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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 › » ] | Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 22, 2006 17:27 EDT
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*looks around nervously* The Ostriches are out to get me, but I can fight them off! And when will Inuyasha be saved? He needs to be, the angst! And I like to wail, wailing is good for the health.
| Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 22, 2006 11:18 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah, yeah, yeah I know that Naraku is sadistic, but the mental image of that horrible collar just pissed me off and made me sad. Usually when you put out a new chapter I will go back and read the last chapter or two just in case it has been a while.....and I was equally saddened. But onto the comments on this chapter. Another excellent one. As I have mentioned before I like the psychological aspects of this piece - and this chapter does a good job of showing Sess's mental processes. His yearning to find even the slightest hint of his mate's scent was very emotional. But I found the fact that he was spending his time asleep to be closer to his mate to be a little disturbing. That is a good sign of clinical depression. The other two babes need him. More on depression later. I'm glad that Kagura is finally helping. Her question about whether he loved Inu or not was interesting.... Now, onto the depression thing. Inu was already having some issues with the birth that could have easily led to postpartum depression - add in this horrible stuff that Naraku is doing to him and he may not be *able* to actively take care of the children when he is eventually rescued. (he is going to be eventually rescued, right? growl) The fact that he is able to breastfeed his little defender may make some difference, but all in all, he is in for some rather hard days ahead. Thanks for writing for us all. Caitriona
| Title: Bitch!
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a fucking bitch. I'm going to wring your neck. My poor Inuyasha. Well I just got a phone call, so I can't really bitch you out right now, but don't worry, I'll get to it. Snowfall
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the new chapter. Don't worry I haven't passout yet, and my babies are doing very well. Even though I'm now state large. Infact, I think I may be declared small country by now -_-. I read your story out loud to them(well some parts of you story anyway.) After 4 previous births, I think we're good to go on this end ^_^! Again thanks for the update, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, yes, quite so. only, most kind of took it the other way- enthralled-ly disgusted... lol. if you consider 'enthralled' to be another word for 'omfg why did you have to tell me that -huff, shudder shudder-'. (girls: too much information, guys: -blush-). about 'naraku', it doesn't really mean 'hell' anymore, but yeah, it meant hell back in the 'good old days'. they seemingly haven't used 'naraku' as hell since, well... just after the feudal era. -everything clicks into place- ...not to scare anyone (again... -worries-) i do read some of the reviews, only because i like to think that i am not the only crazy one in this world. but, yeeeah... hmph. still crazy anyway. =D i've re-read this story a few times over, and i have to say, it gets better every time... meaning it's like WOWWWWWWWWW to the buh jillionth at this point. you scare me with your undying ability to write. (and don't worry, gawsh, i personally don't think that you have lost your ability to write. at all!. so, then... dsfalksj;k!.) -- sorry. kind of venting, long day. well, still love this fanfic, still losing normal habits, and still hoping you update soon! thanks! ^_~
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 20:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good chapter, I hope you update it soon. Yeah you should hold off on your other stories maybe. Well either that just maultitask, that works. Hmm... Sesshomaru should really go after InuYasha. Well should have from the start. Oh well. updates soon.
| Title: wasn't expecting that~~
Reviewed By: FXL [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wasn't expecting to see Kagura in this chapter!! Well atleast she is offering to help!! She better be helping out to get rid of Naraku that evil bastard!! So he feels closer to Inuyasha when he sleeps! I wonder does Inuyasha feels closer to Sesshomaru when he sleeps?? I looked at that website about male lactation!! I tries to tell someone that male can have milk come out of them and they asked me was I sick>_< I'll never tell anyone that again! I think Kikyo is the biggest bitch on Inuyasha she just gets on your nerves and you wanna pull her eyes out. I still think kagome is the most annoying! One think I can't stand most is the cloths she wears! In the fuedal era I can understand why they would wear the same cloth over and over they don't have anything else but Kagome skirt is very short and it makes me wonder.. nothing I'll just say this chapter was a good way to get things rolling and I think the next chapter will be about Inuyasha?? And I didn't know woman broke there pelvis while they are giving birth I learn something new every day!! So great chappy as always and can't wait for the next one!!!
