| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] |
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Title: sad again
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems like everytime I read a new chapter from you I'm sad and angry!! I'm angry with Naraku which I'm going to murder to death when Sesshomaru is done with him!! I'm going to bring him back to life and kill him again and again for what he did to poor Inuyasha!! Then I'm sad for Inuyasha!! I hope he gets happy again!! Can't wait to read ~ Inuyasha smiled at his mate and they kissed as the sun set on there happy life~ or something like that. I just can't wait til all the blood and action gets started!! hehehe Naraku is going to get his ass kicked!!!So you don't have the name of Kagura's mate yet? And that stupid collar that Naraku put on Inuyasha~~ I wish it could come of some how! Or it could be like they kill Naraku but the collar stays on and they can't get it off~And what's with Naraku saying that he made Inuyasha pregnant?? Did he really get Inuyasha pregnant?? I can't stand Naraku~~The little roach!! I can't wait til Naraku die!! I think I say that everytime I review~ Let's see what could happen~ Naraku could get away take the baby gurl~die~ suffer~win~ who knows? YOU of course know! I wish I knew so I won't have a headache any more!! So this was a great chapter that made me sad and murderous~ So can't wait til the next chapter!! Great work so far!!
|
Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 15:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
I totally agree about the Inuyasha history thing, and of course I didn't approve of him going anywhere with Kikyo *Tuts disapprovingly*. But to the fic, yay with Sesshy/berserker noticing! Of course I was clever and had already realised *preen* but I am now worried what will happen after Narakus imminent death, will Sesshy switch back from non-raging giant dog mode? Is WAFF a-plenty a-coming? I think a sequel would be good, maybe a WAFFy sequel...but you can torture anyone but Inutaisho, Sesshy and Inu...and not the kids...my morals say not the kids. Now I'm just babbling! Torture who you like! I'll be weeping happily/angstily right along with it. I might need a sign around my neck "Angst-addict"....*Babbles madly*
|
Reviewed By: Korune On: September 11, 2006 07:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooooo love this story!! **squeals in delight** Yeah, I know ya got alot of reviews, but can't ever have to many, ne? Though all I can say is "WOW..." ^_^* I usually never have the patience for long fics, but this one, I do. You're awesomely coolaz! =P Keep up the good work!
|
Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 01:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last two chapters were crazy!! You finally got to the part to introducing Kagura to her nex mate and got a little info on whats been going on at the castle!! Then in the second chapter it was just so intense how stupid Naruka made Inuyasha do things that he didn't want to do!! Stupid Naraku every time I read this story I hate him more and more!!! Anyways I'm just so excited to see what will happen next!!! Can't wait for the next chappy!!!
|
Title: what matters the most
Reviewed By: nique [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 13:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome i want more give me more....but when r they gonna get out of this predicament???? its driving my crazi with the suspense but seriously ur totally awesome with the story and i love all the other ones to.
|
Reviewed By: rin_sama1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 09:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
well that was unexpected.
|
Title: Whoa!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so LOVE this story! It's just AWESOME! I can't wait to read what's next! Don't forget to kill Naraku in the most harshest way possible!~ B reading U!
|
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squee!! yay! you updated!!! >.< aww that chapters such a WAFF and sadly exciting. and yay! for the long chapter!!!! hahaa you should have had some sort of 69ing lemon for chapter 69 lmao XD but that'd be hard to work in.
