehehe... **evil grin** Oh, and hope your Halloween went great! Next time I'll try to use up all of the characters that I can! Ended at characters left-including this and the numbers: 436
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: November 01, 2006 18:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was awesome. You're right I can never get enough angst. THis new chapter kicked ass. I'm glad naraku got what he did. It was perfect I commend you on your choice. Anyway my writer's block has lessened and my muses have slowly started to straggle back. Thanks so much for updating can't wait to hear more. best wishes and good waves.
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 10:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon. Will Inuyasha make it or will he die? And will Sesshomaru find his daughter?
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