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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was too short :P update soon
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Title: teme!!!!!(you)
Reviewed By: inutaiyoukai25 On: May 16, 2006 15:48 EDT
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why you ............ you better hurry up with a new chapter and it better be good!! kami!! what is with all of the clif hangers!! hurry i r losing my mind!! lol
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 16, 2006 13:02 EDT
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I have really enjoyed this story a lot. I even nominated it for an Fanfiction award. But I will tell you something that is really starting to bug me about it. 1/2 of the chapter is response to reader comments. While it is nice to acknowledge that people have commented and to thank them, it is not very nice to comment MORE than you write as story. I hope that you take this comment in the constructive manner that it is intended. Your storyline is interesting. I am very much intrigued with how you will have Inu deal with his upcoming interactions with Naraku. Psychologically, this is the worst torture that he could possible go through. The monster that raped him now has his daughter too! I look forward to reading more of this story. I just hope I won't be reading more and more responses. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: May 15, 2006 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So....evil. Poor Sesshomaru. Damn that Naraku. Inuyasha was so brave to give himself up. I can only imagine what devious things Naraku has in store for Inuyasha. I hope Sesshomaru saves him soon. It's not fair, I don't think Naraku should have any claims to Tsukiko, he's nothing but a sperm donor when you think about it. Damn him he's a bastard.
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Title: Choose
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 07:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an evil woman. The only reason that I won't promise bodily harm is because you have to save my Inuyasha and Tsukiko. #@%@$#$% Inuyasha surrendering himself like that was noble. But he's right. Naraku probably won't kill him or the baby. I wonder if Naraku has anyone that can feed Tsukiko. I feel just as sorry for Sesshoumaru. He has to go home alone with two sons and doesn't know where his mate and daughter are. Yes, I think of her as his daughter. His mate gave birth to her. Inuyasha is not Naraku's mate. Naraku is the rapist. He doesn't deserve Tsukiko. I hope she makes his life a nightmare. Well, anyway. You are bad. Yes, bad. Hurting my Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and babies like that. Ooooh. Snowfall
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 01:28 EDT
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*Mehsniffle* I don't mind you making me cry, just keep on writing amazing chapters! *Waves hand in front of face dramatically* It true, slowly but surely you are passing on the ways of the ramble...or maybe this fic just makes me that way, feel the emotion! Please update soon, I'll protect you from any threateners with my newfound rambling skills.
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Reviewed By: Taisho On: May 15, 2006 00:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can still threaten to kill you! I'll just have Shessy bring you back, then kill you again, just for good measure. Don't worry, you can be brought back.Now get Inu and Shessy back together! And kick Naraku ass! Now that I have said this, stop cliffing me! It makes me wanna cry. You don't want me to cry do you?
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: FXL-lazy On: May 14, 2006 23:45 EDT
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I cried so much during this whole chapter I think I used ten boxes of tissue I can't belive how sad it was!!! How could you let this happen?? Why oh why is Naraku so cruel?? But other then all of my tears I loved it so much!! I loved this chapter and I can't wait for more because I know Sesshomaru will rescue his mate from Naraku I just know it!! I loved this story and I will read it til the end I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pulls out a knife and chases you with it!* uuuuuuuuuuupdddddddaaaaaaaaaate soooooon!!!!! I hope they both transform, then he's in shit! Muwhahaha! It'd be cool if the pups could transform into rabid puppies! and then attack Naraku... But meh... That wouldn't go so well.. :| Aww *cries* i really was hoping you'd update that fiction. Screw Chains. Pssshh.. >.> *glares hatefully*
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 14, 2006 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Growls. Damn.... Well, now what? Guess that hardly counts. But... I at least hope demon Inu will show. That would be interesting. Might save Inu's mind in the end. Tryst
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Reviewed By: skullz On: May 14, 2006 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must update now. This is turned out to be my almost favorite fic. It must be updated ASAP. Oh and not that you do it but don't you hate it when people can't spell correctly, all the time? Like when your reading your reviews and some idiot doesn't spell out almost every word. I mean really elementary school has a purpose you know. Sorry I'm in a ranting mood. It's Ok im not burning you and there is really no need to reply to this I just got off work and im really bored. Oh yea hey do you think I should start writing fics? That you can answer. (Just so you know)... Oh God Im A Retard!...Aw Shit.. (No offense to any and all meentally disabled peoples.)
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Title: nooooo!!
Reviewed By: inutaiyoukai25 On: May 11, 2006 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!!!!!! holy crap!!!!!! wtf!!!!! your story is awsome and and is so suspence full!!!!!!!! why do you have to stop like that right when it is getting really good!!! god i hate that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but its all good!! i dont mind cuz it keeps me coming back for more!!! keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: LizzzA On: May 10, 2006 18:58 EDT
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I LOVE UR STORY!!!! AND IM DYING 2 FIND OUT HAPPENS NEXT! So, please...please update. Thank you!! =)
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to let you know, I am up to ch.22 and you have me hooked, though quite honestly I shook my head at the original premise of the inu-brothers as mates. I have laughed my arse off, and teared up, and found myself contemplating the psychology of it all, and I must applaude what I have read so far... I will, as time permits continue reading, and I am certain you will be hearing from me again... Great Job!! Metsuki-baba
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