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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: cool
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Cool chapter please update.
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool chapter!!
| Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 17:57 EDT
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OOOOHHH!!! I wanna help beat Naraku to a pulp! What an ass, geez. I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru is going to do to him. He is going to do something right? I mean, he's not the kind of person to just stand there and take it, especially not after he finds out that Naraku's controlling Inu. I mean geez. If i wasn't mad before i am now... You're so evil, doing all that stuff to them. *tear* What did they ever do to you? *more tears* (but i mean evil in a good way)
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 15:19 EDT
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I get your arguments about the forth movie, it was my first inuyasha movie so the fangirl endorphins had soaked my brains. I didn't find it terrible, I wouldn't watch it again however. I love the third movie, it gave me an everlasting adoration of Inupapa, who I completely love. But anyway...to the fic! Hasn't Sesshy realised that Naraku is controlling his hanyou? It's right there! Why? Whhyyy?!?! *Sniffles* I just want some fluff maybe. Maybe a nice bit o'happiness, this is endless misery so far, but it's so good! >.
| Reviewed By: ilovemystar On: August 30, 2006 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as always. If you dont write more soon I'll send evil raccoons after you. Poor Inuyasha. You just made him even more messed up. Thanks :)
| Title: Very good!
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 09:38 EDT
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I have to hand it to you, I never expected that Naraku would force Inuyasha to kill his own brother (and mate)! I sad, but great twist! (I wonder where Inutaisho was during all this and how come he didn't do anything?) Oh, well, update soon, okay? Great chapter! (Oh, and I know that I haven't logged in, but I'm Fluffymiyster, just so you know!)
| Title: super long. =]
Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie chappie GOOOOD!!! OMG!! I'm sooo sorry that I haven't reviewed (and I do in fact know your response to this). I was in Seattle WA (hah! SEVENTH STATE IN TWO MONTHS! =D), stuck without my laptop (well I had it, just no internet... grandparents don't have it... agh), so sorry! BUT! TO THE UPDATES I MISSED: oh. my. god. VERY VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTERS!!! Angst! I love angst! BUT ALAS! Naraku has his evil plan all... well.. PLANNED out!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Sorry... I'm coming off as eviler than usual, hmph. I L.O.V.E. chapter sixty six! Possibly one of my favorite chapters yet... don't know why, but I'll *try* to figure it out! Inuyasha should have just like flung one of those little critter things at Naraku and run for his life! Of course this is not a comedy, and it's definitely not a comedy meant for *my* sense of humor (rather evil at times...)so... er... well, I'm glad you didn't make him do that. AND very very VERY nice (if not completely sadistic) plot twist there, 67's a killer! I probably (okay, I do--) sound like an overexcited little kid, except with an "older" vocabulary... well... what can I say? I can say that I'm probably a little hyper (okay, I AM hyper). Within good reason-- I just flew in from Oakland (okay, never mind, Cali is the seventh state), so I've been on a freaking airplane for four hours without getting up, and before then it was a two and a half hour flight wihtout getting up, and before then it was walking around half-asleep because of our "early" flight-- eleven. But I had to get up at seven thirty! I shouldn't have to do that for another few weeks, And then it's six thirty anyway -tear-. No offense to Canada, but you should try leaving it sometime... go to Europe. DON'T go to America, though, the political system is horrendous... worse than most first world countries. Although Canada (again no offense) just elected the Canadian counterpart of Bushy, so I'm a little worried for our neighbors to the north. =| Harumph. Sadly funny, isn't it, that we're STILL talking about the male lactation thing, and it occurred, what? Four months ago almost to the date? Heh heh... About the Utah law, it wasn't that the law was weird (albeit a little too vehement if you ask me), it was the fact that the restaurant so proudly sported this law- framed, with all the possible punishments written beneath the actual bill, so yeah. O_o WELL; math -shudder-. One word: Thereisnoonewordformathit'ssoevilshouldn'tyouknowthat?! Well it seems you do know that, so I should like stop being half-crazed (no matter how much people like me this way... I'm always crazIER -baaad memories of evil cousin... half crazed... two in the morning... -shudders-- when it's late or I've just come off a plane and opened up my email and there's TWO (score!) chapters from WMTM!! This makes me happy, as you see. SO, for lack of updates, I've made this DOUBLEY long! BWAHAHAHAHA! (Avarwen: -cringes- No... not this again... -runs away from computer to avoid end of review blow up- 5..4..3..2..1..0! TIME!) WELL keep going! I know this pisses lots of people off but... STORY= best I've read yet!! I'm serious! well... This message will self destruct in 3..2..1..-iuh blows up-. Computer: Before the explosion, IUH said, 'x=-b+/- sqrt bb-4ac dvb 2a, and luckily your legs probably aren't gelatinous.' =D ~iuh~
| Reviewed By: Trysted Inu Punishment.... On: August 22, 2006 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Inu killed Sess?! Hehehehehehe. Bought time! LOL. You have given me a plot. Run Sess run. :D But on to the update... I loved this. It was so much more angsty than the others. I'm hoping you keep going... Hehehehe. This little inu fm needs to go and hunt down some fresh meat. Update soon, Avarwen, I'm counting on you. TIP.