|
Title: Chapter 70
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 01, 2006 13:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
If you take the chapters you ahve written and put then on 11 point font, times roman, double sided, single spaced - you have written more than 300 pages in this story. WOW! Now for this chapter. I know that you made the comment that Sess would have survived the original wound because Inu did and he was just a Hanyou. BUT It took him days and days. You have indicated that it has taken him minutes to heal from a wound like that. DOn't get me wrong, I'm HAPPY that he survived and all, I just think thatit is a little quick. On the angst front, this has to be one of the biggies. (and that should be with a capital B) Sess knows that Inu isn't *really* attacking him, but it has to be driving him crazy. What horrible stuff is Naraku planning next. Even if you stopped right here and let inupapa and Sess take Inuyasha home, it would take chapters upon chapters to get Inu through even part of the emotional trauma. And HOW are they going to remove that horrible Coller? (or evil piece of shit as I like to call it...) It's locked into his spinal column. The removing of it will cause intense pain and could leave him paralized if it doesn't kill him. And the poison..... Letting the poor dear die and then letting Sess resurrect him might be the most gentle thing. And where is Our sweet Moon baby?!? I'd better stop now....the other nurses are lookign at me and wondering why I'm frowning so much at the computer and muttering about that damn piece of shit around Inu's poor throat. Thanks for writing. I really enjoy this story a whole lot. Caitriona
|
Title: Chapter 69
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 01, 2006 12:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
And here we go back to the castle. I was kinda wondering what was going on with the other two pups. And what is going on with them now that Sess and inupapa have gone to kill, murder, maim, and mutilate Naraku. I am glad that they are doing better from the miasma, though. Now, this deamon that Rin has introduced to Kagura.....will he be in more of this piece or is this just a painful distraction to the angst that is going on somewhere else. A whole chapter that is a cliffie!?!?!
|
Title: Chapter 67
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 01, 2006 12:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't commented on this yet because my coworkers forbid me from reading any more because of this chapter. Little do they realize that I'm not going to listen. You see, at the end of this chapter (67) I was all but screaming and cursing the computer screen. How dare Naraku do something like this to poor Inu. How dare he do it to Sess! The poor little guy is almost dead with exhaustion and dehydration and starvation and Naraku is using him as his puppet? What a wanker! I just wanted to scream at him. I did have some questions though. You mentioned in an earlier chapter that if Inu was gone for too long that Sess's youki would see it as rejection. Didn't him attacking look like rejection? Onto the next chapter!
|
Reviewed By: Tai-san On: September 01, 2006 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy chibi yaoi. That was so awesome. I was almost choking there was so much angst. I almost cried when Inuyasha kept saying he was sorry. I love suffering but I almost can't wait for his torment to end. He deserves peace. I also can't wait to see Naraku get what he deserves the bastard. INSERT EVIL LAUGHTER. The new chapters were kickass extreme. I loves your work. Thanks for the update hope to see more soon. Best wishes and good waves.
|
Reviewed By: Inusesshoumaruluver On: August 31, 2006 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it is awesome please update soon
|
Title: Chappie 68-69
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Soooo, why isn't Kagura helping Naraku? Is there a plot to kidnap the other babies? Forgot about Rin trying to play matchmaker with Kagura. I still don't know who he is. You're a sneaky little wench........ Oh, poor Inuyasha, being controlled to harm his own mate. Sesshoumaru has to get that collar off. I'm glad that Sesshoumaru realizes that it was some other power causing Inuyasha to attack him. I can't wait til Naraku gets a major ass kicking. Inuyasha deserves to be the one to get the killing blow. Maybe UnuTaisho can get the little girl while his sons take care of Naraku. But then again, Sesshoumaru doesn't think he's all that fast. Ooooh, it would be so cool if some of Sesshoumaru's latent abilities came out now! You're too slow, too slow! I want my Naraku ass kicking. *kicks trash can* My Inuyasha puppy needs saved! *mumble mumble mumble, kicks trash can again* LOL Snow
|
Title: MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Trysted Inu Punishment On: August 31, 2006 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gods, that was good. You have talent. I'll write more review later, but right now... I'm not feeling to good. Good update though. I am sooo getting ideas. :D You are good. Keep it going strong for all of us. Thanks again, Avarwen. I sooo love this particular fic. And thanks for the idea with you know what. It helps with a difficult idea. LOL. TIP... I'm going to go and moan in pain now. Ouch.
|
| Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
