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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jess. On: October 07, 2006 13:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't normally take so long updating, have you abandoned this story? I hope that's not the case. Even, if you don't update, it would be nice if you could add a comment to your profile or something, so that we know you are ok.
| Title: ookamirin99
Reviewed By: ayuhigurashikinomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muteki-powerful
| Reviewed By: Korune On: September 22, 2006 09:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHH!! No fair, no fair, no fair!!!! **pouts** I want that Naraku bastard to die!! **sighs** Guess I'll just be content in beating the crap out of a plushy doll I have of Naraku... Better yet, PLUSHY DOLL WARS!! **gathers up my small collection of plushy from different anime to jump Naraku** YAY!! I feel better! Can't wait for more of the story! **huggles my Sesshy Plushy** OH! And I can't wait to see how you're going to mend poor Inuyasha, if at all possible. Man... Poor guy... I'll be amazed if he doesn't become catatonic and Sesshy has to spoon feed him everyday and wheel him around on walks. =P
| Title: WHAT MATTERS THE MOST
Reviewed By: nique [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 16:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story but didn't you also write that first part for chapter 69 also?? anyway keep up the good work and write more chapters and stories!!
| Reviewed By: nique [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story but didn't you also write that first part for chapter 69 also?? anyway keep up the good work and write more chapters and stories!!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 09:56 EDT
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After reading what you mentioned and thinking about it, I actually think I understand why Sess didn't see it all as an attack of the bond. You also did a really god job of explaining his thoughts at the beginning of this chapter. I also think that it is completely understandable why Sess finally went off conpletely...I would have. Many fanfiction writers have joked that Tessaiga is the actual star of this manga because so many of the stories were about it's "upgrades." That being said, the star of these last few chapters has been that evil piece of shit collar. I think I read this chapter the morning after you uploaded it. I have spent a considerable ammount of time thinking of ways to remove it. Most of my favorites include dousing it with various bits of Naraku's viscera. Or perhaps dousing it with the last drops of blood that flows from Naraku's no longer bleading heart. Or perhaps it can only come off by Naraku's hands - ripped from his corpse. But then I decided that I was probably being a little too violent. Perhaps Kagome could purify it. Perhaps it will just fall off when Naraku is killed. Perhaps the touch of another of Naraku's blood (such as the forgotten moon child) will cause it to come off. Perhaps Totosai will create a metal band that can be quickly slipped between the POS and Inu's neck and then Sess can melt it with his acid/poison. (I actually kinda liked that one, btw) ***** And then I realized that I would just have to wait and see what you are going to come up with in that sadistic mind of yours. :) Thanks for writing!
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shortness O___O but hehe i love it i can't wait for more! Weee fluffers!! *glomps him* i hope things work out, poor inu and sessh
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shortness O___O but hehe i love it i can't wait for more! Weee fluffers!! *glomps him* i hope things work out, poor inu and sessh
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HII!!!!!!!!!! chappie chappie chappie booo!!!!! (boo as in, not like the Bronx cheer, more like a ghost.) THIS CHAPTER IS AWESOME!!! YAY!!! Hmph... seems like your reason for NOT posting faster (you weren't slow, though, more normal-esque), are the same reasons that I didn't respond... -pouts- Damn school... teachers aren't lacking in brains this year, either, so... (well, except for French... same teacher as last year... and I just told you because you were dying to know, admit it!!! -shakes index finger at poor virtual person on screen-) well this chapter is whee! AWESOME!!! And if this chapter is awesome, then 69 is... um... what's the word I'm looking for... nope, not magnificent... somewhat malevolent, but no... AHAH! LUNKWILL AND FOOK AWESOMELY EXCELLENT!!! ...yeah. (Lunkwill and Fook; The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy... O_O well, they designed the mega smart computer Deep Thought, so they're freaking geniuses... strange, but smart...) Wait, so you're *sure* your legs aren't gelatinous? 'Cause there's this rumour, see, and... well, I don't wanna be the one to break it to you, but people are beginning to assume naturally that your legs are gelatinous... I'm going to stop being obnoxious now. Oh, so *that's* why you're not a comedian? Hmm.. I see now.. -assumes Aristotle ish position and strokes imaginary vampire goatee- (inside joke... a vampire with a goatee thingy? Isn't that a... strange sight?! my point exactly...) Usually I don't apologize for *NOT* being half crazed, but because I'm working on my *math* homework (working... right.. ^__^) right now, I can't be. Math is "wonderfully" time and energy and halfcrazedness consuming...O_O Sorry. Don't know what for? Me neither. If you think I'm somewhat funny when I'm half crazed, I'm usually about only marginally so when I have more of my brain under control... =D SO ANYWAY, yeah, 'bout the authors getting pissed... I mean, I wouldn't get mad if someone was like, KEEP GOING... I would say, 'FWEE! THANKS LOVE YOU!!!', then I'd virtually huggle them... thankfully, I haven't had to do that yet, but... #_# well I'm afraid that this time I *can't* blow up your computer.. -sighs- I know, bummer, sucks doesn't it?! Sheesh... well be happy! I was supposed to go to the *dentist* and instead I stayed home and READ! WHEE!!! No dentist appointment! -shakes head- Not sayin' much, but... yeah... well I was eating this pepper today (don't ask.. my friend carries peppers around with her for lunch everyday... T_T why do I hang out with people like that, you ask? Well, I ask myself the same thing every day... ), and I was thinking about potatoes, and then I got hyper and I looked up how to say 'potato is watching you' in Japanese, and AHH! I COULDN'T FIND IT!!! So I got mad and went looking for it... so yeah... if you find that notebook, or my functioning brain cells, because they've both seem to have gone missing, tell me. (O).(O)... ugh.. well I actually have to complete this homework tonight, so I have to go... ughhhh... math... *wonderful* -coughcoughHATEFULANDMAKINGMEHAVEAFREAKINPANICATTACKcoughcough.. choke cough vomit cough- subject, yes... WELL UPDATE SOON STORY IS WONDEFUL YEAH THIS IS A VERY LONG RUN ON SENTENCE I KNOW... STUPID STUPID HUMANITIES CLASSES -fuming, uh, not so silently- WELL BYEEEEE!!!!!! ~ i u h ~
| Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:33 EDT
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Yes, finally! Sesshy's gonna tear Naraku apart, starting with that stupid little smirk that's always on his ugly face...at least, I hope. Oooooooh, I can't wait to find out what happens. Why is it that everytime it starts getting good, you stop the chapter? It's not fair. Just not fair........*pouts*
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: September 13, 2006 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shite! This newest chapter is freaking awesome. I was choking on angst. I love it. Damn that naraku. Sessho had lost his mind and Inu is down for the count. How the hell will they ever get out to this one. but atleast they finally found each other. Damn that was so cool. Thanks so much for the update. Best wishes and good waves. I LOVES YOUR WORK!!!!!!!!!!! (>^-^
| Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why on earth did you stop him? I am so ready for Naraku to be ripped to shreds it's not funny. But I was wondering what would happen if Sess killed Naraku before he got the collar taken off? Would they be able to get it off later or what? I need blood and not any that belongs to the three inus either. I think enough of their blood ahs been spilt. Where is the baby with all of this going on? And didn't she cry out when Naraku was hurting Inuyasha in the beginning? I know I'm asking crazy questions, but these are the things that go through my mind.
| Reviewed By: Myli On: September 13, 2006 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome but whe will the Kumo DIE!? He is just being a idiot by hurting Inu. A Great Story Though! >>M
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeekkkkk...oh my god you got to update this right away...my heart is pounding and...wow...i dont know what to say it is that good...please update soon...please
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