| Title: Loved the last couple of chapters!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I missed the last couple of chapters because I was stuck with no computer for a whole month in a half and let me tell you it was horrible. All i could do was think about reading stories and I couldn't!!! Anyways about your story... the last few chapter were so sad! Inuyasha woke up and tsukiko was gone. Then he had illusions about Sesshomaru that must have horrible his mate is right there holding him then it turns out to be an illusion. I'm so glad that Sesshomaru and inupapa finally found him! At least Kagura helped out! The way Sesshomaru described the way Inuyasha looked he must have been there for at least two to three weeks maybe more then that and he hasn't had a bite to eat. Naraku is going to pay for it!!! Right? What is going to happen to Tsukiko? Let's see they might defeat Naraku and save her then it's a happy ending! Or Naraku runs away and takes Tsukiko with him and they worry about Inuyasha and dont chase after him. Or they chase after him and can't trace his scent and can't find him and end up losing her. There are hundreds of possibilities for this story! The ending of this last chapter was so sad!!! Stupid Idiots sonofabitch Naraku!!! I'd crush him like a bug if I could!!! But of course I can't...life is cruel!!!! I heard about the fourth movie in the anime magazine I get! The guy that watched it gave it a .5 out of 4 he said the plot made no sence characters were in there for no reason. Kikyo was like a total different character or something like that. That was the lowest rating any Inuyasha movie ever got! I have to watch it now to see if it really is as bad or confusing as people say. What do you think of the movie? So with all that said the last few chapters were great and hopefully I'll be able to read the next chapters on the same day there updated and I can't wait til the next chapter to see what happens next. If it's good or bad I'll love (and read) your story til the end!!!! So bye bye til next time!!
| Title: Tai-san
Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 21:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shite and chibi yaoi. I can't believe Naraku could do that. I mean yeah he's evil but damn that was kick ass extreme evil. I figured something would happen I just hope Sesshomaru realizes that Inu didn't mean to. Will they never escape? I loves the angst but I feel so bad for them and how will they ever find their daughter in that damned castle. The chapter was freaking awesome. Thanks as always for updating. Best wishes and good waves. See you next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You were very successful! Great job, I'm on the edge of my seat, and just when I'm about to cheer for the good guys--a monkey wretch hits me in the head! Damn cliffhangers! But, I guess thats what makes it more enjoyable! You did execellent! Looking forward to the next chapter!~B reading U!
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 09:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 09:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Title: AHHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I'm gonna die! The suspense is killing me! And i can't believe you did that! Poor Inu and Sesshy. Naraku deserves to have his throat ripped out. Update soon please!!!
| Title: Chapter 67
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 20:50 EDT
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*sob...sob...wail...sob...sob* I can't...believe...you did that. *sob* I...I...hate you! *wails* I can't...I can't...take anymore! *wails* I think...I'm going to the store *hiccup* now so that I can breathe. *sniffle* Snow
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