| Reviewed By: cirquegirl999 On: June 15, 2006 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love your fic! I've spent about the last 3 days reading every chapter and I have to say you've done a magnificent job. Your characters don't deviate from the way they act in the show at all, and this is one of the most unique stories I have ever read. I was so excited when things began to work out for Inuyasha and Seshoumaru but now I want to cry for what's happening to Inuyasha. Don't take this as a threat but you have to have Inuyasha rescued soon! I won't be able to continue to read this if he keeps getting hurt!lol Anyway I just had to rant on what a fantastic job you're doing, keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whimper whimper* Poor Inu!!! Oooooooooooohhh, Tsukiko is awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome!!! Ouch... Inu's 'necklace' is evilness much!! Inu's got to be soooooooooo hungry!!! .... uh-oh... no I'm hungry lol!! This fanfiction is soooooooooooooooooooooooooo great!!! so much angst gots to lurv it!! Wooooooooooooooooow, so many chapters... I just now noticed!! lol, I love the fanfiction soooo much. Hmm... No Sessy? That's no fun lmao! Please get to the butt kicking!! Wheeeee!! I think my thoughts on sexiful Naraku have changed... ... ... Only in your fanfiction lmao! Great awesome, brillant, excellant writing and plot and story and whatever else this thing I'm reading is!! Lurvs it toooooooooons!! L8RZ!! (^o^)/~
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: June 12, 2006 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Chibi. The new chapter was freaking kickass extreme. I can't praise it enough. it was really intense and the angst was awesome. Go Tsukiko coming to her father's defense. couldn't be prouder. Is anyone ever going to find them. Love the new chapter bunches as always. can't wait for the next update.
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very...painful to say the least, to read. But it was very good! Hell, I'm jealous of how you write(though you also said that you stay up to all hours of the night to do so!) but very...professional? Still I'd like to take a sword to Naraku's throat and...well let me just stop there! Can't wait till next chapters out! Sincerly, A.D. Williams aka Amanda ps. I've even suggested this story to friends of mine. What does that tell you? ^_^
| Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 12:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are just plain evil. There can be no other explanation. I can't believe what you have done. The whole nursing thing was cool though. I hope that it helps Inu to bond more with Tsukiko. I don't care what you think. Humph! I would so love to see a father's and mate's protectiveness, indignation and rage bring both to fight side by side against a foe that has hurt them both. If one of my children were kidnapped like that and I found the perpetrator, I'd sneak up on them and go right for the throat. No warning, no mercy. A parent's bond with and protectiveness toward a child is not to be underestimated. If you can put a lemon in with Taisho, you could at least make him present in this crisis. So there. Being a parent of five children, I'm not giving up my stance on that point. You have absolutely no idea of the torture conjured, the violent dreams, and the hopeful planning of justice and revenge in a situation like this. I do. Take my word for it. Taisho needs to be just as involved as Sesshoumaru and he needs to get a few strikes in as well. So, that's my staunch opinion. I'm not trying to offend you, just give you my perspective... ^_^... Snow
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 23:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhkay.... well haha about the curtness thing, yeah. i get worse from my friends, so no worries there! lol. well fine listen to the whole goddamn thing see if i care rawr! okay. jk. i'm seriously scaring some people now, ugh, so blargh. and yeah, i don't really think about the whole METAL/NOT METAL thing but it's just this big deal thingy at my POSEUR school. so "fetch." (mean girls... yeah... ... mhhmm.) O____o well. good job so far at kicking inuyasha's ass. mm. and my japanese friend explained to me that "naraku" is technically just old Japanese (eh, from the FEUDAL era, yeaarsh.), and no one NOW uses it. but it makes sense in this context. (sorry, just remembering an entry from a very very very long time ago... like in the beginning chapters or something... = \) thanks!!!!. hope your school year is ending well, and we're not stressing you out toooooo much because of all these comments, etc. (ps: yeah, and thanks for the laughs when my friend who also reads this fanfic explained to the entire science class the facts behind male mammary glands. yeah. -turns beet red at memories... ah...- ohkay well byeee!) =D
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I did take the time out for the necessities of life like eating and sleeping, I have to since I am expecting twins in a couple of months. My husband was kind enough to move the computer to our bedroom so I would have something to do while confined(I'm high risk). Your story is awesome and I always find myself holding my breathe until the end of the chapter. I don't even realize it until after I let it go! I just wanted you to know how great I think your story is, and I am truly enjoying it to the fullest! Oh and 'drawn and quartered' is a medieval form of torture. The person is gets bound by each of their wrists and ankles, and streched until their body is basically torn into 4 large sections. Hince the term 'Drawn and Quartered'. I studied the Medieval ages in High school and my older children are studing Middle Age folklore. Anyway, update soon-keep up the good work!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: June 11, 2006 15:18 EDT
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I may just wail, I think wailing is good in some situations. Those ostriches are cleverer than we think...good film taste too.
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